...Nadani......

by kritika sharma on October 16, 2010, 02:47:47 AM
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Hum bhi badhe Naadan hai jo Ishq ko ek baar phir muaka dene nikle hai..
aanjam -e-ishq ki sajaa tanhaai hoti hai jaante hai phir se ek baar dokha khane nikle hai,
jo ulfat ho gayi hai unse hume itni shiddat tak to isme humari khata kya hai ,wo to
unki mahoobat me kuch kashish to hai jo hum khud ko badhi bekaraari se ek baar phir barbaad karne nikale hai ...!!

its not a poem ......ye to bas jajbaat h humare ........!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 16, 2010, 08:30:38 AM »
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Kritika Ji Aapke Yeh Jazzbaat.. jo Lafz Ban Kar Yahan Bikhar gaye Hain.. Behad khubsoorat hain.. Bahut Khoob Likha hai aapne... Pahali baar aapko padha.. aur Padh kar Bahut accha laga.. yunhi likhte rahiye.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #2 on: October 16, 2010, 08:02:05 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut achi start hai Kritika jee..Bas yunhi jazbaaton ko likte rahiye..!
Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: October 17, 2010, 11:46:33 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: October 17, 2010, 12:15:13 PM »
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really wonderfull ......loved reading this but it's a wonderful and great poem and you r a great poet...........Raaj
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«Reply #5 on: October 17, 2010, 12:42:24 PM »
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Kritaka jee Aadaab

Jazbaat hi apne hote hai yahaaN kouN kiska hota hai...
Aap ne Aapne jazbaat wakai kabil e tarif kahe hai Daad..
 Applause Applause Applause

Likhati rahiye.....
Aati rahiye...
Khush rahiye...
Khuda Hafez........ Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: October 17, 2010, 05:24:50 PM »
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kya khoob kaha hai janab.....
ye sirf jasbaat hi ho skte hain....
jo seedhe dil se nakale or alfaz bnkr ubhr pde....[/b][/i]
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