-----/// Naam Teraa ///----- Hriday

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geet     likhne     baithaa    hoon
kore    se      ek      kaagaz     par
alfaaz    mere   tikte     hi    nahi
kaagaz    ke     in     panno    par

udte  phirte  ehsaas  mere  sab
titli     jaise      machalte     hain
jahaan  kahin bhi hawaa  chali
sangh hawaa ke hi chalte hain

aaj   kore    se   is   kaagaz  par
naam  teraa   hi   likh  du  main
isse     behtar      geet    koi    fir
kahaan  koi   main  likh  paaun

tere      sapne ,    teri    yaadein
in  mein  hi   main jeetaa hoon
teri     hi    bas    baatein    hain
kaagaz    ke     in    panno    par

geet   koi   main    likh   du   aaj
kaagaz   ke    kuch   tukdo   par
naam   teraa   hi  likh  du  main
aaj   apne    saare   geeton  par







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«Reply #1 on: June 01, 2016, 06:57:30 AM »
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Beautiful ...just beautiful!

bahot dino baad wapas aai hu is forum pe...aapki..Adil ji...khamosh awaaz ..saini ji..aur bahot sare..naye log bhi.sabki rachnaye wapas dhoond rahi hu...open karte hi 'Naam tera' padha bahot sunder..thanks!
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«Reply #2 on: June 01, 2016, 08:38:17 AM »
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Bahot khoooob waaaaaah hi waaaah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: June 01, 2016, 05:05:02 PM »
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Bahut khooob   



Kuchh likhna tha,  kuchh par likha gya nahi,
bahut kahna tha,  kuchh par kaha gya nahi,
Kuchh ajeeb se haalat ho jate hai ishq mein
dil mein tu basa hai,  naam tera liya jaata nahi
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«Reply #5 on: June 02, 2016, 08:46:57 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on May 31, 2016, 06:12:21 PM




geet     likhne     baithaa    hoon
kore    se      ek      kaagaz     par
alfaaz    mere   tikte     hi    nahi
kaagaz    ke     in     panno    par

udte  phirte  ehsaas  mere  sab
titli     jaise      machalte     hain
jahaan  kahin bhi hawaa  chali
sangh hawaa ke hi chalte hain

aaj   kore    se   is   kaagaz  par
naam  teraa   hi   likh  du  main
isse     behtar      geet    koi    fir
kahaan  koi   main  likh  paaun

tere      sapne ,    teri    yaadein
in  mein  hi   main jeetaa hoon
teri     hi    bas    baatein    hain
kaagaz    ke     in    panno    par

geet   koi   main    likh   du   aaj
kaagaz   ke    kuch   tukdo   par
naam   teraa   hi  likh  du  main
aaj   apne    saare   geeton  par




*****HRIDAY*****




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«Reply #6 on: June 06, 2016, 06:38:49 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Sps ji....!!!

Quote from: Sps on June 01, 2016, 06:57:30 AM
Beautiful ...just beautiful!

bahot dino baad wapas aai hu is forum pe...aapki..Adil ji...khamosh awaaz ..saini ji..aur bahot sare..naye log bhi.sabki rachnaye wapas dhoond rahi hu...open karte hi 'Naam tera' padha bahot sunder..thanks!
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«Reply #7 on: June 09, 2016, 06:39:06 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Rustum ji....!!!

Quote from: Rustum Rangila on June 01, 2016, 08:38:17 AM
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Chitra ji....!!!

Quote from: chitra on June 01, 2016, 05:05:02 PM
Bahut khooob   



Kuchh likhna tha,  kuchh par likha gya nahi,
bahut kahna tha,  kuchh par kaha gya nahi,
Kuchh ajeeb se haalat ho jate hai ishq mein
dil mein tu basa hai,  naam tera liya jaata nahi
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa M_K ji....!!!

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«Reply #10 on: June 13, 2016, 07:42:38 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Sheba ji....!!!!


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