Naaz hai us pal pe...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on January 26, 2011, 02:27:45 PM
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Har su khamoshi gunj rahi thi,
per hamare dilo mein bahut shor tha,

hamare lafz chahe gum the,
per mhbt ka asar chaaro aor tha,

terra mujhe chup chup k dekhna,
main janti thi terri nigaho mein ek chor tha,

main sama gyi pal mein terri agosh mein,
us ek lamhe mein hasrato per na koi zor tha,

main naaz karti hu us pal pe jab mazbut the hamare irade..
aur chahto ka baadal humpe ghanghor tha.........

I love u my life
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«Reply #1 on: January 26, 2011, 04:34:10 PM »
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achha hai Bbl ji--
ehsaas aur pyar jhalkte hain sabhi aashar me--
lekin last line kuch azeeb sa laga---don no why??
shayd mujhe poem ki pehchaan nahi.
be happy always
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thanx
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«Reply #2 on: January 26, 2011, 04:44:55 PM »
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Shukriya nirala ji mujhe bhi akhir ki line mein kuch galat laga merri line poori kavita k sath match nhi ho rahi thi isiliye maine change kiya hai umeed karti hu ab behtar hai..Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: January 26, 2011, 06:30:47 PM »
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thanx aapne meri baat par gaur pharmaya.
ab sahi hai Usual Smile
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thanx
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«Reply #4 on: January 26, 2011, 11:25:04 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut khoob Geet di..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: January 27, 2011, 09:46:23 AM »
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BBL jee Aadaab!

Kafi achchi peshkash hai ... Ahsaas O khayaal bhi khoob hai ..
Aur bayaani bhi...

Daad o mubarakbaad kabool kijiye..

Likhati rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez ... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #6 on: January 27, 2011, 10:41:26 AM »
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mast mast romantic poem geet.........sapno me kho gai main to....
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«Reply #7 on: January 27, 2011, 12:38:38 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: January 27, 2011, 02:17:53 PM »
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wah Geetaji--bahut pyare shabd aur mohabbat se bharpur aapki ye rachna lajawaab hai.
bahut bahut khubsurat.
daad hai dil se aur dua hai rab se
khus rahen
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«Reply #9 on: January 28, 2011, 10:41:02 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya killbill ji...
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«Reply #10 on: January 29, 2011, 11:47:46 AM »
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Bohat Khoob Ji
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«Reply #11 on: January 29, 2011, 03:24:49 PM »
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Shukriya shiba ji...
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«Reply #12 on: January 29, 2011, 03:29:48 PM »
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wah geet ji......

no words to express my feelings........

dil garden garden ho gaya ji  ye post padkar......

tussi kamal ka lkihte ho.......twada jawab nahi ji.....
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«Reply #13 on: January 29, 2011, 03:41:28 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya utkarsh ji...
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