!!!..Mukaam ban jaao..!!!

by nashwani on October 09, 2013, 09:11:21 PM
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Oochaaiya.N chaahe kitni bhi paa le koi zindagi me,,
Uss hath ka rehta intezar sada jo girne pe sath de sake..

Kore kaagaz pe likhi, tum syaahi ban jaao,,
Raasta hai ye khali sa, iske raahi ban jaao..
Tum se hi sab arzoo, tum hi ho kasak meri,,
To phir tum hi kyu na mere ilaahi ban jaao..

Aise aao samne ki naino.N ki pyas ban jaao,,
Ghul kar aaj khare pani ki mithas ban jaao..
Shabdo ka tana bana yaha thik nahi aajkal,,
Ghazal likh saku.N koi, wo ehsaas ban jaao..

Meri tanha jagti raato.N ka saath ban jaao,,
Mere haatho.N ko thaamta haath ban jaao..
Apne waqt se mujhe, kuch aisa nawazo ki,,
Labo.N pe ayi mere, tum har baat ban jaao..

Suraj mai tumhara, tum meri sham ban jaao,,
Aazad rehne do khud ko na gulaam ban jaao..
Aane waale janamo.N kaa karu.N yaki kaise,,
Is zindagi ka hi kyu na mukaam ban jaao..!!! Ñ
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«Reply #1 on: October 09, 2013, 09:14:34 PM »
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Quote from: nashwani on October 09, 2013, 09:11:21 PM
Oochaaiya.N chaahe kitni bhi paa le koi zindagi me,,
Uss hath ka rehta intezar sada jo girne pe sath de sake..

Kore kaagaz pe likhi, tum syaahi ban jaao,,
Raasta hai ye khali sa, iske raahi ban jaao..
Tum se hi sab arzoo, tum hi ho kasak meri,,
To phir tum hi kyu na mere ilaahi ban jaao..

Aise aao samne ki naino.N ki pyas ban jaao,,
Ghul kar aaj khare pani ki mithas ban jaao..
Shabdo ka tana bana yaha thik nahi aajkal,,
Ghazal likh saku.N koi, wo ehsaas ban jaao..

Meri tanha jagti raato.N ka saath ban jaao,,
Mere haatho.N ko thaamta haath ban jaao..
Apne waqt se mujhe, kuch aisa nawazo ki,,
Labo.N pe ayi mere, tum har baat ban jaao..

Suraj mai tumhara, tum meri sham ban jaao,,
Aazad rehne do khud ko na gulaam ban jaao..
Aane waale janamo.N kaa karu.N yaki kaise,,
Is zindagi ka hi kyu na mukaam ban jaao..!!! Ñ
waah waah waah be had khoob kalaam nashwani ji,.......
bohat c daad khubsurat khyalat ke liye,.............
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«Reply #2 on: October 09, 2013, 09:18:26 PM »
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waah waah waah be had khoob kalaam nashwani ji,.......
bohat c daad khubsurat khyalat ke liye,.............

Pasand karne ka bahut bahut shukriya aapka laaiba jee..happy9 happy9
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«Reply #3 on: October 09, 2013, 09:24:52 PM »
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waah waah waah be had khoob kalaam nashwani ji,.......
bohat c daad khubsurat khyalat ke liye,.............
Kya bat ahai,Bahut Khoob.!!
Ashwani Jee.!!
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«Reply #5 on: October 09, 2013, 10:56:29 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: October 09, 2013, 10:58:09 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: October 09, 2013, 11:24:45 PM »
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Quote from: nashwani on October 09, 2013, 09:11:21 PM
Oochaaiya.N chaahe kitni bhi paa le koi zindagi me,,
Uss hath ka rehta intezar sada jo girne pe sath de sake..

Kore kaagaz pe likhi, tum syaahi ban jaao,,
Raasta hai ye khali sa, iske raahi ban jaao..
Tum se hi sab arzoo, tum hi ho kasak meri,,
To phir tum hi kyu na mere ilaahi ban jaao..

Aise aao samne ki naino.N ki pyas ban jaao,,
Ghul kar aaj khare pani ki mithas ban jaao..
Shabdo ka tana bana yaha thik nahi aajkal,,
Ghazal likh saku.N koi, wo ehsaas ban jaao..

Meri tanha jagti raato.N ka saath ban jaao,,
Mere haatho.N ko thaamta haath ban jaao..
Apne waqt se mujhe, kuch aisa nawazo ki,,
Labo.N pe ayi mere, tum har baat ban jaao..

