-----/// Mujhe tadpaayaa naa karo ///----- Hriday

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yun  baat   baat   pe   sabra    ko     mere   tum aazmaayaa naa karo
daastaan - e - mohabbat     mehfilon  me    tum  sunaayaa naa karo

yun   raat   raat  ko   roz  milne    mujhe    tum    bulaayaa naa karo
bulaate    ho    agar    to    duur    rehke   mujhe  sataayaa naa karo

bulaane  pe  tumhaare  aake  tumhe  baahon  me   bhar   loon agar
mere   sparsh   se   phoolon   ki   tarhaa   tum murjhaayaa naa karo

aataa   hoon   kareeb    main   tumhaare   bas   pal   do  pal  ke  liye
dekhke  tumhaare  liye   tadaptaa   mujhe ,  muskuraayaa naa karo

shabnami   hothon   ko   apne   tum  mujhe  chhuu   lene  do zaraaa
ghani   zulfon   se   apne    hothon    ko    yun  chhipaayaa naa karo

aankhon  kaa  jaadu  tumhaaraa  nashe  ki  botal   se    kam   nahee
yun   apni   aankhon   se   mujhe   tum    sharaab  pilaayaa naa karo

tadpaate    ho    har    raat    mujhe  ,  tum  sataate  ho  jee  bhar ke
apni    haseen     adaaon     se    tum  mere  hosh   udaayaa naa karo

rehta   hoon   paas   to  kehte   nahi  kuch, jaane pe pyaar aataa hai
geet mohabbat ke mere khwaabon me aake gungunaayaa naa karo

ek   baar   mere   kareeb   aake    ,   mere   seene   se  lag  jaao  naa
yun   roz   roz   husn    ki    aag     se  mujhe  tum  jalaayaa naa karo

jee   bhar   ke  pyaar  kar  loon   tumhe  main , kuch naa baaki rahe
karta   hai   'Hriday' fariyaad  tumse  , tum use tadpaayaa naa karo


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«Reply #1 on: October 19, 2012, 12:57:48 AM »
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waah waah kamal kaee peshkash ek rau aapke kiye kapil
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«Reply #2 on: October 19, 2012, 02:16:00 AM »
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yun  baat   baat   pe   sabra    ko     mere   tum aazmaayaa naa karo
daastaan - e - mohabbat     mehfilon  me    tum  sunaayaa naa karo

yun   raat   raat  ko   roz  milne    mujhe    tum    bulaayaa naa karo
bulaate    ho    agar    to    duur    rehke   mujhe  sataayaa naa karo

bulaane  pe  tumhaare  aake  tumhe  baahon  me   bhar   loon agar
mere   sparsh   se   phoolon   ki   tarhaa   tum murjhaayaa naa karo

aataa   hoon   kareeb    main   tumhaare   bas   pal   do  pal  ke  liye
dekhke  tumhaare  liye   tadaptaa   mujhe ,  muskuraayaa naa karo

shabnami   hothon   ko   apne   tum  mujhe  chhuu   lene  do zaraaa
ghani   zulfon   se   apne    hothon    ko    yun  chhipaayaa naa karo

aankhon  kaa  jaadu  tumhaaraa  nashe  ki  botal   se    kam   nahee
yun   apni   aankhon   se   mujhe   tum    sharaab  pilaayaa naa karo

tadpaate    ho    har    raat    mujhe  ,  tum  sataate  ho  jee  bhar ke
apni    haseen     adaaon     se    tum  mere  hosh   udaayaa naa karo

rehta   hoon   paas   to  kehte   nahi  kuch, jaane pe pyaar aataa hai
geet mohabbat ke mere khwaabon me aake gungunaayaa naa karo

ek   baar   mere   kareeb   aake    ,   mere   seene   se  lag  jaao  naa
yun   roz   roz   husn    ki    aag     se  mujhe  tum  jalaayaa naa karo

jee   bhar   ke  pyaar  kar  loon   tumhe  main , kuch naa baaki rahe
karta   hai   'Hriday' fariyaad  tumse  , tum use tadpaayaa naa karo


