na insha tha

by saaz_haldwanvi on April 11, 2009, 12:55:16 PM
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Insha tha na khuda tha wo
Jane koun si dua tha wo,
De aaya main jo rakib ko
Meri jist ka pata tha wo,
Jarre-jarre mein thi ek bahar si
Dour-e-jawani ka pata tha wo,
Main jism aur wo jaan meri
Fir kaise mujh se juda tha wo,  " saaz haldwanvi"
                                 written on 1.12.97
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«Reply #1 on: April 11, 2009, 01:06:08 PM »
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Cool ! Very nice written by U saaz. keep writing ..............Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: April 11, 2009, 01:13:14 PM »
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Bahut khoobsurat Saaz Ji...
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«Reply #3 on: April 11, 2009, 01:25:46 PM »
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sukriya sophi
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«Reply #4 on: April 11, 2009, 02:34:04 PM »
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Wah bohat khoob Saaz...
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«Reply #5 on: April 11, 2009, 02:36:53 PM »
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Quote from: saaz_haldwanvi on April 11, 2009, 12:55:16 PM
Insha tha na khuda tha wo
Jane koun si dua tha wo,
De aaya main jo rakib ko
Meri jist ka pata tha wo,
Jarre-jarre mein thi ek bahar si
Dour-e-jawani ka pata tha wo,
Main jism aur wo jaan meri
Fir kaise mujh se juda tha wo,  " saaz haldwanvi"
                                 written on 1.12.97


wah wah kaya baat hai saaaz ji!! bahoot khoob!!
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«Reply #6 on: April 12, 2009, 02:52:11 AM »
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Quote from: saaz_haldwanvi on April 11, 2009, 12:55:16 PM
Insha tha na khuda tha wo
Jane koun si dua tha wo,
De aaya main jo rakib ko
Meri jist ka pata tha wo,
Jarre-jarre mein thi ek bahar si
Dour-e-jawani ka pata tha wo,
Main jism aur wo jaan meri
Fir kaise mujh se juda tha wo,  " saaz haldwanvi"
                                 written on 1.12.97

WAAH SAAZ SAAHEB....KYA BAAT HAI..
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«Reply #7 on: April 12, 2009, 09:09:42 AM »
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Muddat kiya intzar abb bhool jaana hi achha hai
Tere Dhokhon se khafa hai  meri roooh ish traha
Tujhe or tere aksh ko bhee bhool jaana ab achha hai
toone Goonche ki chahat main hum shaye ki shakh ko ki kaat daala
Paraye the hum apne hi aagan ki shaakh par ,
tum baso khoosh kishmat humsafar ke saath , hamara oosh shakh se ud jaana hi  achha hai
Kabhee tari bewafai ka kafila ruke to sochna gujre waqt ke bare
tum ko kaya mila ashiyana jala kar,batana ki tum jeete ya tum haare
sabkuchh loota kar paraye shahr se rookshat kar jaan ab achha hai
Bahoot roye teri bewafi par , bahoot roye tujh se bichhd jaane par
Chhodo bhee gujre shikvon ko abb sabkuchh bhool jaana hi achha hai
Roola denge Mere likhe khat  or meri guptgoo tum ko aik din
Apne apne jurm ka ikrar kar sab kuchh bool jaan hi achha hai
Muddat kiya intzar abb bhool jaana hi achha hai.
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«Reply #8 on: April 12, 2009, 10:39:51 AM »
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tum gunaha karo or naamaloom bolo humshaya humshafar insaan ko
tume shahwani khwahish se parasht nahi pahchana us bhagwan ko
main hoon tera sona ,ye hi to kahata raha anjan wo
tum bhool gaye garon ki mohabbat ke nashe main us insaan ko
too hai gair ki , par tujh ko hi bata ta raha tha apni pahchan wo
na samajh ki too apni bewafi  ki mardam  se na wakif rahegi umar bhar
rote rote marte marte khah kar gaya hai sona tera bejaan wo
hosake to dua karna ki koi ulfat na gire teri is doonia main
naa kar garoor gunaha ke humsafar par, sabkuchh betah dekh raha hai bhagwan wo
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«Reply #9 on: April 12, 2009, 04:37:50 PM »
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 FORGET JI REPLY KE JAWAB MEIN 'KALAM' PASAND AAYA, SUKRIYA!
 EK CHUTKI AAPKE NAAM KARTA HOON,
     " Ek batakh[swan] ki choch
       ko naam apna dekar
       uske dhad mein naam
       mera jodkar,
       prem ke saat aasman
       tak parwaj to chahi
       magar tum bhul gayi
       batakh kahan uda karti hain"
                                   saaz haldwanvi,
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«Reply #10 on: April 12, 2009, 04:48:19 PM »
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 sukriya "FORGOT JI"
 AAKE LIYE-
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«Reply #11 on: April 12, 2009, 07:03:31 PM »
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batkh bhee udjaati hai saaz bhai agar mohabbat ka parwan ho
mar jaate hai achhe bhale insaan agar jindgi main bewafa kamsaan ho
tumne kabhee bewafa ko dekha or tzurbat main parkha hai
na baba allah na kare tum jinda ho or jindgi tumhari shamshan ho
ye to shayri hai tum chahe batak sar par isaan ka sar lagao or inssan par batkh ka
humari dooa hai saaz bahi ki tum shayar ho or shayri main tumhara naam ho
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«Reply #12 on: June 13, 2009, 07:52:25 AM »
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Quote from: forgot on April 12, 2009, 07:03:31 PM
batkh bhee udjaati hai saaz bhai agar mohabbat ka parwan ho
mar jaate hai achhe bhale insaan agar jindgi main bewafa kamsaan ho
tumne kabhee bewafa ko dekha or tzurbat main parkha hai
na baba allah na kare tum jinda ho or jindgi tumhari shamshan ho
ye to shayri hai tum chahe batak sar par isaan ka sar lagao or inssan par batkh ka
humari dooa hai saaz bahi ki tum shayar ho or shayri main tumhara naam ho
kya baat hain forget ji, jara apna tarruf humse karyega, ek inkalabi shayar basta hain aapke ander
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«Reply #13 on: June 13, 2009, 03:28:44 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 11, 2009, 02:36:53 PM

wah wah kaya baat hai saaaz ji!! bahoot khoob!!
shukriya pooja ji
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«Reply #14 on: June 13, 2009, 03:29:50 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 11, 2009, 02:34:04 PM
Wah bohat khoob Saaz...
mehrbaani hai aapki
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