nahi tumse mohhabat he,chaho toh kasam lelo

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«Reply #60 on: November 19, 2008, 07:58:30 PM »
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Bohat khoob nazam kahi Mahia ji aap nay...  Applause Applause

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«Reply #61 on: November 19, 2008, 08:02:22 PM »
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Kia khoob jwab hay Sanjeev ji ki nazam ka... khush rahien aap dono...

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«Reply #62 on: November 19, 2008, 08:34:54 PM »
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achcha laga..hadayat ji aapne padha.....shukriya dost
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«Reply #63 on: November 19, 2008, 08:38:41 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on November 19, 2008, 07:53:21 PM
Bekarar ji aap nazre inaayat ki baat karte hey..aur hum nutmustuk ho kar khade hey aapki,pooja ji ki aur mahiya ji ki behtareen kalam ko pudh kur.kuch gyaan baato aap sub..mujhey bhee accha likhne ki khwaaish rehti hey!

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janab-e-aali,
humesha dusaron ko achcha likhne ke liye prerit karne ke liye...aapka jitna shukriya kaha jaaye kam hai....
lekin bhai aaj to kuch ho hi jaaye yahan....aapki kalam se bhi...
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«Reply #64 on: November 19, 2008, 08:52:02 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on November 19, 2008, 08:34:54 PM
achcha laga..hadayat ji aapne padha.....shukriya dost

u r always welcome Bekarar ji..
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«Reply #65 on: November 24, 2008, 11:09:00 AM »
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Wohi subah ho sardi ki,
Kampkampaata sa jaada ho..
Sajj ke ghar se main niklun,
Tumse milne ka waada ho..
Wo Local bus ka safar mera,
Jiska afsos tumhe jyaada ho.. Usual Smile

Shikayat kar ke rooth jaana,
Pakad kar kaan ko phir manaana.,
Woh sataana deir takk mera,
Kankhiyon se dekhna chehra...
Barf se haath jamte ho,
Magar jazbaat pighalte ho..
Malna baar baar haanthon ko,
Rokna kitkitaane se daanton ko..

Tumhaare coat ki jebon mein,
Doono ki ungliyaan milna,
Surkh gaalon pe nazar teri,
Hazaaron khawaab ka khilna..
Tumhaari baaton ka pitaara ho,
Bina shart sab kuch gawaara ho..
Rakhna sang sang kadam apna,
Tumhare kaandhe ka sahaara ho..

Chalo hum bhi laut aate hai,
Phir se aaj me "MahiYa"..
Guzarish tum se karti hoon,
Ho sakey toh sunn lena...
Apne labon par tum bhi bus,
Dua yeh ek hi rakhna,
Darmiyaan tumhare hamare beech,
Bhale hi jahaan yeh saara ho,
Yaadon mein hi sahi, kabhi apni
Wohi hanseen mulakaat dobaara ho..[/size][/font][/center][/quote]


duniya ko chahe na gawaara ho
pur haan,woh mulaakat dubaara ho
is khata se mil jaaye soo khanjar
aisi koi diwaani shaam awaara ho

kuch udhad si gayi hey us coat ki jebey
pur kashish ungliyon mein ub bhee hey baaki
hatheli thaamna tum bina sochey bina samjhe
meri aankhon mein fir paana jannat ka nazaara ho

duniya ko chahe na gawaara ho
pur haan, woh mulaakat dubaara ho

yeh mulakaat bhee lekin,judaai de ke jaayegi
pur is shushk jeevan mein koi chingaari to aayegi
bade armaan hey kuchley,zamaane ke dur se ub talak
khud ko behkaaye aur sawaare hum,aisa koi to ishaara ho

duniya ko chahe na gawaara ho
pur haan,woh mulaakat dubaara ho
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«Reply #66 on: November 24, 2008, 08:03:14 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on November 24, 2008, 11:09:00 AM
duniya ko chahe na gawaara ho
pur haan,woh mulaakat dubaara ho
is khata se mil jaaye soo khanjar
aisi koi diwaani shaam awaara ho

kuch udhad si gayi hey us coat ki jebey
pur kashish ungliyon mein ub bhee hey baaki
hatheli thaamna tum bina sochey bina samjhe
meri aankhon mein fir paana jannat ka nazaara ho

duniya ko chahe na gawaara ho
pur haan, woh mulaakat dubaara ho

yeh mulakaat bhee lekin,judaai de ke jaayegi
pur is shushk jeevan mein koi chingaari to aayegi
bade armaan hey kuchley,zamaane ke dur se ub talak
khud ko behkaaye aur sawaare hum,aisa koi to ishaara ho

duniya ko chahe na gawaara ho
pur haan,woh mulaakat dubaara ho

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WAH WAH WAH!! Kaya baat hai Prateek ji hamesha ki tarah kamal ka likha hai apne.... bahoot khoob!!!
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«Reply #67 on: November 25, 2008, 05:13:15 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 24, 2008, 08:03:14 PM
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WAH WAH WAH!! Kaya baat hai Prateek ji hamesha ki tarah kamal ka likha hai apne.... bahoot khoob!!!


