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mkv
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Suno
tumhe kya ho gaya hai
kuch khoye khoye se
kuch soye soye se
kisse baate karte rahte ho
ye kaun hai vahan ?
jiske liye tum
yu'n pareshan ho
pahle to tum aise na they
ghajab ki chaal thi tumhaari
koodte, phaandte
hardam dhadakte
phir ye kya ho gaya tumhe
tumhari chaal badal gayee hai
meri taraf dekho
meri haalat par taras khaao
peela gamgeen chehra
kuch dhoondi ye najrey
sab tumhari vajah se
kya khata hai meree?
mujhe to bataao
tumhe kya hua hai
Mere DIL, Bolo na
mujhe tum pe aitbaar hai.
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«Reply #1 on: March 09, 2012, 02:18:53 PM » |
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bahut ghamgeen hokar kahaa hai shaayad main tumhaaraa dard baant saktaa hai khair aafee sanjeedaa peshkash keep it up
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«Reply #2 on: March 09, 2012, 02:48:19 PM » |
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MKV ji.Bahut khubsurat nazm hai.Dil se
dil ki baat karna bahut mushkil kaam hai.
Aur aap ne ye bahut khubsurti se kiya hai.
Jitni taareef karun kum hai.Meri taraf se
dheron mubarakbaad .Aap khush rahein aur
aapka fun yunhi nikharta rahe. Inhi
duaon ke saath.Hasan
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«Reply #3 on: March 09, 2012, 02:53:22 PM » |
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«Reply #4 on: March 09, 2012, 03:03:29 PM » |
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«Reply #5 on: March 09, 2012, 04:01:14 PM » |
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Suno
tumhe kya ho gaya hai
kuch khoye khoye se
kuch soye soye se
kisse baate karte rahte ho
ye kaun hai vahan ?
jiske liye tum
yu'n pareshan ho
pahle to tum aise na they
ghajab ki chaal thi tumhaari
koodte, phaandte
hardam dhadakte
phir ye kya ho gaya tumhe
tumhari chaal badal gayee hai
meri taraf dekho
meri haalat par taras khaao
peela gamgeen chehra
kuch dhoondi ye najrey
sab tumhari vajah se
kya khata hai meree?
mujhe to bataao
tumhe kya hua hai
Mere DIL, Bolo na
mujhe tum pe aitbaar hai.
bahut bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne mkv... Ek gana yaad aa rha hai.. . 'MERE DIL YE BTA DE TU KIS OR CHLA HAI TU? KYA PAYA NHI TOONE JO DHOONDH RHA HAI TU.. JO HAI ANKAHI JO HAI ANSUNI WO BAAT KYA HAI BTA... MITVA..A..A..A..A KAHE DHADKANE TUJHSE KYA..." |
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«Reply #6 on: March 09, 2012, 05:13:33 PM » |
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beautiful thoughts mkv jee
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«Reply #7 on: March 09, 2012, 05:44:49 PM » |
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bahut khoob mkvji
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«Reply #8 on: March 09, 2012, 06:30:57 PM » |
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«Reply #10 on: March 10, 2012, 02:33:56 AM » |
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mere lie iss nazm ko smjhna kaafi muskil tha pehli baar--
lekin jab smjha to janaab--
bas dil ne kaha waah MKV waah--
bht bht khoob peshkash--
daad daad daad
khus rahen
muskurate rahen--
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jaane kis oar dhyan h
aaj khud se hi anjaan h
teree aawaz na aai mujh tak
na dikhti teri bojhil aankhen
ye gamgeen chera tumhara
inke lie hazaron pareshan hain
halat meri bhi sune koi
na meri ankhen na chehra
na dikhe mera gam kabhi
mujh par dosh laganewale
etvaar h tujhe mujhpar janta hoon--
mere dil se ye aawaz aai
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«Reply #11 on: March 10, 2012, 03:40:06 AM » |
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bahut ghamgeen hokar kahaa hai shaayad main tumhaaraa dard baant saktaa hai khair aafee sanjeedaa peshkash keep it up
Thanks Surendra Sir Koee baat hui to aapko jaroor bataunga.. |
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«Reply #12 on: March 10, 2012, 07:09:02 AM » |
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MKV ji.Bahut khubsurat nazm hai.Dil se
dil ki baat karna bahut mushkil kaam hai.
Aur aap ne ye bahut khubsurti se kiya hai.
Jitni taareef karun kum hai.Meri taraf se
dheron mubarakbaad .Aap khush rahein aur
aapka fun yunhi nikharta rahe. Inhi
duaon ke saath.Hasan
Shukriya Hasan Sir dil khush kar diya aapne.. mera hausla vaakai badh gayaa. |
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mkv
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«Reply #13 on: March 10, 2012, 01:20:50 PM » |
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boht khoob
Thanks saahil ji |
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«Reply #14 on: March 10, 2012, 01:39:01 PM » |
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bahut khoob likha mkv ji aapne...
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on eTI community..