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«Reply #3 on: October 19, 2012, 03:08:59 AM »
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Bahut khoob bahut khoob kya bat hai  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: October 19, 2012, 04:10:41 AM »
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yun  baat   baat   pe   sabra    ko     mere   tum aazmaayaa naa karo
daastaan - e - mohabbat     mehfilon  me    tum  sunaayaa naa karo

Jab tanhaai me us bechaarii ko bolne kaa maukaa nahii dete aap. To kyaa kareN wo bhii bechaarii laachaar hai. Mahfil me kahkar hii apne dil ka gubbaar nikaal leti hai

yun   raat   raat  ko   roz  milne    mujhe    tum    bulaayaa naa karo
bulaate    ho    agar    to    duur    rehke   mujhe  sataayaa naa karo

Aiii laa rooj Date. Unbelievable?
 

bulaane  pe  tumhaare  aake  tumhe  baahon  me   bhar   loon agar
mere   sparsh   se   phoolon   ki   tarhaa   tum murjhaayaa naa karo

Kuch sharam-varam hai kyaa nahi, apne romance ke kisse public ko sunaa rahe ho.
Kuch to sharam karo?

aataa   hoon   kareeb    main   tumhaare   bas   pal   do  pal  ke  liye
dekhke  tumhaare  liye   tadaptaa   mujhe ,  muskuraayaa naa karo

Ak pal me aap uskaa muskuraanaa  kaise dekh lete ho?
Aur ek me wo bechaarii aapki tadap ko kaise jaan saktii hai?

shabnami   hothon   ko   apne   tum  mujhe  chhuu   lene  do zaraaa
ghani   zulfon   se   apne    hothon    ko    yun  chhipaayaa naa karo

Kiss karte hu'ae naak beech me aati hai ye to Aamir Khaan ne bataaya tha.
Ab aap bataa rahe ho ki baal bhii beech me aa jaate hai. Lagta hai aaj-kal Aamir ki movies jayaada dekh rahe ho.

aankhon  kaa  jaadu  tumhaaraa  nashe  ki  botal   se    kam   nahee
yun   apni   aankhon   se   mujhe   tum    sharaab  pilaayaa naa karo

Brothe free me Sharaab mil rahii hai to nakhre kar rahe ho.
Agar usne sharaab pilana band kar diyaa to fir tadapte firnaa.

tadpaate    ho    har    raat    mujhe  ,  tum  sataate  ho  jee  bhar ke
apni    haseen     adaaon     se    tum  mere  hosh   udaayaa naa karo

rehta   hoon   paas   to  kehte   nahi  kuch, jaane pe pyaar aataa hai
geet mohabbat ke mere khwaabon me aake gungunaayaa naa karo

Aaoge jab tum sajnaa angiyaan phool khileNge. Barsege baadal jhoom-jhoom ke. Do dil aese milege.
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Lo bhabhi jii abke ye waala song sunana Kapil bhaai ko.

ek   baar   mere   kareeb   aake    ,   mere   seene   se  lag  jaao  naa
yun   roz   roz   husn    ki    aag     se  mujhe  tum  jalaayaa naa karo

Bas kisii bhii tarah uskaa advantage uthana chaahte ho.

jee   bhar   ke  pyaar  kar  loon   tumhe  main , kuch naa baaki rahe
karta   hai   'Hriday' fariyaad  tumse  , tum use tadpaayaa naa karo
Ek shaandaar kalaam. Parkar bahut achchaa lagaa. Aese hi likhte rahiye

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«Reply #5 on: October 19, 2012, 04:12:21 AM »
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BAhut Khub Kapil Ji Dehroo daad
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«Reply #6 on: October 19, 2012, 05:23:33 AM »
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bahut khoob hriday ji Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 19, 2012, 05:24:34 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai Kapil ji ,great creation. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: October 19, 2012, 06:51:13 AM »
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love4 love4 Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_flower icon_flower Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
mastam mast poem kp.... maza aagaya.....
aur kuch likh bhi diya tuta futa sa ispar....
utna acha nahin jitni achi tumhari poem...
but chalega na....  NaNaNa NaNaNa

