-----/// Nadiyaa ki dhaaraa ho ///----- Hriday

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tum  nadiyaa   ki   dhaaraa   ho
main  tum  sangh beh jaaungaa

tum   se   judaa   ho  ek pal bhi
main  ab  to  naa reh paaungaa

tum   se   mujhe  mohabbat hai
main sab  se  yeh  keh jaaungaa

chaahe  miley mujhe dard hi, ab
main har dard  ko seh jaaungaa

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«Reply #1 on: March 05, 2013, 02:32:48 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 05, 2013, 02:37:51 PM »
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Just excellent
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«Reply #3 on: March 05, 2013, 03:08:45 PM »
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Beautiful creation.... Lajawab
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«Reply #4 on: March 05, 2013, 03:18:05 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
As usual beautiful lines Hriday ji. bahut bahut khoob. Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
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«Reply #5 on: March 05, 2013, 04:09:40 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: March 05, 2013, 04:11:25 PM »
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bhaut khoob,,,,,,
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«Reply #7 on: March 05, 2013, 04:33:56 PM »
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tum  nadiyaa   ki   dhaaraa   ho
main  tum  sangh beh jaaungaa

tum   se   judaa   ho  ek pal bhi
main  ab  to  naa reh paaungaa

tum   se   mujhe  mohabbat hai
main sab  se  yeh  keh jaaungaa

chaahe  miley mujhe dard hi, ab
main har dard  ko seh jaaungaa

*****HRIDAY*****
 

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«Reply #8 on: March 05, 2013, 04:48:07 PM »
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Kapil Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob janab... Kia baat haai badi achchi rawaani meiN aa gaye haiN
aap toH bahut khoob janab... Usual Smile


Is umdaa koshish par dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: March 05, 2013, 06:54:57 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #10 on: March 05, 2013, 07:12:37 PM »
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bahoot bahoot ache
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«Reply #11 on: March 06, 2013, 08:53:46 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: March 08, 2013, 05:48:45 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Heer ji.....!!!

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: March 09, 2013, 04:42:30 PM »
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thank you sooo much saini ji.....!!!

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tum  nadiyaa   ki   dhaaraa   ho
main  tum  sangh beh jaaungaa

tum   se   judaa   ho  ek pal bhi
main  ab  to  naa reh paaungaa

tum   se   mujhe  mohabbat hai
main sab  se  yeh  keh jaaungaa

chaahe  miley mujhe dard hi, ab
main har dard  ko seh jaaungaa

*****HRIDAY*****
 

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