Mujse mat pooch ki kyun aankh jhuka li maine,

by Satya.patel on December 18, 2008, 05:28:23 PM
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Mujse mat pooch ki kyun aankh jhuka li maine,
teri tasveer thi jo tujhse chupa li maine,

jis pe likha tha ki tu mere muqaddar mein nahi,
apne maathe ki woh tehreer mita li meine,

har janm sabko yahaan sachha pyaar kahaan milta hai,
teri chaahat mein to umr bita li meine,

mujhko jaane kahaan ehsaas mere le jaayein,
waqt ke haathon se ek nazm utha li meine,

ghere rehti hai mujhe ek anokhi khushbu,
teri yaadon se har ek saans saja li meine,

jiske sheron ko woh sunke bahut roya tha,
bas wohi ek ghazal sabse chupa li meine.
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«Reply #1 on: December 18, 2008, 05:44:47 PM »
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Wah ! Kamaal ka likha hai Satya Ji
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«Reply #2 on: December 19, 2008, 04:10:25 AM »
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my god bahut khoobsoorat likha hai keep it up heart touching
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«Reply #3 on: December 19, 2008, 04:13:48 AM »
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Quote from: Satya.patel on December 18, 2008, 05:28:23 PM
Mujse mat pooch ki kyun aankh jhuka li maine,
teri tasveer thi jo tujhse chupa li maine,

jis pe likha tha ki tu mere muqaddar mein nahi,
apne maathe ki woh tehreer mita li meine,

har janm sabko yahaan sachha pyaar kahaan milta hai,
teri chaahat mein to umr bita li meine,

mujhko jaane kahaan ehsaas mere le jaayein,
waqt ke haathon se ek nazm utha li meine,

ghere rehti hai mujhe ek anokhi khushbu,
teri yaadon se har ek saans saja li meine,

jiske sheron ko woh sunke bahut roya tha,
bas wohi ek ghazal sabse chupa li meine.

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aapke sheron ka koi saani nahi satya ji,aapne jo kuch likha hein,sahi maayne mein shaayri hein.ek ek pankti kamaal kar jaati hein.ucch koti ki panktiyaan,behtareen,behtareen!!
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«Reply #4 on: December 19, 2008, 04:18:12 AM »
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bahoot khoob satya ji
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«Reply #5 on: December 19, 2008, 05:33:38 AM »
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satya ji  wonderful creation  Applause
keep writing like this
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«Reply #6 on: December 19, 2008, 07:10:37 AM »
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rajesh bhai, gurinder ji, prateek ji, pooja ji, bhawna ji,
shukriya, aapko pasand aayi  ye khushnaseebi Hamari..
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«Reply #7 on: December 19, 2008, 10:36:04 AM »
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bahut accha likha aapne satya ji....dil ko cho gaya....
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«Reply #8 on: December 19, 2008, 12:38:53 PM »
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Quote from: Satya.patel on December 18, 2008, 05:28:23 PM
Mujse mat pooch ki kyun aankh jhuka li maine,
teri tasveer thi jo tujhse chupa li maine,

jis pe likha tha ki tu mere muqaddar mein nahi,
apne maathe ki woh tehreer mita li meine,

har janm sabko yahaan sachha pyaar kahaan milta hai,
teri chaahat mein to umr bita li meine,

mujhko jaane kahaan ehsaas mere le jaayein,
waqt ke haathon se ek nazm utha li meine,

ghere rehti hai mujhe ek anokhi khushbu,
teri yaadon se har ek saans saja li meine,

jiske sheron ko woh sunke bahut roya tha,
bas wohi ek ghazal sabse chupa li meine.

bahut hi badiya kaha hai aap neh sATYA
koi jawaab nahi aap ka.



SAPNOH KOH BHI ABB TOH PATA NAHI HOTA
SAPNOH SEY KHUSHBOO CHURA LI MAINEY

DHADKANEY ABB TOH CHALA NAHI KARTI
DHADKANOH KI JAAN CHURA LI MAINEY

JUDA HO JAYE MUKADDAR SEY MERE
KHUDA KI WOH KALAM CHURA LI MAINEY



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«Reply #9 on: December 20, 2008, 03:11:01 PM »
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shukriya fairy ji,

or jasbir ji aapne bahut acha likha hai..
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«Reply #10 on: December 20, 2008, 08:10:02 PM »
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Quote from: Satya.patel on December 20, 2008, 03:11:01 PM
shukriya fairy ji,

or jasbir ji aapne bahut acha likha hai..

THANKS SATYA


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«Reply #11 on: December 21, 2008, 03:13:46 AM »
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Satya ji,

Main aap se fir se nivedan karna chahunga,ki aap apni saari posts check kare, aur jin logon ki yeh mehnat hein unhe samman ka adhikaari ban-ne de. Aur ek baat aur,yadi aap inhe''Not Mine'' kehkar bhee likhenge to bhee taareefein aapko milengi,aur agar yeh baad mein pata lagta hein..to aapki chavi hum sub ke hriday mein dhumil ho jaati hein...

Prateek
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«Reply #12 on: December 21, 2008, 08:54:37 AM »
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Quote from: Satya.patel on December 19, 2008, 07:10:37 AM
rajesh bhai, gurinder ji, prateek ji, pooja ji, bhawna ji,
shukriya, aapko pasand aayi  ye khushnaseebi Hamari..

Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 21, 2008, 03:13:46 AM
Satya ji,

Main aap se fir se nivedan karna chahunga,ki aap apni saari posts check kare, aur jin logon ki yeh mehnat hein unhe samman ka adhikaari ban-ne de. Aur ek baat aur,yadi aap inhe''Not Mine'' kehkar bhee likhenge to bhee taareefein aapko milengi,aur agar yeh baad mein pata lagta hein..to aapki chavi hum sub ke hriday mein dhumil ho jaati hein...

Prateek

Baat kuch samaj nahi aa rahi ek taraf sabne Satya ki tareef ki aur Satya ne acknowledge bhi kiya aur dusri taraf Prateek jee ki yeh comment.
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«Reply #13 on: December 21, 2008, 01:02:24 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 21, 2008, 08:54:37 AM
Baat kuch samaj nahi aa rahi ek taraf sabne Satya ki tareef ki aur Satya ne acknowledge bhi kiya aur dusri taraf Prateek jee ki yeh comment.


main bhi nahi samaj paa raha hu Ghayel
agar yeh Satya ka kalaam nahi hai fir bhi bahut badiya hai, jisney bhi likha hai.


Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #14 on: December 21, 2008, 01:38:54 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on December 21, 2008, 01:02:24 PM

main bhi nahi samaj paa raha hu Ghayel
agar yeh Satya ka kalaam nahi hai fir bhi bahut badiya hai, jisney bhi likha hai.


Jasbir Singh




oye jasbire tu bada bhola hain arey yaaar yaha baat yeh hain ke agar yeh satya ka kalam nahi hain to y he is acknowledging. Ab tak use bata dena chahiye tha ke yeh kalam uska nahi hain its mean that he is lying aur ab uski har post pe doubt hain muje, lagta hain aajkal monitor apna kam theek se nahi kar rahe hain unko retire karke muje aur tuje monitor hona chahiye. Giggle
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