-----/// Mujhe tumhaaraa ho jaane do ///----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on June 27, 2013, 11:44:23 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 11, 2013, 02:52:00 PM »
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tumne pukara aur hum chale aaye
banke chaandni hum fir muskaaye

bhatak rahe the tanha sehraa me
chhahton ne raah me phool khilaye

ab nahi jayenge kabhi door tumse
hum sare zamane se ye keh aaye...

tum jaisa nahi likh paai kp..... just a try... hope i gain back what hv lost....
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«Reply #16 on: July 11, 2013, 02:55:21 PM »
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ek dum raapchik likhaa hai aapne.... sochne kaaich nahi.. aap likho aur mujhe pasand naa aaye aisaa ho sakta hai kyaa?  masstt likhelaa hai veedu...!!!

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kyun  naa  aaj  fir  se  wahi  puraani  shaam  ho jaaye
hothon pe tumhaare hothon kaa woh jaam  ho jaaye

barastaa  rahe  paani  kuch  is  tarhaa   se  aaj jaanaa
bheeg jaayen hum aur dhadkano ko aaraam ho jaaye

haathon me haath tumhaaraa  leke  baithe rahe hum
ho  kuch  aisaa  ki  zindagi  tumhaare  naam ho jaaye
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«Reply #17 on: July 11, 2013, 03:05:15 PM »
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haan chalo naa aaj ye kaam kiya jaye
sath beetaye lamhon ko fir se jiya jaye

kuch tum kehte raho main sunti rahun
baaton baaton me subah se shaam ho jaye

wo barsaatein wo sardiyan wo supaj ki tapish
unn sab ehsaason ko aaj fir se dohraya jaye

kasak kehti hai uthh uthh ke dil me mere
kyun na dil pe tere fir se raaj kiya jaaye...!!

yupppyyyyyyyyyyyyy.........mastam mast likha hai kp..... maza aagaya a..... howz it kp......
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«Reply #18 on: July 11, 2013, 05:23:05 PM »
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waah waah waah waah kyaa zabardasstt likhelee hai ji... mazaa aa gayaa padh ke.. jaadu laut rahaa hai... bahut achche... ye hui naa aapke type ki chumeshwari poet...
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meraa  dil  to  sadiyon  se tumhaaraa gulaam rahaa hai
hothon pe har lamhaa bas tumhaaraa  naam  rahaa hai

raat jab bhi tum  rahe  ho  meri  baahon me jaane jaan
meri  saanson  ko, meri  dhadkano ko aaraam rahaa hai

jab  tak   tum  saath  rahe  duniyaa  meri tum se hi rahi
tumko hi  chaahte   rehnaa, yahi  meraa kaam rahaa hai

tumse judaa hone pe tumhaari kami kaa  ehsaas huwaa
tumhaare aane  kaa  intezaar subah se  shaam rahaa hai

tumse judaa hoke bhi tumse judaa naa ho paayaa main
'Hriday'  ke   har  geet  mein bas 'Kasak' naam rahaa hai
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«Reply #19 on: August 03, 2013, 02:56:37 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saxena ji.....!!!

Quote from: dksaxenabsnl on June 28, 2013, 12:45:45 AM
Ati Sunder Rachna Pesh Ki hai Hriday ji aapne.
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«Reply #20 on: August 05, 2013, 03:17:19 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Mukesh ji.....!!!

Quote from: mkv on June 28, 2013, 12:50:16 AM
Bahut badhiya Hriday jee
baarish ka ye khshgawaar mausam..aur us par se ye pyar me bheegi peshkash.
wah wah wah
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«Reply #21 on: August 06, 2013, 03:14:38 AM »
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thanks a lot Sheba ji....!!!

Quote from: Sheba on June 28, 2013, 01:05:31 AM
good......!
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«Reply #22 on: August 08, 2013, 03:09:00 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Ravi ji....!!!

Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on June 28, 2013, 01:14:41 AM
Nihayat Hi Khoobsurt Peshqsh Hai.
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«Reply #23 on: August 15, 2013, 02:56:39 AM »
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thank u soo much Bhupinder ji....!!!

Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on June 28, 2013, 02:08:09 AM
Its Beautiful...........
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«Reply #24 on: August 15, 2013, 12:03:11 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Khwahish ji....!!!

Quote from: khwahish on June 28, 2013, 02:11:07 AM

Bahut Bahut Khooob Hriday ji..

Khoobsurat Jazbaat...

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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Ashwani ji....!!!

Quote from: nashwani on June 28, 2013, 03:06:54 AM
waah waah waah laajawaab hriday jee..Kya romantic likha hai..happy9
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saini ji....!!!

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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Sudhir ji....!!!

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bahut bahut shukriyaaa bhaai....!!!

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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on July 11, 2013, 05:23:05 PM
waah waah waah waah kyaa zabardasstt likhelee hai ji... mazaa aa gayaa padh ke.. jaadu laut rahaa hai... bahut achche... ye hui naa aapke type ki chumeshwari poet...
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meraa  dil  to  sadiyon  se tumhaaraa gulaam rahaa hai
hothon pe har lamhaa bas tumhaaraa  naam  rahaa hai

raat jab bhi tum  rahe  ho  meri  baahon me jaane jaan
meri  saanson  ko, meri  dhadkano ko aaraam rahaa hai

jab  tak   tum  saath  rahe  duniyaa  meri tum se hi rahi
tumko hi  chaahte   rehnaa, yahi  meraa kaam rahaa hai

tumse judaa hone pe tumhaari kami kaa  ehsaas huwaa
tumhaare aane  kaa  intezaar subah se  shaam rahaa hai

tumse judaa hoke bhi tumse judaa naa ho paayaa main
'Hriday'  ke   har  geet  mein bas 'Kasak' naam rahaa hai


awesome replyyy KP  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley... maza aagaya padhkar  love4 love4........ par .... sad5 sad5 sad5

jhoote ho tum aur jhuti hai mahobbat teri
mujhe na bhayegi ab koi bhi adaawat teri

mujhse kehte rahe hun main gazlon me teri
na jane kitno ko chhalti rahi banawat teri

gairon ko likhte rahe tum prem geet kai
ab to dekh samjh li maine ye begairat teri

kasak ko dil me chhupake likhte the tum
aaj saamne aagai hai hriday asliyat teri....
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