na jane kyun

by saahill on February 02, 2012, 03:41:18 PM
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NA JANE KYUN YEH DIL MERA DEEWANA HO RAHA HAI ,
 
NA JANE KYUN YEH DADHKANO KO BEKRAAR kAR RAHA HAI .

NA JANE KYUN AJ NAYA NAYA SA KHUMAAR AA RAHA HAI ,

NA JANE KYUN KOI AJNABI DIL MERA CHURA RAHA HAI .
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«Reply #1 on: February 02, 2012, 07:33:55 PM »
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The second line is incorrect: "Na jaane kyun ye dhadkano ko bekarar raha hai" doesn't make any sense.
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«Reply #2 on: February 03, 2012, 04:31:46 AM »
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Saahil ji plz ise theek karo
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«Reply #3 on: February 03, 2012, 01:53:48 PM »
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ahmed ji and saini ji apki advice par kam kar diya hai thx 4 corection
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