Na jane kya hua hai dil ko...

by punam on January 29, 2009, 07:46:01 AM
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Na jane kya hua hai dil ko,kya chahta hai
kisne kiya hai kabza yeh kis ka hua hai..

yeh kis ka asar hai jo iss ko jala raha hai
yeh nadan dil kyun sambhale na sambhalta hai..

yeh ehsaash kya hai yeh pyas kya hai
yeh kis ki aagosh me kho jana chahta hai...

na sunta hai mera na kuch samjhta hai
aaj bas me na raha kyun bekabu ho raha hai..


Punam...
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«Reply #1 on: January 29, 2009, 09:38:50 AM »
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Punam i could not explain how happy i am to c ur new post...thank you for such a beautiful Post  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Jo sambhle na tujse aa main tera dil smabhal lu
Tuje ek nayee kalam du tujhe ek naya khayal du

                           -SG-
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«Reply #2 on: January 29, 2009, 10:20:30 AM »
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Na jane kya hua hai dil ko,kya chahta hai
kisne kiya hai kabza yeh kis ka hua hai..

yeh kis ka asar hai jo iss ko jala raha hai
yeh nadan dil kyun sambhale na sambhalta hai..

yeh ehsaash kya hai yeh pyas kya hai
yeh kis ki aagosh me kho jana chahta hai...

na sunta hai mera na kuch samjhta hai
aaj bas me na raha kyun bekabu ho raha hai..


Punam...


Wah wah punam kya khoob likha hai.. Applause Applause
welcome back to Yo.... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #3 on: January 29, 2009, 03:18:45 PM »
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Oye Hoye Kya Baat Hai Punam.. Bahut Pyaar Likha hai Dear..!!

Behad pyaar bhare Alfaaz likhe Hain aapne....!! aur Bahut dino Baad Tumhe Yahan dekh kar Dil ko waqai Bahut Khushi Hui..!!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #4 on: January 29, 2009, 06:15:32 PM »
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Wah Punam Behna, Tera Kya kehna,.

Bohat Achche, Nice One,.
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«Reply #5 on: January 30, 2009, 04:54:39 PM »
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Na jane kya hua hai dil ko,kya chahta hai
kisne kiya hai kabza yeh kis ka hua hai..

yeh kis ka asar hai jo iss ko jala raha hai
yeh nadan dil kyun sambhale na sambhalta hai..

yeh ehsaash kya hai yeh pyas kya hai
yeh kis ki aagosh me kho jana chahta hai...

na sunta hai mera na kuch samjhta hai
aaj bas me na raha kyun bekabu ho raha hai..


Punam...

Wwwwwooooow Punam... aate hi sixer...  Thumbs UP

Be regular dear...
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«Reply #6 on: January 31, 2009, 08:46:36 AM »
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Na jane kya hua hai dil ko,kya chahta hai
kisne kiya hai kabza yeh kis ka hua hai..

yeh kis ka asar hai jo iss ko jala raha hai
yeh nadan dil kyun sambhale na sambhalta hai..

yeh ehsaash kya hai yeh pyas kya hai
yeh kis ki aagosh me kho jana chahta hai...

na sunta hai mera na kuch samjhta hai
aaj bas me na raha kyun bekabu ho raha hai..


Punam...

gud 1 punam ji..........
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«Reply #7 on: May 05, 2009, 04:49:25 PM »
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Na jane kya hua hai dil ko,kya chahta hai
kisne kiya hai kabza yeh kis ka hua hai..

yeh kis ka asar hai jo iss ko jala raha hai
yeh nadan dil kyun sambhale na sambhalta hai..

yeh ehsaash kya hai yeh pyas kya hai
yeh kis ki aagosh me kho jana chahta hai...

na sunta hai mera na kuch samjhta hai
aaj bas me na raha kyun bekabu ho raha hai..


Punam...

Bahut hi khoobsurat aur deedadil shayiri rachi hai aapne...
Aur kaafi mahinon baad dekhne ko moaqa mila hai aapki shayiri ko...


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«Reply #8 on: May 11, 2009, 06:12:40 AM »
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Hoshla afjai ka shukriya sajid ji ..aap jaise doston ki pyar aur saath hi to mujhe fir yehan khinch layi...

Thanx Honey di...

vicky ji shukriya...aap yehan aaye dekhe yehi bahut hai humare liye....

Thanx Azeem bhaiya....

Thanx Roja di...koshish karungi regular hone ki...

thax Sameer ji...

shukriya syed ji...aap jaise likh to nahi sakti bas koshish karti rehti hun kuch likhne..

Thanx to all...

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«Reply #9 on: May 11, 2009, 06:44:49 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Poonam Didi, Applause  Applause  Applause
Thanx a lottt for coming back on yoindia.
God bless u.

Shally.


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«Reply #10 on: May 11, 2009, 09:36:26 PM »
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Punam saahiba aapki nazar karta hun...

Anjaane men ajab yeh ahsaas hone laga hai,
Han yaqeen hai yeh mujhko ishq hone laga hai...

Khabar tak hui naa, na jaana yeh main ne,
Kyun pyar mujhko tumse is qadar hone laga hai...


Syed
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«Reply #11 on: May 12, 2009, 07:51:36 AM »
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Thanx a lot shally sis....

Thanx syed ji..and nice one...kuch try karti hun reply me..


har ghadi nazar kyun tujhe hi dhoondti hai
yeh kaisi kashish hai jo mujhe tere aur khinchti hai...

kya kasoor tha kyun nazaron ka sukun chin liye
yeh kaisi tadap hai kyun ab teri hi aas rehti hai...

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«Reply #12 on: May 12, 2009, 08:40:58 AM »
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Punam sahiba, bahut bahut shukriya, aap ne javab diya hamara din khushiyon se bhar gaya...
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«Reply #13 on: May 12, 2009, 09:25:31 AM »
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poonam ji kafee dino ko baad aapko yaha dekha bahut achaa lagaa
or ate hee rang jamaa diyaa vastav me bahut achaa likhaa hai....


netra...
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«Reply #14 on: January 06, 2010, 03:07:43 AM »
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Bhaut shandaar likha hai Punam JI.
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