nahi tumse mohhabat he,chaho toh kasam lelo

by Prateek Mardia on June 07, 2008, 06:40:58 PM
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«Reply #45 on: October 14, 2008, 09:23:18 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 31, 2008, 10:52:12 AM
Pooja, Sayyid, Sanjeev.... Aapne behad umdah contribution diya hai..behad achcha likha hai ...bohot khoob Applause

Shukriya celmira ji.
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«Reply #46 on: October 14, 2008, 09:26:37 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on October 14, 2008, 08:16:43 PM
wah ajj bahoot dino baat yah thread parra. dil khush ho gaya.. good work Prateek ji, Bekarar ji and Sayyid ji!!

purn masi ki hai raat,
chale chalo kuch door tak sath
lahro ke is shor main
Gujare ek sath baaton main raat
Subah ki pahli kiran main tum
Phir baat yahi dil ki bolo
nahi humse mohhabat he
to chalo phir kasam le lo


shukriya aap ka or bohot khoob pooja ji.
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«Reply #47 on: October 14, 2008, 09:31:51 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on August 31, 2008, 10:05:15 AM
wahi subah suhani ho,
hawaon ki rawani ho,
parinde neend se jaagen,
meri cycle purani ho,
fir saath me tum ho,
waqt ki meherbaani ho,
sadak pe door talak chaayi,
sunsaan veerani ho,
aise me teri nazron me,
wo kashish ruhani ho,

nazren churakar tera meri
simt take jana,
zulfen sambhale to kabhi,
kittabon ko sambhlana,
baaten karne bhar ko mera bhi,
bahane chun chun kar lana,
tumhaara chupchap chalna aur,
mera bas bolte jana,
kya kya ab mai bolun,
mera bas sochte jana,
tere samne aa kar,
sab gad bada jana

chalo bas bhi karo ab,
lout aao aaj me "bekarar"
beet gaya, na loutega,
ab waqt wo purana


Subhanallah!

Aap to nazm-goyi ke mahir lagte hein bekarar bhai, bohot hi umda nazm he, bohot khoob.
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«Reply #48 on: October 15, 2008, 04:25:35 AM »
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shukriya poojaji talat aur Randeri sahab
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«Reply #49 on: October 15, 2008, 04:13:06 PM »
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Shukaria Sayyid ji!! App aor Bekarar ji kuch likh kar nahi gaye sad5
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«Reply #50 on: November 17, 2008, 01:04:04 PM »
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kai dino baad khumar-e-ishq sir chada hai dekhen aaj kuch likh paaye to...
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«Reply #51 on: November 18, 2008, 06:14:56 AM »
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Kal se is thread ki ek ek post ko kam se kam dus dus baar padh chuki hoon..
Lekin phir bhi mann nahin bhara...  drunken_smilie

Sab hi ne ek se badh kar ek behetereen ashaar likhe hai...
Ek baat toh hai, koi bhi kisi se kam nahin hai yahan.. Usual Smile

Sab aise hi likhte rahiye...  icon_thumleft Bahut achha laga aap sabka likha padh kar..
Prateek Ji, Sonia Ji, Pooja di, Sayyid Randeri Ji, Sanjeev Ji...  Applause  Applause  Applause
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«Reply #52 on: November 18, 2008, 06:21:19 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on June 07, 2008, 06:40:58 PM

Nahi tumse mohhabat he
Chaho toh kasam lelo
Mujhe nahi tumse mohhabat he
Chaho toh kasam lelo

Mohhabat paak hoti he
Nahi isme gila-shikwa
Pur mujhe tumse shikaayat he
Chaho toh kasam lelo

Roz khwaabon mein aati ho
Meri neende churaati ho
Fir chain aaye mujhe kaisey
Jub tum aanchal lehraati ho
Tumhe kaisi yeh aadat he
Nahi tumse mohhabat he
Chaho toh kasm lelo

