~~"Muskuraye Jaati Hoo.n"~~by Pooja

by k.shael on July 04, 2009, 08:52:49 AM
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These lines are written by Pooja Didi & Only Design by me..

Hatho mai tasveer teri, ankhon mai khawab hai
Din-raat, subah-sham, bas ek tera hi khayal hai
Miloge jab tab tumse kaya kuch kahugi main!!
Samne tere atty hi sare hosh, bad-hawas hai


khawabo mai akar satate ho
khumar ban baras jaate ho
sath tera, dil ko bahoot bhata hai
ek masoom chehra najar ke samne atta hai

bhar kar tasveer teri ankhon mai
sapne kai sajati hu
kahu juban se kaya main tujko
teri tasveer ke samne muskuraye jaati hu



Pooja Didi, Aapki ye lines bahut doodne par mili, par kehte hai na mehnat ka phal aacha hota hai, itni pyaari lines sach me dil me utar gayi..bahut hi meethe alfaaz hai inn lines ke..

Hope u liked the design..

Shally.
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«Reply #1 on: July 04, 2009, 08:58:56 AM »
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Wah wah Pooja ji,beautiful creation, Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
Shally ji bahut khoobsurti se aapne isse sajayee hai,too good. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley love4
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«Reply #2 on: July 04, 2009, 10:00:44 AM »
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Bohot khoob likha hai pooja ji ne... Clapping Smiley
Aur Shally ji aapne bohot acha pesh kiya ise... Applause
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«Reply #3 on: July 04, 2009, 10:48:44 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Kya kahe aapse......Pooja di ne jitna pyara likha hai utna hi pyara aapne in lines ko ek nya roop diya hai.....bahut pyara
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«Reply #4 on: July 04, 2009, 05:18:09 PM »
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Pooja Ji.. Aapki Yeh Line Padh kar Puraane din yaad aa gaye.. Usual Smile
Bahut Hi Khubsoorat Likha hai aapne.. aur In Line Khubsoorati ko Shally ki kalakaari ne aur Bada diya hai.. Beautiful work Shally.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #5 on: July 04, 2009, 05:59:49 PM »
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wahhhhhhhhhh pooja ji ki tahreer aor shally ji ki tasveer
bahut khubsoorat rang layi hai
dono ko badhai
nira
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«Reply #6 on: July 04, 2009, 09:44:18 PM »
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Bahut Khoob likha hai Pooja Ji ne aur Shally Ji aap ne isse badi sundar dhang se pesh kia hai
It's just wonderful
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«Reply #7 on: July 05, 2009, 04:57:01 AM »
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khoobsurat ehsaas bhut achay pooja ji
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«Reply #8 on: July 05, 2009, 05:04:42 AM »
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Bahoot bahoot shukaria Shally.. kaya kahu apko meri to yahi samjh nahi aa raha hai...

Mai to bas jo man mai ayya... wo ek dum se likh deti hu, kabhi shabdo ko sajne ki ya dobara parr kar thik karne ki bhi nahi sochi aor apne itna khoobsurat roop de diya!! Bahoot bahoot shukaria!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 05, 2009, 05:08:23 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 04, 2009, 08:58:56 AM
Wah wah Pooja ji,beautiful creation, Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
Shally ji bahut khoobsurti se aapne isse sajayee hai,too good. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley love4

Quote from: superspawn10 on July 04, 2009, 10:00:44 AM
Bohot khoob likha hai pooja ji ne... Clapping Smiley
Aur Shally ji aapne bohot acha pesh kiya ise... Applause

Quote from: poppoetry on July 04, 2009, 10:48:44 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Kya kahe aapse......Pooja di ne jitna pyara likha hai utna hi pyara aapne in lines ko ek nya roop diya hai.....bahut pyara

Quote from: @kaash on July 04, 2009, 11:17:00 AM
Bahot umda likha hai Pooja ji ne hamesha ki hi tarah aur Shael ji behad ache se pesh kia aapne,very nice

Quote from: Mann on July 04, 2009, 05:18:09 PM
Pooja Ji.. Aapki Yeh Line Padh kar Puraane din yaad aa gaye.. Usual Smile
Bahut Hi Khubsoorat Likha hai aapne.. aur In Line Khubsoorati ko Shally ki kalakaari ne aur Bada diya hai.. Beautiful work Shally.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**

Quote from: Nira on July 04, 2009, 05:59:49 PM
wahhhhhhhhhh pooja ji ki tahreer aor shally ji ki tasveer
bahut khubsoorat rang layi hai
dono ko badhai
nira

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on July 04, 2009, 09:44:18 PM
Bahut Khoob likha hai Pooja Ji ne aur Shally Ji aap ne isse badi sundar dhang se pesh kia hai
It's just wonderful

Quote from: aaina on July 05, 2009, 04:57:01 AM
khoobsurat ehsaas bhut achay pooja ji

bahoot bahoot shukaria Madhuwesh ji, superspawan ji, poppoetry ji, Kaash ji, Mann ji, Nira ji, Rajesh ji and Aaina ji!!

Once again thanks Shally for beautiful work!!!
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«Reply #10 on: July 19, 2009, 02:30:19 PM »
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subtle emotions expressed in a simple way Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: July 19, 2009, 02:37:23 PM »
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good one pooja di and thank u shally for bringing up this superb creation among us
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«Reply #12 on: July 20, 2009, 04:57:41 AM »
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Quote from: thegrimreaper on July 19, 2009, 02:30:19 PM
subtle emotions expressed in a simple way Applause Applause

Thanks TGR ji!!
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«Reply #13 on: July 20, 2009, 04:58:12 AM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on July 19, 2009, 02:37:23 PM
good one pooja di and thank u shally for bringing up this superb creation among us

Thanks Salil!!
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