Nadaan Dil

by Preet.Dehlvi on January 16, 2006, 11:26:50 PM
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Dil tumhari chah mein
kya gunaah kiye jata hai,
Khuda ko bhool
tumhe khuda ka naam diye jaata hai.

Rokna chahta hoon isse
par ye kahan ab ruk pata hai,
Toofanon ka dar raha nahin isko
sahilon se door ho jaana chahta hai.

Samjhaya bahut hai isko
bataya ke pathar mein kahan pyar paya jata hai.
Hasta hai nadaani par hamari
kehta hai -
Preet inhi pathron se to Taj banaya jata hai.
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«Reply #1 on: January 17, 2006, 04:09:38 AM »
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very nice preet ji..................bahoot khoob.................

Dil cheez hai lutane ki,
Aaj lutake aaya hoon mein,
Dil cheez hai tadapne ki,
Aaaj tadap raha hoon mein,
Dil cheez hai dhadakne ki,
Par pata nahi dekhke kisi or k saath tujhe,
Kyun sholon ki tarha Bhadak raha hoon mein..................
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«Reply #2 on: January 17, 2006, 10:19:24 AM »
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very  nice both of u....

nadaan dil ke sataye hue hain
hum aaj bhi unhein dhondhne
unki galiyon mein aaye hue hain

woh bedard kahin dikhte hi nahi
jinke liye humne dil pe zakhm khaye hue hain
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«Reply #3 on: January 17, 2006, 10:50:53 AM »
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Very nice Preet,badnaam shayar and nikki sis(nice 2 c u sis Usual Smile ).
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«Reply #4 on: January 17, 2006, 11:33:22 AM »
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[color=greenCha Jayega Jaadu tere dil pe
Sargaroshi karega Bukhar-e-isq
Gour farmana meri dhadkano pe
Sanwar dega tujhe nikhar-e-isq[/color]
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«Reply #5 on: January 17, 2006, 12:07:58 PM »
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aa nadaan dil zara sambhal ker chal.....

girta kyu ghadi ghadi zara sambhai ker chal....

chahta hai tujhe koi dusra shayad kahi mujhe se na chura le tujhko.......

tu akele rasto me zara sambhal ker chal.......
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«Reply #6 on: January 17, 2006, 06:05:53 PM »
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preet,tushar,badnaam,niki,nirbhay, and nidhi all wrote vry well!!!!


Dil ka dosh tu nahi hai, ye tu nadan hai
Dil ko kyun kehta ho kuch, jab uska dosh nahi
Dosh tu tha uska, jisne kasamein kha kar bi
Kasamein nibhaiyein nahi!!!
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Preet.Dehlvi
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«Reply #7 on: January 18, 2006, 05:05:56 AM »
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Thankyou everybody.
Inayat hai aap sab ki. Bahut khoob likha hai aap sab ne. Arz kiya hai ...

Dua hai tumhari
jo likhe jaata hoon main,
Dil-e-betaab ki hai bekarai
jo likhe jaata hoon main,
Khawab jaldi se baant loon
apne yaaron se main,
Kahin khul na jaye yeh khumari
so likhe jaata hoon main.
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #8 on: January 18, 2006, 05:20:14 AM »
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welcome preet........................and gud one again
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«Reply #9 on: January 19, 2006, 07:02:29 PM »
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beautiful everyone... bohot achi shuruwat ki apne preet ji and welcome to yoindia!

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«Reply #10 on: January 19, 2006, 08:13:22 PM »
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preet vry nice!!!
likne se kia hota hai
jawab aata hai
pyar karne se kia hota hai
bewafa ko naya bahana milta hai
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«Reply #11 on: January 20, 2006, 03:23:22 AM »
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Thankyou Meenu and Anjani.
Arz kiya hai ...

Dil lagane ki kahani na sunao yaaro
mohabbat se ab dil ghabra gaya hai,
Shama jalti hai to jale raat bhar
humne andheron mein aashiyan bana liya hai.
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«Reply #12 on: January 20, 2006, 04:04:57 AM »
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Kya baat hai preet ji bahut khoob............... :wink:
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«Reply #13 on: January 29, 2006, 02:53:50 AM »
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Thankyou Shayar Ji and sorry for a delayed reply. Here is another one -

Hota jo hosh to dil lagate hi kyon
behosh hone ki saza pai hai humne,
Jin hathon mein zindagi thama di thi kabhi
unhi hathon se khanjar ki chot khai hai humne.
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