nai nai siii lagti hai............

by chanda on December 05, 2005, 07:16:47 AM
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Nai nai si lagti hai ye zindagi tere aane ke baad.
Gham judaii ka khatam kar dega hume tere jaane ke baad.
Har kami gawara hain sanam, gar saath ho tumhara.
Jaane anjaane ban gaye ho tum jine ka sahara.
Teri yaadon mein doobe huay hain ab subho shaam mere.
Neend to jaati rahi, ab mere khaab bhi ho gaey hain tere.
Zulfon ko raat, chehre ko chaand jab se keh gaey ho tum,
bheed mein sab se juda aur haseen mujhe bana gaey ho tum.
Yaadon se teri behalta nahi ab dil ye mera.
Such ho jaaye sapna mera gar ban jaaon saaya main tera
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«Reply #1 on: December 07, 2005, 06:38:40 PM »
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Har kami gawara hain sanam, gar saath ho tumhara.
Jaane anjaane ban gaye ho tum jine ka sahara.
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Yaadon se teri behalta nahi ab dil ye mera.
Such ho jaaye sapna mera gar ban jaaon saaya main tera


bhut vadhiya hai chanda,, gud work!!!


the next one is specially for u !!!,,if u like it then plz tell me
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«Reply #2 on: December 07, 2005, 06:45:07 PM »
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ik raat c mere ishq wargi,
ik chann c ohdi shakal warga,
ik badal c wich opra jiha,
ik tara c mere dil warga,
Badal ne aakhar nu chann luko liya,
us tare da kise ne sajjan kho liya,
Chan jad badal de wich poori tarah luk gya,
bina chanani to aakhr oh tara tut giya,
Holi-Holi karke phir raat muk gai,
mere vi ishq wali baat muk gai,
Hun vi oh chann kinia te apni chanani sutda hai,
par afsos hun roz raat nu ik nava tara tutda hai.
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«Reply #3 on: December 08, 2005, 06:10:12 AM »
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woowoowowoowow........janab
aap nay bohut khoob kaha......aap tau bohut achay shayar hain......nice......bohut acha hai...thanxx alot for sharing........
GOOD LUCK FOR THE FUTURE
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«Reply #4 on: December 08, 2005, 03:34:23 PM »
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thnkssssssss 4 appreciation main koi shayar nai haiga,, jo dil ch bakwass jeha aaunda hai uh lik denda han,, shayara tan mainu tu lagdi,, bhut hi vadhiya likdi hai tu,, sidha dil te aa ke lagda,, u r to0 gud...!!!!!!!!!11
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«Reply #5 on: December 08, 2005, 05:59:03 PM »
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gr8 job both of u.....dil ke jazbaaton  ko  likh pana hi to shayari ban jaata hai...dont underestimate urself BDs... keep writing
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«Reply #6 on: December 09, 2005, 01:34:09 PM »
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nikki ji eh dil di tan saari bimaari aa
this one is for 4 u


Keete kaul krar jhuthe pai jande ne,
sohne jad v milde laare laa jande ne.
Kiven kahie k o sanu pyar nahi karde,
aounde jande jo najran mila jande ne.
 Ki husan dee kraa tareef ohde,
o tan chann nu v maat pa jande ne.
Taan ki je oh saade na hoe,
ajj v oh tak k sanu sharma jande ne.....
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«Reply #7 on: December 11, 2005, 07:39:41 PM »
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wah ji wah padhh ke dil garden-2 ho giya..

jehda dil dhadkda hai kise de pyar vich
uhnu salaam...
jis dil ch vasda hai rabb warga yaar ..
uhnu salaam....
jisda dharam, imaan usda rabb varga yaar
uhnu salaam

jisdi har khushi yaar di khushi ch hove
jehda yaar di khushi layi aap gaman(sorrows) de samunder tarr jaye

eho jahe dil te dildaar duniya ch ghat hi milde ne
odan tan pyar karan wale har nukkad te milde ne
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«Reply #8 on: December 12, 2005, 03:17:09 PM »
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ae,Ishq nachave gali gali,
Te yaari nachave jahan,
BULLE SHAH dovan nu ched na baithi,
Je ek ch har sah dena painda tan duje ch rakhni paindi tali te jaan.
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«Reply #9 on: December 13, 2005, 01:48:03 PM »
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hello chanda
kya khubh likha hain keep on good work... Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: December 14, 2005, 08:15:11 AM »
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hellooo.....all
thanxx alot for liking it.....
and burning jee aap nay bohut acha likha hai....sab nay acha likha hai
good luck
bye
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«Reply #11 on: December 14, 2005, 04:05:48 PM »
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thnks chanda but i didnt write this!!!

its THE GREAT BULLE SHAH
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«Reply #12 on: December 21, 2005, 05:04:17 AM »
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gr8 job both of you.....dil ke jazbaaton  ko  likh pana hi to shayari ban jaata hai...dont underestimate urself BDs... keep writing

u r so right nikki...so BDs u shouldn't put ur self down...u r really good at poetry......keep it up......and go for more.....
and thanxx for ur appreciations I_L_G.....
thanxx......
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«Reply #13 on: December 21, 2005, 08:32:18 AM »
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gr8 job both of you.....dil ke jazbaaton  ko  likh pana hi to shayari ban jaata hai...dont underestimate urself BDs... keep writing

u r so right nikki...so BDs u shouldn't put ur self down...u r really good at poetry......keep it up......and go for more.....
and thanxx for ur appreciations I_L_G.....
thanxx......
thnks nikki n chanda
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«Reply #14 on: December 21, 2005, 08:36:02 AM »
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Akhan vich aa ke ruk jande ne hanju,
         palkan tak aa ke suk jande ne hanju...
         dil karda a ehna nu wha dia,
         per dostan nu hasdeyan vekh muk jande ne hanju.



chanda yeh" I_L_G" kya hai?Huh?
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