Suraj mai tumhara, tum meri sham ban jaao,,
Aazad rehne do khud ko na gulaam ban jaao..
Aane waale janamo.N kaa karu.N yaki kaise,,
Is zindagi ka hi kyu na mukaam ban jaao..!!! Ñ
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«Reply #8 on: October 09, 2013, 11:32:04 PM »
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Aise aao samne ki naino.N ki pyas ban jaao,,
Ghul kar aaj khare pani ki mithas ban jaao..
Shabdo ka tana bana yaha thik nahi aajkal,,
Ghazal likh saku.N koi, wo ehsaas ban jaao..


behad khoobsurat ehsaas hain tumhare.. ye lines mujhe bahot acchi lagin... likhti raho

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«Reply #9 on: October 09, 2013, 11:32:40 PM »
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Quote from: nashwani on October 09, 2013, 09:11:21 PM
Oochaaiya.N chaahe kitni bhi paa le koi zindagi me,,
Uss hath ka rehta intezar sada jo girne pe sath de sake..

Kore kaagaz pe likhi, tum syaahi ban jaao,,
Raasta hai ye khali sa, iske raahi ban jaao..
Tum se hi sab arzoo, tum hi ho kasak meri,,
To phir tum hi kyu na mere ilaahi ban jaao..

Aise aao samne ki naino.N ki pyas ban jaao,,
Ghul kar aaj khare pani ki mithas ban jaao..
Shabdo ka tana bana yaha thik nahi aajkal,,
Ghazal likh saku.N koi, wo ehsaas ban jaao..

Meri tanha jagti raato.N ka saath ban jaao,,
Mere haatho.N ko thaamta haath ban jaao..
Apne waqt se mujhe, kuch aisa nawazo ki,,
Labo.N pe ayi mere, tum har baat ban jaao..

Suraj mai tumhara, tum meri sham ban jaao,,
Aazad rehne do khud ko na gulaam ban jaao..
Aane waale janamo.N kaa karu.N yaki kaise,,
Is zindagi ka hi kyu na mukaam ban jaao..!!! Ñ


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«Reply #10 on: October 10, 2013, 12:01:35 AM »
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Khoobsurat nazm

bahut mubarakbad

Oochaaiya.N chaahe kitni bhi paa le koi zindagi me,,
Uss hath ka rehta intezar sada jo girne pe sath de sake..
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«Reply #11 on: October 10, 2013, 12:22:13 AM »
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WAAH, KHUBSURAT RACHNA HAI.

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WaaH WaaH Ashwaniji Behad Khoobsurat aur pyar bhare ehsaas k saath, umda.....
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«Reply #13 on: October 10, 2013, 02:49:46 AM »
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Oochaaiya.N chaahe kitni bhi paa le koi zindagi me,,
Uss hath ka rehta intezar sada jo girne pe sath de sake..  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Kore kaagaz pe likhi, tum syaahi ban jaao,,
Raasta hai ye khali sa, iske raahi ban jaao..
Tum se hi sab arzoo, tum hi ho kasak meri,,
To phir tum hi kyu na mere ilaahi ban jaao..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Aise aao samne ki naino.N ki pyas ban jaao,,
Ghul kar aaj khare pani ki mithas ban jaao..
Shabdo ka tana bana yaha thik nahi aajkal,,
Ghazal likh saku.N koi, wo ehsaas ban jaao..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Meri tanha jagti raato.N ka saath ban jaao,,
Mere haatho.N ko thaamta haath ban jaao..
Apne waqt se mujhe, kuch aisa nawazo ki,,
Labo.N pe ayi mere, tum har baat ban jaao..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Suraj mai tumhara, tum meri sham ban jaao,,
Aazad rehne do khud ko na gulaam ban jaao..
Aane waale janamo.N kaa karu.N yaki kaise,,
Is zindagi ka hi kyu na mukaam ban jaao..!!! Ñ

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«Reply #14 on: October 10, 2013, 02:55:04 PM »
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Waaaaaaah Ashwani har baar ki tarah behtareen peshkash.. khaaas kar yeh lines behad pasand aaye.. likhte raho... dheron daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad..

Aise aao samne ki naino.N ki pyas ban jaao,,
Ghul kar aaj khare pani ki mithas ban jaao..
Shabdo ka tana bana yaha thik nahi aajkal,,
Ghazal likh saku.N koi, wo ehsaas ban jaao..

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