Reh reh ke yun bahane banaya na karo
Chup chup rehker tum mujhe jalaya na karo

Chhoti si hai zindagi jee lo na jee bhar ke
Ye keh keh ke tum mujhe uksaayaa na karo

Mere kehne se ate ho roz milne maana magar
Mere na bulane par bhi to kabhi  aa jaya karo

Aakar pas mere  thaam lete ho baahein tum
Sanam aisi besharmi tum dikhaya na karo

Hothon ki baat mere hothon pe hi reh jati hai
Iss tarah dekhkar ishaaron me baitiyaya na karo

Aankhon me hamari  tumhare pyaar ka nasha hai
Ise jaam ka naam dekar tum jaam uthaaya na karo

Har pal rehta hai tere aane ka intezaar sanam
Yun humse ruthhkar tum dil ko jalaya na karo

Ye dard judaai ka ab to humse saha jaata nahin
*KasaK* k dil me ye mithi si kasak uthhaya na karo…!!!



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«Reply #9 on: October 19, 2012, 06:57:33 AM »
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Bohat Khub Hriday Jee!!! Bohat Romance hai aap ki writing mein...

I loved this ashaar...bohat hi pyaara hai..

shabnami hothon ko apne tum mujhe chhuu lene do zaraaa ghani zulfon se apne hothon ko yun chhipaayaa naa karo


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«Reply #10 on: October 19, 2012, 10:43:39 AM »
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Thanks Kasak ji.
asar ab bhi baaki hai... badh gayi hain duuriyaan par wo ehsaas ab bhi baaki hai...at last I am successful ki kuch likhwa paayaa aapse... thanks Kp...tune kaam kar diyaa... itnaa masssttt likhwaayaaa apne Kasak se ki jawaab nahi... wahi jaaadu shabndon kaa, wahi khoobsurti...wahi andaaz-e-bayaan... kuch nahi badlaa... bas ek gear change karne ki deri thi... thanks Kasak ji for this sweet sweet reply.. lijiye aapkaa jawaab haazir hai... aapke naam... aapke reply ke intezaar me aapkaa...Kp... Usual Smile



khaamoshi   ko   mere    tum    bahaana   naa   samajhnaa
dekh  tumhaari   surat    main    kuch   keh   paataa    nahi

tadaptaa   hoon   main   baahon    me  bharne  ko  tumhe
ek  pal  bhi  judaa  hoke tumse   main   reh   paataa   nahi

zindagi   chhoti   hai   maanaa  ,  par   lamhen   kam   nahi
lamhon   ki   judaai    bhi    main    ab   seh    paataa   nahi

aanaa   to   hai   milne   tumse   har   raat   mujhe   magar
din  kaa  main  kyaa   karun  jab   main   mil   paataa  nahi

kehte  ho  mujhe  besharam agar chhoo loon main tumhe
par  kya  karun   tumhe  dekh qaabu  me  reh paataa nahi

kuch   baatein    aisi   hain     tumhaari   aankhon   se  kahi
un  ishaaron  ko  dekh main tumse  duur reh  paataa nahi

aankhon  ke  nashe   ki  to tum   mujhse  baat  naa   karo
pilaate  ho  jaam   aisa  hum   sambhal  ke  reh paate nahi

kab roothe hain hum  tumse, humein  badnaam  naa  karo
bewafaa kaho humein  tum, ye dard hum  seh  paate nahi

meethi  
'Kasak' jo    uth_ti     hai  is 'Hriday' me   aaj    bhi
kyaa  kahen  hum  kisi  se dil   ka   haal  keh   paate    nahi

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kya kahun iske liye shabd nahi hain humaare paas......
jitni bhi taarif ki jaaye kam hogi....... Hats off to you! Hats off to you!
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«Reply #12 on: October 26, 2012, 11:00:59 AM »
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bahut bahut bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji....!!!

waah waah kamal kaee peshkash ek rau aapke kiye kapil
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«Reply #13 on: October 26, 2012, 06:23:00 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Suman ji....!!!

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«Reply #14 on: October 28, 2012, 04:37:15 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Anmol ji....!!!

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