Na hadon ki chinta...manjum

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ufff........ab isse jyada masti bhara nahin likh sakte...

Na hado ki chinta, na sarhadon ka khyal.
Na kuchh pane ki chah, na khone ka malal.

Ik kon main padi hai, niyamon ki wo kitab,
Ab niyam hue bemani, kaisa hai ye kamaal.

Aaiine main hai jane, ye kon nazar aata,
Aaiine main gadbad hai, a aankhon ka bura hal.

Kon achanak bhar jata hai, benoori main noor,
Kisne chupke se mal di hai, galon par gulal.

manju "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: April 23, 2011, 06:00:08 AM »
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haye………
ye to kamaal hai re…
uff maza aa gaya…
aakhir likhwa hi lia mene…

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«Reply #2 on: April 23, 2011, 06:20:26 AM »
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good one manju ji...
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«Reply #3 on: April 23, 2011, 07:06:06 AM »
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shukriy kbji... ab itna bhi kamal nahin hai... thik thak hai... shukriya

ath rahie....
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«Reply #4 on: April 23, 2011, 07:06:59 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya priyaji.....

sath rahie........
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«Reply #5 on: April 23, 2011, 07:13:36 AM »
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achha hai achha hai
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«Reply #6 on: April 23, 2011, 07:29:10 AM »
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bahut bahut shukeiya imdadji....

sath rahie......
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«Reply #7 on: April 23, 2011, 07:53:15 AM »
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bahut khub shihabji......

sath rahiye.....
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«Reply #8 on: April 23, 2011, 12:15:06 PM »
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very nice poetry manjum ji.
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«Reply #9 on: April 23, 2011, 01:06:39 PM »
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Quote from: manjum on April 23, 2011, 05:45:19 AM
ufff........ab isse jyada masti bhara nahin likh sakte...

Na hado ki chinta, na sarhadon ka khyal.
Na kuchh pane ki chah, na khone ka malal.

Ik kon main padi hai, niyamon ki wo kitab,
Ab niyam hue bemani, kaisa hai ye kamaal.

Aaiine main hai jane, ye kon nazar aata,
Aaiine main gadbad hai, a aankhon ka bura hal.

Kon achanak bhar jata hai, benoori main noor,
Kisne chupke se mal di hai, galon par gulal.

manju "mann"

good one
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«Reply #10 on: April 23, 2011, 05:02:50 PM »
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Good Job Manjumann Ji
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«Reply #11 on: April 25, 2011, 03:32:55 AM »
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Bahtu bahut shukriya sureshji……….

Sath rahie…….
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«Reply #12 on: April 25, 2011, 03:33:35 AM »
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Bahtu bahut shukriya adilji……….

Sath rahie…….
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«Reply #13 on: April 25, 2011, 03:34:16 AM »
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Bahtu bahut shukriya nihaji……….

Sath rahie…….
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«Reply #14 on: April 25, 2011, 04:24:41 AM »
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boht acha likha hai manjum ji
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