Mushkurakar paas se.... mann

by mann.mann on February 14, 2012, 04:51:53 AM
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Mushkurakar paas se wo jab guzar gaya.
Khushbu se uski dil ka har kona sanwar gaya.

Usne jo ek nazar dekha tha chalte chalte,
Us ek nazar ka dekho dil tak asar gaya.

Uska khyal aaya khili dhoop ki tarah,
Dil phool sa khila aur khilkar bikhar gaya.

Uski yadon ke par jabse khyalon ko lage hain,
Ab tak to tha yahin dil jane kidhar gaya.

Aawaz main uski "mann" talwaar si khanak thi,
Khanzar tha dhardaar dil main utar gaya.

mann
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«Reply #1 on: February 14, 2012, 05:05:46 AM »
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Mann ji bahut hee nape tule andaaz men bahut hee pyaaraa dil ko lubhaane waalaa kalaam. aap jaise kam hee log hain jo is pukhtagee se kalaam pesh karte hain bahut bahut mubaarak meree dili daad qubool karen.
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«Reply #2 on: February 14, 2012, 05:08:29 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #3 on: February 14, 2012, 05:13:47 AM »
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bahut bahut aur bahut shukriya janab sainiji... bas sir aap jaise bade aur umda shayron ko padh kar hame bhi kuch hausla mil jata hai likhne ka.. aur aapki daad se likhne ka jsh kai guna badh jata hai... aapne pasand farmaya bahut bahut shukriya....

bas yun hi sath dete rahiyega...
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«Reply #4 on: February 14, 2012, 05:15:26 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: February 14, 2012, 09:47:58 AM »
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Quote from: mann.mann on February 14, 2012, 04:51:53 AM
Mushkurakar paas se wo jab guzar gaya.
Khushbu se uski dil ka har kona sanwar gaya.

Usne jo ek nazar dekha tha chalte chalte,
Us ek nazar ka dekho dil tak asar gaya.

Uska khyal aaya khili dhoop ki tarah,
Dil phool sa khila aur khilkar bikhar gaya.

Uski yadon ke par jabse khyalon ko lage hain,
Ab tak to tha yahin dil jane kidhar gaya.

Aawaz main uski "mann" talwaar si khanak thi,
Khanzar tha dhardaar dil main utar gaya.

mann


  bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause

                       shokh nazro.n bhara chera aakho.n mein aise basaa.
                       rahaa  tu-hi-tu nigaah mein main jidhar gaya.
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«Reply #6 on: February 14, 2012, 11:48:25 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya adilji
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«Reply #7 on: February 15, 2012, 04:15:11 PM »
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Mushkurakar paas se wo jab guzar gaya.
Khushbu se uski dil ka har kona sanwar gaya.

Usne jo ek nazar dekha tha chalte chalte,
Us ek nazar ka dekho dil tak asar gaya.

Uska khyal aaya khili dhoop ki tarah,
Dil phool sa khila aur khilkar bikhar gaya.

Uski yadon ke par jabse khyalon ko lage hain,
Ab tak to tha yahin dil jane kidhar gaya.

Aawaz main uski "mann" talwaar si khanak thi,
Khanzar tha dhardaar dil main utar gaya.

mann


mann ji, Beautiful! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: February 16, 2012, 03:22:55 AM »
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dhanyawad shihabji...
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