===MulaaQaat=== {angel}

by angel4u on April 28, 2009, 04:27:59 PM
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Kal Halki Si Barsaat Mein Ho Gayi MulaaQat Unse,
Nazron Ki Shabnam Ne Jaise Kar Li Ho Har Baat Unse,

Unki Aankhon Mein Thi Aisi Kashish Ke Kya Kahein,
Mere Jism Ke Rom Rom Ne Kar Li Mohabbat Unse,

Masoom Hai Kuch Is Qadar Unki Chhuwan Ka Ehsaas,
Aakhir Ek Mod Par Kar Li Meri Haya Ne Hararat Unse,

Palkon Ke Parde Mein Karwat Leti Thi Kuch Paak Khataye,
Meri Muskurahat Ne Kar Hi Li Ho Jaise Shararat Unse,

Gaane Lagi Unki Khamoshi Kuch Aise Haseen Nagme,
Sambhle Na Jaate The Shayad Apne Khayalaat Unse,

Mera Aanchal Bhi Karne Laga Kyon Bewafayi Mujhse,
Chhuda Ke Mere Haathon Ki Zameen Gaya Lipat Unse,

Boondon Mein Baras Raha Ho Jaise Aasmaan Se Pyar Beshumar,
Kuch Khamosh Se Sawalon Ke Mil Gaye Ho Jawaabaat Unse...
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«Reply #1 on: April 28, 2009, 04:35:15 PM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley   wow!!! toooooo good Angel
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«Reply #2 on: April 28, 2009, 04:37:09 PM »
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Thank You Soo much Di...
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«Reply #3 on: April 28, 2009, 06:18:35 PM »
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Wah Wah Wah!! Bahut Khoob Angel!!
Ishq Ke Khumar Mein Dooba Hua Kalam..Bahut ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: April 28, 2009, 06:32:34 PM »
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Bahaut khoob Angel di...Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: April 28, 2009, 10:59:16 PM »
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Kal Halki Si Barsaat Mein Ho Gayi MulaaQat Unse,
Nazron Ki Shabnam Ne Jaise Kar Li Ho Har Baat Unse,

Unki Aankhon Mein Thi Aisi Kashish Ke Kya Kahein,
Mere Jism Ke Rom Rom Ne Kar Li Mohabbat Unse,

Masoom Hai Kuch Is Qadar Unki Chhuwan Ka Ehsaas,
Aakhir Ek Mod Par Kar Li Meri Haya Ne Hararat Unse,

Palkon Ke Parde Mein Karwat Leti Thi Kuch Paak Khataye,
Meri Muskurahat Ne Kar Hi Li Ho Jaise Shararat Unse,

Gaane Lagi Unki Khamoshi Kuch Aise Haseen Nagme,
Sambhle Na Jaate The Shayad Apne Khayalaat Unse,

Mera Aanchal Bhi Karne Laga Kyon Bewafayi Mujhse,
Chhuda Ke Mere Haathon Ki Zameen Gaya Lipat Unse,

Boondon Mein Baras Raha Ho Jaise Aasmaan Se Pyar Beshumar,
Kuch Khamosh Se Sawalon Ke Mil Gaye Ho Jawaabaat Unse...


bhut khoob angel ji.............bhut hi achay.......
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«Reply #6 on: April 29, 2009, 02:40:21 AM »
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Wah Wah Wah!! Bahut Khoob Angel!!
Ishq Ke Khumar Mein Dooba Hua Kalam..Bahut ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


:D
thanks Khwaish Ji...
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«Reply #7 on: April 29, 2009, 02:40:48 AM »
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Bahaut khoob Angel di...Applause Applause

Thanks Rahim
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«Reply #8 on: April 29, 2009, 02:41:11 AM »
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bhut khoob angel ji.............bhut hi achay.......

Shukriya
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«Reply #9 on: April 29, 2009, 04:51:12 PM »
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Kal Halki Si Barsaat Mein Ho Gayi MulaaQat Unse,
Nazron Ki Shabnam Ne Jaise Kar Li Ho Har Baat Unse,

Unki Aankhon Mein Thi Aisi Kashish Ke Kya Kahein,
Mere Jism Ke Rom Rom Ne Kar Li Mohabbat Unse,

Masoom Hai Kuch Is Qadar Unki Chhuwan Ka Ehsaas,
Aakhir Ek Mod Par Kar Li Meri Haya Ne Hararat Unse,

Palkon Ke Parde Mein Karwat Leti Thi Kuch Paak Khataye,
Meri Muskurahat Ne Kar Hi Li Ho Jaise Shararat Unse,

Gaane Lagi Unki Khamoshi Kuch Aise Haseen Nagme,
Sambhle Na Jaate The Shayad Apne Khayalaat Unse,

Mera Aanchal Bhi Karne Laga Kyon Bewafayi Mujhse,
Chhuda Ke Mere Haathon Ki Zameen Gaya Lipat Unse,

Boondon Mein Baras Raha Ho Jaise Aasmaan Se Pyar Beshumar,
Kuch Khamosh Se Sawalon Ke Mil Gaye Ho Jawaabaat Unse...


Wooooow superb dear angel....Bahut pyara kalam likha hai aapne.

" Kal Halki Si Barsaat.....wow garmi k din mein aapka likha yeh shayri
padkar bahut accha laga dear. Good work. Daad kabul kariyega.
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«Reply #10 on: April 29, 2009, 04:54:20 PM »
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Thanks so much dear..
bas maine to yunhi likh diya tha, i didnt knew would get such a response..
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«Reply #11 on: April 29, 2009, 08:50:27 PM »
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Kal Halki Si Barsaat Mein Ho Gayi MulaaQat Unse,
Nazron Ki Shabnam Ne Jaise Kar Li Ho Har Baat Unse,

Unki Aankhon Mein Thi Aisi Kashish Ke Kya Kahein,
Mere Jism Ke Rom Rom Ne Kar Li Mohabbat Unse,

Masoom Hai Kuch Is Qadar Unki Chhuwan Ka Ehsaas,
Aakhir Ek Mod Par Kar Li Meri Haya Ne Hararat Unse,

Palkon Ke Parde Mein Karwat Leti Thi Kuch Paak Khataye,
Meri Muskurahat Ne Kar Hi Li Ho Jaise Shararat Unse,

Gaane Lagi Unki Khamoshi Kuch Aise Haseen Nagme,
Sambhle Na Jaate The Shayad Apne Khayalaat Unse,

Mera Aanchal Bhi Karne Laga Kyon Bewafayi Mujhse,
Chhuda Ke Mere Haathon Ki Zameen Gaya Lipat Unse,

Boondon Mein Baras Raha Ho Jaise Aasmaan Se Pyar Beshumar,
Kuch Khamosh Se Sawalon Ke Mil Gaye Ho Jawaabaat Unse...


Very beautiful....Waqai bohot achcha likha hai Angel, Bohot Khoob dear !
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«Reply #12 on: April 29, 2009, 09:01:40 PM »
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Bohat Achche Huzaina Sis,.
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«Reply #13 on: May 01, 2009, 02:25:02 PM »
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Very beautiful....Waqai bohot achcha likha hai Angel, Bohot Khoob dear !

Thank you so much Talat.
Its always a pleasure getting a comment from you Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: May 01, 2009, 02:25:20 PM »
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Bohat Achche Huzaina Sis,.

Bahut bahut Shukriya Bro.. Usual Smile
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