::Mujhko kya ho gaya hai.....::

by nidhi_yadein on December 22, 2006, 05:07:40 AM
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«Reply #15 on: December 25, 2006, 07:37:54 AM »
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kya likha hai nidhi mindblowing...............
aisa likhne ke baad bhi kehti ho ki "arey ham to bas aise hi likhte "  .......
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«Reply #16 on: December 30, 2006, 03:34:44 AM »
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Mujhko kya ho gaya hai, shayad kuch kho gaya hai,

waise to tune mujhe kabhi pyar kiya nahi,
pur jo ek asha(hope) thi wo bhi dhundla rahi hai.

Tu hai ki aur khubsurat hota jaa raha hai,
tujhe naa pane ke khayal se dil rota jaa raha hai.
Zindagi to meri jeene layak rahi nahi,
pur ab to murna bhi dushvar hota jaa raha hai.
Waise to hum saath me kabhi the nahi,
phir bhi teri judaai ka gum mujhse saha nahi jaa raha hai.
Tere siva mujhe kuch yaad nahi rehta,
tu hai ki meri taref ek baar rukh bhi nahi kurta.


Zindagi to ek sangharsh ho gaye hai,
phir bhi mai jiye jaa raha hun.
Tu ab sirf ek tammna reh gaye hai,
jo mai kiye jaa raha hu.

Tere khawabo ke dur se din me sona chor diya hai,
kyunki din ke khawab kabhi such nahi hote.
Aur raat ko neend ati nahi iss khushi se,
ki khawabo tumse mulaqat hogi,
aise to tumse baat hoti nahi,
khawabo me tumse baat hogi.

Meri yahi halat mujhe yeh sochne pur majbur karti hai..ki
Mujhe kya ho gaya ho gaya hai shayad kuch(tu kahin) kho gaya hai...........
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«Reply #17 on: December 30, 2006, 05:39:28 PM »
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Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"Mujhko kya ho gaya hai,haan kuch to kho gaya hai,
 bechaen si dhadkanein meri pal-pal rehti hain yun,
 tumko chaaha maine kitna,ye jaanti sirf main hoon,
 ankho me neend nahi hai,dil ko ek pal chaen nahi hai,
 lab muskurana bhool gaye,kya se kya ham ho gaye,
 ab to aankhon me aansoo bhi nahi bache.............,
 bikhar gaye rang saare,khwaab jitne bhi thhe rache...


 
 Mujhko kya ho gaya hai,haan bohat kuch kho gaya hai,
 har waqt main tumhe hi sochun,door jaaun bhi to kaise,
 na dil hai lagta kahin ab,na chaen mile kahin mujhko to,
 teri hi yaad sataaye,kyon tum mujhe samajh na paaye,
 tumse door har-pal itna,dilbar mujhse ab raha na jaaye,
 ek baar haath thaam lo,dil se mera naam lo.............,
 har pal khushiyon se bharoon tera,ye dil ka armaan ho...



 Mujhko kya ho gaya hai,haan sab kuch kho gaya hai,
 aankhon me intezaar hai,labon pe tera naam hai,
 teri hi mujhe justajoo,tujhse hi judi meri har aarzoo,
 na jaao door mujhse,jaan ye apni tumpe vaar doon,
 meri sanse tere deedar se chalein,zara samjho dilbar,
 teri hi khushbu se mehke mere jeevan ka har manzar,
 jo tum aaj chale gaye , toh zindagii meri chal basegi,
 in hawaaon me meri mohabbat sadaa fir mehka karegi...



 Mujhko kya ho gaya hai,jeene ka maksad kho gaya hai,
 jo tu kisi aur ka hua,tera nayaa jeevan shuru huaa hai,
 teri khushiyon mein jaane-jaan jal chuki meri chitaa hai,
 zindaa laash bana ye jism mera,duniya bhool chuka hai,
 tujhe akhiri baar jab dekha,nazron me basi wahi tasveer hai,
 har wafa nibhane par bhi tu mera nahi,yahi meri takdeer hai,
 tujhe na bhool paaungi,zindagi tere naam pe bitaaungi....,
 sachcha pyaar kiya hai tujhse,ise zindagi bhar nibhaungi."


excellent nidhi !!!
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«Reply #18 on: December 30, 2006, 10:56:09 PM »
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beautiful nidhi...ending bhi ekdum fit hai!! love it! spcly last two lines..
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«Reply #19 on: December 30, 2006, 11:02:29 PM »
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rely nice nidhiji...and a rely nice reply...ankurji :D:D:D:D:D:D:D
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«Reply #20 on: December 31, 2006, 10:08:01 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya anjani ji.......
kisi ne to humari daastan padhi.....
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«Reply #21 on: January 07, 2007, 07:45:24 AM »
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«Reply #22 on: January 24, 2007, 06:13:26 PM »
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thanx to all my dear friends for appreciation,love u all :D

Very nice ankur,bohat hi deep likha hai,touched my heart sad5 .

"Na jaane kya hua hai mujhko ki ek pal bhi chaen nahi,
      khoye khoye rehte hain har waqt ab to tujhme hi,
      waqt yun beet-ta jaata hai,mere liye to thama rehta hai,
      kaisa tere pyaar ka khumar,mujhko ye kya ho gaya hai."
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«Reply #23 on: January 24, 2007, 06:19:21 PM »
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good one again :D

oyee touched ur heart?Huh??

maine to guddha khoda nahi :lol:  :wink:  :lol:  :wink:
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«Reply #24 on: January 25, 2007, 09:19:47 AM »
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wah nidhi ji... & aap sabhi
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«Reply #25 on: January 27, 2007, 01:52:27 AM »
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Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
thanx to all my dear friends for appreciation,love u all :D

Very nice ankur,bohat hi deep likha hai,touched my heart sad5 .

"Na jaane kya hua hai mujhko ki ek pal bhi chaen nahi,
      khoye khoye rehte hain har waqt ab to tujhme hi,
      waqt yun beet-ta jaata hai,mere liye to thama rehta hai,
      kaisa tere pyaar ka khumar,mujhko ye kya ho gaya hai."


khoye khoye se rehne laghe hain...
uske khwab sajhate rehte hain....

ankhoin mein sharam si hoti hai
labhoon par hassi si chayi hoti hai

raataon ko chand ke saath uska deedar kiya karte hain...
eeh sanam mujhe kya hogaya....hum tujhe mein he khoye rehte hain tongue3
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