Bahut shukriya pooja ji-aapne bhee hamesha ki tarah meri saadharan likhi panktiyo ko kammal ka bata hausla badhaaya. Dil se shukriya.
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«Reply #68 on: November 25, 2008, 06:53:16 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on November 25, 2008, 05:13:15 AM

Bahut shukriya pooja ji-aapne bhee hamesha ki tarah meri saadharan likhi panktiyo ko kammal ka bata hausla badhaaya. Dil se shukriya.

yah apka sadapan hai jo apni itani achi rachna ko app sadharan bata rahe hai.... yakin kare... apki lekhni se bahoot sikhne ko mil raha hai... app bahoot kamal ka likhte hai prateek ji aor yah suchaai hai!!
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«Reply #69 on: February 01, 2009, 04:51:18 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 25, 2008, 06:53:16 AM
yah apka sadapan hai jo apni itani achi rachna ko app sadharan bata rahe hai.... yakin kare... apki lekhni se bahoot sikhne ko mil raha hai... app bahoot kamal ka likhte hai prateek ji aor yah suchaai hai!!


aapki galatfahmiyaan bani rahe,aameen!!
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«Reply #70 on: February 02, 2009, 07:16:17 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on November 24, 2008, 11:09:00 AM
Wohi subah ho sardi ki,
Kampkampaata sa jaada ho..
Sajj ke ghar se main niklun,
Tumse milne ka waada ho..
Wo Local bus ka safar mera,
Jiska afsos tumhe jyaada ho.. Usual Smile

Shikayat kar ke rooth jaana,
Pakad kar kaan ko phir manaana.,
Woh sataana deir takk mera,
Kankhiyon se dekhna chehra...
Barf se haath jamte ho,
Magar jazbaat pighalte ho..
Malna baar baar haanthon ko,
Rokna kitkitaane se daanton ko..

Tumhaare coat ki jebon mein,
Doono ki ungliyaan milna,
Surkh gaalon pe nazar teri,
Hazaaron khawaab ka khilna..
Tumhaari baaton ka pitaara ho,
Bina shart sab kuch gawaara ho..
Rakhna sang sang kadam apna,
Tumhare kaandhe ka sahaara ho..

Chalo hum bhi laut aate hai,
Phir se aaj me "MahiYa"..
Guzarish tum se karti hoon,
Ho sakey toh sunn lena...
Apne labon par tum bhi bus,
Dua yeh ek hi rakhna,
Darmiyaan tumhare hamare beech,
Bhale hi jahaan yeh saara ho,
Yaadon mein hi sahi, kabhi apni
Wohi hanseen mulakaat dobaara ho..[/size][/font][/center]


duniya ko chahe na gawaara ho
pur haan,woh mulaakat dubaara ho
is khata se mil jaaye soo khanjar
aisi koi diwaani shaam awaara ho

kuch udhad si gayi hey us coat ki jebey
pur kashish ungliyon mein ub bhee hey baaki
hatheli thaamna tum bina sochey bina samjhe
meri aankhon mein fir paana jannat ka nazaara ho

duniya ko chahe na gawaara ho
pur haan, woh mulaakat dubaara ho

yeh mulakaat bhee lekin,judaai de ke jaayegi
pur is shushk jeevan mein koi chingaari to aayegi
bade armaan hey kuchley,zamaane ke dur se ub talak
khud ko behkaaye aur sawaare hum,aisa koi to ishaara ho

duniya ko chahe na gawaara ho
pur haan,woh mulaakat dubaara ho





Bohat khoob Prateek ji... Bohat soch kay likhtay ho umeed hay aur bhe aacha kaha kero gay...

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«Reply #71 on: February 05, 2009, 04:24:06 AM »
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Bahut Der Se Iss Thread Ki Har Kavita Ko Padhe Jaa Raha Tha,Ek Ek Kavita,Dil Ko Chu Jaati Hai..Bahut Hi Saral Akhsaro Mein Yahan Par Dil Ki Baatein Ki Gayi Hai..Prateekji,SanjeevBro,Pooja,Mahiya,Syed Randeri Saheb..Sabne Bahut Khoob Likha.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #72 on: March 02, 2009, 07:25:00 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 05, 2009, 04:24:06 AM
Bahut Der Se Iss Thread Ki Har Kavita Ko Padhe Jaa Raha Tha,Ek Ek Kavita,Dil Ko Chu Jaati Hai..Bahut Hi Saral Akhsaro Mein Yahan Par Dil Ki Baatein Ki Gayi Hai..Prateekji,SanjeevBro,Pooja,Mahiya,Syed Randeri Saheb..Sabne Bahut Khoob Likha.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukaria Khwaish ji... apki taraf se bhui kuch ho jaata!!
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«Reply #73 on: March 02, 2009, 08:09:13 PM »
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Quote from: sjid hadayat on February 02, 2009, 07:16:17 PM
Bohat khoob Prateek ji... Bohat soch kay likhtay ho umeed hay aur bhe aacha kaha kero gay...

Sajid Hadayat

shukria sajid hadyat ji saraahna ka.soch kar isliye likhna padta hai kyonki diggajo ke beech likhna padta hai,warna hum jaise noseekhiye ko kaun poochega bhala!
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«Reply #74 on: March 02, 2009, 08:11:19 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 05, 2009, 04:24:06 AM
Bahut Der Se Iss Thread Ki Har Kavita Ko Padhe Jaa Raha Tha,Ek Ek Kavita,Dil Ko Chu Jaati Hai..Bahut Hi Saral Akhsaro Mein Yahan Par Dil Ki Baatein Ki Gayi Hai..Prateekji,SanjeevBro,Pooja,Mahiya,Syed Randeri Saheb..Sabne Bahut Khoob Likha.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


aapne utsaah badha dete hai to sakoon mehsoos ho jaata hai,khwaish ji.
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