Na hota to achcha tha:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

mudassirali

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Assalam-alaikum, ummeed hai aap sab khiriyat sey hongey.aaj bohot din baad ek nazm pst kar raha hoon.koi ghalti please bata dein.

merey dil mein ek gham jo tha, na hota to achcha tha
gham mein bhi mujh ko pyar tha, na hota to achcha tha

mainey jigar ko chaak kiya, lahu tapka key dikhlaya
yeh lahu ka bhi ek waar tha, rang koi bhi na ban paya

yeh lahu kya mera yaar tha? na hota to achcha tha

har parchaai mujh pey hasti thi,bas ek badli thi jo roti thi
main rota tha bahaaroon mein, tu patjhad mein bhi hansti thi

yeh patjhad kya mera yaar tha? na hota to achcha tha

ummeed hi kho chuka hoon main,bas maut ka intizaar hai
par maut bhi aati nahin, teri us dua ka kamaal hai

teri dua thi woh aur pyar tha? na hota to achcha tha.

mudassir.


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muskan_bye

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Re: Na hota to achcha tha

«Reply #1 on: November 29, 2007, 06:40:23 PM »

very nice "Mudsir" ji aap ka jawab nahi well done...

kuch logo ki chahte puri ho jati hai
or kuch logo ki chahte nafrat mein badal jati hai
aisa na hota toh acha hota ........

mohabbat ke fasane logo ko passand aane lagte hai
gulab ke phool passand aane lagte hai
jab zindagi rooth jati hai toh
log manane lag jate hai
isse acha na hota toh acha hota...........

kuch log dil baaton ko zubaan par lana chahte hai
par kahe nahi pate hai
or jab kahete tab tak woh kisi or ki ho jati hai
or woh bechara akela tanhai mein rahe jata hai
kash aisa na hota toh acha hota..............

ye sab aap ke topic likha hai
jo aap ke topic ka matlab hai uske hisaab se likha hai.....

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~"Muskan"~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


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deepika_divya

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Re: Na hota to achcha tha

«Reply #2 on: November 30, 2007, 04:01:24 AM »

bahoot khoob.. mudassirali N muskaan..keep writing ..

God bless u
Divya


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