Zamaane ke nashtar ko
Main hus-hus ke sehta hu
Sahaara aagosh ka teri
Meri banta ub taakat he
Nahi tumse mohhabat he
Chaho toh kasam lelo

Tera jalwa tera jaadu
Mere sur chadh ke bole he
Mere geeton ko bus tere
Adhron ki zarrorat he
Nahi tumse mohhabat he
Chaho toh kasam lelo

Teri aankhon mein jhanka to
Laga ganga ka paani he
Teri awaaz kaano mein lage
Koi meethi kahaani he
Dil jeet kur tmune sanam
Kya kar di ye haalat he
Nahi tumse mohhabat he
Chaho toh kasam lelo

Kyon hairaan hoti tum
Meri batoon ko sunkar ke
mohhabat naam kaise du
nahi mujhme himaakat he
Tumhe to poojta hu mein
Tu meri ‘ibaadat ‘ he
Nahi tumse mohhabat he
Chaho toh kasam lelo!


Prateek



Prateek Ji.. Ek kavita ki kitaab apni bhi chhapwaani padegi aapko..

Is khoobsurti se likha hai aapne, ki bus, jaane kitni hi baar dil ne "Waah Ustaad Waah" kaha hoga..  Clapping Smiley

On Serious Note... Apni kavitaao ki kitaab chhapwaaiye jaldi se, aur sabse pehle uski copy mujhe chahiye..   Usual Smile
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«Reply #53 on: November 18, 2008, 06:27:25 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on August 31, 2008, 10:05:15 AM
wahi subah suhani ho,
hawaon ki rawani ho,
parinde neend se jaagen,
meri cycle purani ho,
fir saath me tum ho,
waqt ki meherbaani ho,
sadak pe door talak chaayi,
sunsaan veerani ho,
aise me teri nazron me,
wo kashish ruhani ho,

nazren churakar tera meri
simt take jana,
zulfen sambhale to kabhi,
kittabon ko sambhlana,
baaten karne bhar ko mera bhi,
bahane chun chun kar lana,
tumhaara chupchap chalna aur,
mera bas bolte jana,
kya kya ab mai bolun,
mera bas sochte jana,
tere samne aa kar,
sab gad bada jana

chalo bas bhi karo ab,
lout aao aaj me "bekarar"
beet gaya, na loutega,
ab waqt wo purana


Haye Oye... Kya baat hai...  Shocked Even More
Kiski yaad aa rahi hai Sanjeev Ji..
Sach sach bataaiye, koi bahaana nahin chalega.. Ab itna khoobsurat toh practical experience ke baad hi likha jaa sakta hai.. Laughing hard

Yahan toh.. kuch na kuch hum bhi jaroor likhege.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #54 on: November 18, 2008, 06:52:06 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on August 31, 2008, 10:05:15 AM
wahi subah suhani ho,
hawaon ki rawani ho,
parinde neend se jaagen,
meri cycle purani ho,
fir saath me tum ho,
waqt ki meherbaani ho,
sadak pe door talak chaayi,
sunsaan veerani ho,
aise me teri nazron me,
wo kashish ruhani ho,

nazren churakar tera meri
simt take jana,
zulfen sambhale to kabhi,
kittabon ko sambhlana,
baaten karne bhar ko mera bhi,
bahane chun chun kar lana,
tumhaara chupchap chalna aur,
mera bas bolte jana,
kya kya ab mai bolun,
mera bas sochte jana,
tere samne aa kar,
sab gad bada jana

chalo bas bhi karo ab,
lout aao aaj me "bekarar"
beet gaya, na loutega,
ab waqt wo purana


Sanjeev ji.. Aapki is khoobsurat nazm se inspire ho kar ek chhoti si, adni si koshish hamari bhi..



