----- /// Mujhko tum apna bana lo ///----- klaskar

by klaskar on July 19, 2010, 04:50:18 AM
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ab sahi jaaye na doori,
aao baahon me tum meri,
julfen apni khol do tum,
mujhko unme tum chhupa lo,

raah takte hain tumhaare,
saath kab hoge hamaare,
seene se lag ke haamare,
meri dhadkano ko badha do,

jheel si aankhen tumhaari,
honth madira ke hain pyaale,
bas yahi kehta hoon tumse,
mujhko mujhse tum chula lo,

tumhaare maathe ki wo bindi,
chain loote mere dil ka,
ab na tumse qaraar maangu,
aake mujhe be-qaraar kar do,

hothon ki tapish se apne,
mere hothon ko jala do,
mere baahon me tum aake,
mujhko tum apna bana lo....


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«Reply #1 on: July 19, 2010, 05:30:23 AM »
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uffffffff.....Klaskar ji....romantic mausam me romantic poetry....maza hi kuch aur haipadhne aur likhne ka....kuch hamari taraf se bhi....

aajao baahon me so jao tum .
meri julfon me aaj gum ho jao tum...
main bhar lun teri khushbu saanson me ....
meri ruuh me utar jao tum

chhu lo inn hothon ko apne hothon se....
jhum lo mujhe leke baahon me...
karlo kareeb apne iss kadar tum...
jan na paye koi kaun hai hum kaun ho tum

inn aankhon me jhankon sanam
meri dhadkannon ko badhao tum...
har saans keh rahi pyaar hai tumse...
mujhe sanam apna banalo tum

hamari dil ki baatein yun na zaaya karo
kuch mere jazbaat samjho tum....
durr hain badi der se tumse hum...
sahi nahin jati tumse ye duri sanam
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«Reply #2 on: July 19, 2010, 09:18:31 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on July 19, 2010, 04:50:18 AM
ab sahi jaaye na doori,
aao baahon me tum meri,
julfen apni khol do tum,
mujhko unme tum chhupa lo,

raah takte hain tumhaare,
saath kab hoge hamaare,
seene se lag ke haamare,
meri dhadkano ko badha do,

jheel si aankhen tumhaari,
honth madira ke hain pyaale,
bas yahi kehta hoon tumse,
mujhko mujhse tum chula lo,

tumhaare maathe ki wo bindi,
chain loote mere dil ka,
ab na tumse qaraar maangu,
aake mujhe be-qaraar kar do,

hothon ki tapish se apne,
mere hothon ko jala do,
mere baahon me tum aake,
mujhko tum apna bana lo....


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«Reply #3 on: July 19, 2010, 09:19:14 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 19, 2010, 05:30:23 AM
uffffffff.....Klaskar ji....romantic mausam me romantic poetry....maza hi kuch aur haipadhne aur likhne ka....kuch hamari taraf se bhi....

aajao baahon me so jao tum .
meri julfon me aaj gum ho jao tum...
main bhar lun teri khushbu saanson me ....
meri ruuh me utar jao tum

chhu lo inn hothon ko apne hothon se....
jhum lo mujhe leke baahon me...
karlo kareeb apne iss kadar tum...
jan na paye koi kaun hai hum kaun ho tum

inn aankhon me jhankon sanam
meri dhadkannon ko badhao tum...
har saans keh rahi pyaar hai tumse...
mujhe sanam apna banalo tum

hamari dil ki baatein yun na zaaya karo
kuch mere jazbaat samjho tum....
durr hain badi der se tumse hum...
sahi nahin jati tumse ye duri sanam
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«Reply #4 on: July 19, 2010, 11:45:45 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on July 19, 2010, 09:18:31 AM
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«Reply #5 on: July 19, 2010, 11:48:49 AM »
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sach kahaa aapne Kasak ji... romantic mausam me romantic kavitaayein likhne ka aur padhne ka mazaa hi kuch aur hai... aur bahut khoob likha hai aapne... aur aapka likha padh ke aisa lag raha hai jaise hum jannat me ho... bahut bahut madhoshi bhara hai aapka lekh.. bahut khoob...!!!

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tod do bandhano ko saare,
bediyon ko khol do tum,
rasme saari todake aaj,
baahein faila lo zaraa tum,

pyaar me kho ke mere tum,
jhoom lo ban morni tum,
ye ghatayein baras jaayein,
bheeg lo unme zaraa tum,

adhkhule hontho se apne,
mere hothon ko bheego do,
apni saanso ke mehek se,
meri saanso ko mehka do,

tod ke saari deewarein,
aaj ban jao mere tum,
khud ko bhi tum bhul jaao,
baahon me aake mere tum,

pyaar ka mausam hai aaya,
saath me khushiyaan wo laya,
ab zaraa tum muskuralo,
zindagi ji lo zaraa tum...


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«Reply #6 on: July 19, 2010, 09:18:15 PM »
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Manbhawan kavita hai kapil ji aur Manbhawan hi reply hai apka kasak ji....wakayi mein aaj delhi ka mausam bahut hi ashiqana hai koi bhi apne hosh gawa de aese mausam mein,amgar lafzo mein hosh gawane ka mazaa hi kuch aur hai..keep writng...
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«Reply #7 on: July 20, 2010, 01:58:29 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji... sach kahaa aapne lafzon me hosh gawane ka maza hi kuch aur hai... soch hamaari kahaan kahaan tak jaa sakti hai ye shabdon se hi pata chalta hai... kavita bas ek maadhyam hai apne ehsason ko shabdon me bayan karne ka ...!!! Usual Smile

Quote from: brokenbyluv on July 19, 2010, 09:18:15 PM
Manbhawan kavita hai kapil ji aur Manbhawan hi reply hai apka kasak ji....wakayi mein aaj delhi ka mausam bahut hi ashiqana hai koi bhi apne hosh gawa de aese mausam mein,amgar lafzo mein hosh gawane ka mazaa hi kuch aur hai..keep writng...
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Aaye Haye.. Kya Baat hai Kapil Bhai.. behad Rumaani Rachna Pesh Ki Hai aapne.. Mohabbat Bhare Ehasaason ko Lafzon Me Uthi hi Mohabbat Ke Sath Aapne Utaara Hai... Very Romantic.. Applause Applause

Anamika ji aapne Bhi Kapil Bhai Ka Poora Sath diya hai.. Bahut Khooob.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #9 on: July 20, 2010, 09:00:36 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Mann ji... main tahe dil se aapka shukriya adaa karta hoon...!!!!

Quote from: Mann on July 20, 2010, 03:05:03 PM
Aaye Haye.. Kya Baat hai Kapil Bhai.. behad Rumaani Rachna Pesh Ki Hai aapne.. Mohabbat Bhare Ehasaason ko Lafzon Me Uthi hi Mohabbat Ke Sath Aapne Utaara Hai... Very Romantic.. Applause Applause

Anamika ji aapne Bhi Kapil Bhai Ka Poora Sath diya hai.. Bahut Khooob.. Applause Applause



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