Na gaya

by Quateel Ahmad on March 29, 2012, 03:04:07 PM
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Man mein tha jo geet mujhse sunaya na gaya,
Dil ke armaan ko bhi dabaaya na gaya

Chhalakte rahe jaam uthte rahe paymane,
Apna hi haath tha lekin rukaaya na gaya

Bade saleeke se bulaa rahe tthey mujhe veerane,
Apna haq mujhpar unse bhi jataaya na gaya

Teri talaash mein wohi lazzat hai jo tere saath mein hai
Ek kiya na gaya dooja nibhaya na gaya
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«Reply #1 on: March 29, 2012, 03:21:39 PM »
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Man mein tha jo geet mujhse sunaya na gaya,
Dil ke armaan ko bhi dabaaya na gaya

Chhalakte rahe jaam uthte rahe paymane,
Apna hi haath tha lekin rukaaya na gaya

Bade saleeke se bulaa rahe tthey mujhe veerane,
Apna haq mujhpar unse bhi jataaya na gaya

Teri talaash mein wohi lazzat hai jo tere saath mein hai
Ek kiya na gaya dooja nibhaya na gaya
good work.
I like that type of poetry.
Last 2 lines dil me apna mkan bna leti h.
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«Reply #2 on: March 29, 2012, 03:22:12 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: March 29, 2012, 03:36:16 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut khoob Quateel ji....!!!
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«Reply #4 on: March 29, 2012, 06:58:52 PM »
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Man mein tha jo geet mujhse sunaya na gaya,
Dil ke armaan ko bhi dabaaya na gaya

Chhalakte rahe jaam uthte rahe paymane,
Apna hi haath tha lekin rukaaya na gaya

Bade saleeke se bulaa rahe tthey mujhe veerane,
Apna haq mujhpar unse bhi jataaya na gaya

Teri talaash mein wohi lazzat hai jo tere saath mein hai
Ek kiya na gaya dooja nibhaya na gaya
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«Reply #5 on: March 30, 2012, 05:47:15 AM »
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Bahot Shukriya!Sainibhai, Masoomji, Hridayji aur Manojji!
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«Reply #6 on: March 30, 2012, 07:16:31 AM »
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bohat khoob....
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«Reply #7 on: March 30, 2012, 10:09:19 AM »
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wah wah....awesome..bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: April 07, 2012, 08:25:59 PM »
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Shukriya Laibaji aur Dollyji.
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«Reply #9 on: April 08, 2012, 01:15:28 AM »
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Man mein tha jo geet mujhse sunaya na gaya,
Dil ke armaan ko bhi dabaaya na gaya

Chhalakte rahe jaam uthte rahe paymane,
Apna hi haath tha lekin rukaaya na gaya

Bade saleeke se bulaa rahe tthey mujhe veerane,
Apna haq mujhpar unse bhi jataaya na gaya

Teri talaash mein wohi lazzat hai jo tere saath mein hai
Ek kiya na gaya dooja nibhaya na gaya
Sunder peskash qateel bhai mubarak ho..
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