===MulaaQaat=== {angel}

by angel4u on April 28, 2009, 04:27:59 PM
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angel4u
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«Reply #15 on: May 01, 2009, 02:27:02 PM »
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Us mulaqaat ka asar aaj bhi hai meri nass nass mein,
kehne lage hai kuch mere khamosh jazbaat unse,

chal na phir se aisa manzar banaye mulaqaaton ka,
ke na reh paaye wo door humse, na hum unse...
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Roja
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«Reply #16 on: May 01, 2009, 02:28:47 PM »
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Thanks so much dear..
bas maine to yunhi likh diya tha, i didnt knew would get such a response..

mai kehti thi na... tum bahut accha likhti ho karke...
ab aur likha karo aisa hi...
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angel4u
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«Reply #17 on: May 01, 2009, 02:31:03 PM »
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Hmmm lets see likh paati hoon ke nahi Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: May 01, 2009, 03:06:53 PM »
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Bahoot hi khoob likha hai . ak dum jakaas! yuhin likhit raha karo.. aur roja ne sach kaha Tum bahoot bahoot acha likhti hun.. ok

Roja very Good lines Dear...Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: May 01, 2009, 04:30:31 PM »
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ye achha laga mujhe tapori language me taarif tongue3
thanks re koshish karungi hamesha aise hi likhneki, par thoda mushkil hia Laughing hard
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