Wohi subah ho sardi ki,
Kampkampaata sa jaada ho..
Sajj ke ghar se main niklun,
Tumse milne ka waada ho..
Wo Local bus ka safar mera,
Jiska afsos tumhe jyaada ho.. Usual Smile

Shikayat kar ke rooth jaana,
Pakad kar kaan ko phir manaana.,
Woh sataana deir takk mera,
Kankhiyon se dekhna chehra...
Barf se haath jamte ho,
Magar jazbaat pighalte ho..
Malna baar baar haanthon ko,
Rokna kitkitaane se daanton ko..

Tumhaare coat ki jebon mein,
Doono ki ungliyaan milna,
Surkh gaalon pe nazar teri,
Hazaaron khawaab ka khilna..
Tumhaari baaton ka pitaara ho,
Bina shart sab kuch gawaara ho..
Rakhna sang sang kadam apna,
Tumhare kaandhe ka sahaara ho..

Chalo hum bhi laut aate hai,
Phir se aaj me "MahiYa"..
Guzarish tum se karti hoon,
Ho sakey toh sunn lena...
Apne labon par tum bhi bus,
Dua yeh ek hi rakhna,
Darmiyaan tumhare hamare beech,
Bhale hi jahaan yeh saara ho,
Yaadon mein hi sahi, kabhi apni
Wohi hanseen mulakaat dobaara ho..
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«Reply #55 on: November 18, 2008, 08:00:46 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on November 18, 2008, 06:52:06 AM
Sanjeev ji.. Aapki is khoobsurat nazm se inspire ho kar ek chhoti si, adni si koshish hamari bhi..



Wohi subah ho sardi ki,
Kampkampaata sa jaada ho..
Sajj ke ghar se main niklun,
Tumse milne ka waada ho..
Wo Local bus ka safar mera,
Jiska afsos tumhe jyaada ho.. Usual Smile

Shikayat kar ke rooth jaana,
Pakad kar kaan ko phir manaana.,
Woh sataana deir takk mera,
Kankhiyon se dekhna chehra...
Barf se haath jamte ho,
Magar jazbaat pighalte ho..
Malna baar baar haanthon ko,
Rokna kitkitaane se daanton ko..

Tumhaare coat ki jebon mein,
Doono ki ungliyaan milna,
Surkh gaalon pe nazar teri,
Hazaaron khawaab ka khilna..
Tumhaari baaton ka pitaara ho,
Bina shart sab kuch gawaara ho..
Rakhna sang sang kadam apna,
Tumhare kaandhe ka sahaara ho..

Chalo hum bhi laut aate hai,
Phir se aaj me "MahiYa"..
Guzarish tum se karti hoon,
Ho sakey toh sunn lena...
Apne labon par tum bhi bus,
Dua yeh ek hi rakhna,
Darmiyaan tumhare hamare beech,
Bhale hi jahaan yeh saara ho,
Yaadon mein hi sahi, kabhi apni
Wohi hanseen mulakaat dobaara ho..

kya kahun...taareef me sach me shabd kam padne lage hain......shuru se ant tak kisi taaza hawa ke jhonke ki tarah chuti hai man ko aur ek anokhe aanand ke sagar me chod jaati hai ye panktiyan....bahooooooot hi khooooooob likha hai shikha Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #56 on: November 18, 2008, 05:41:40 PM »
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Wah!! hamesha ki tarah lajawab kavita ki rachan ki hai Mahiya... bahoot khoob... aise he likhti raho  Usual Smile
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«Reply #57 on: November 19, 2008, 07:44:24 PM »
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prateek ji nazr-e-inayat yahan bhi ho jaaye....gar samay ijajat de..
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«Reply #58 on: November 19, 2008, 07:53:21 PM »
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Bekarar ji aap nazre inaayat ki baat karte hey..aur hum nutmustuk ho kar khade hey aapki,pooja ji ki aur mahiya ji ki behtareen kalam ko pudh kur.kuch gyaan baato aap sub..mujhey bhee accha likhne ki khwaaish rehti hey!

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«Reply #59 on: November 19, 2008, 07:56:17 PM »
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Prateek ji hum bhi badi besabri se intzaar kar rahe hai ki app yaha kuch likhe..
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