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Dosto do shabda bade popular hain LOVE or ARRANGE, kuch log kitni bhi koshish karen LOVE unke liye nahi hota, shayad me eise hi logon me se ek hun...
par ARRANGE me bhi LOV ko dhundne se chookna nahi chahta isiliye ye naa jante huye bhi ki wo kaun hai kaisi hogi..me apni kalpana me hi usse pyaar karta hun..sachcha bahut sachcha pyaar...
ye kuchh panktiyan mere eise hi ek khayal par adharit hain...shayad apko pasand aaye..
Har aas meri tum bin pyasi hai
tum aao to nainon ko paani mile
pata nahi kaisa intezar he ye ke poori diniya sooni si lagti hai...
saanse shayad bas tumhare intezar me chalti hain
tum aao to dhadkan ko khoi rawaani mile
naa din ki khabar he na raat ka ehsaas...
kuchh soojhta nahin mujhe tumhare siva kahin
tum aao to is kalam ko kahaani mile
akaash ko dekhta hun to sare tare itni bheed me bhi akele se or raat murjhaai si lagti hai...
kitne akele hain tumhare bina ye tare chanda
tum aao to is raat ko apni jawaani mile
wo din ab kahan rah jab pehli bar dil dhadka tha or kehne se bhi darta tha...
is sachche dil ka kachcha pyaar ab kachcha kahan
tum aao to meri muhabbat sayaani mile~
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«Reply #1 on: January 19, 2011, 10:59:36 AM » |
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kyaa baat hai abhi ji.....
soooo sweet...
tum aao to naino ko paani mile...
kya baat kahi hai...
toooo... good ji...
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«Reply #3 on: January 19, 2011, 11:09:03 AM » |
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AbhiTamrakar
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«Reply #4 on: January 19, 2011, 11:12:28 AM » |
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shukriya priya ji ...
yunhi sath rahiye~
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AbhiTamrakar
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«Reply #5 on: January 19, 2011, 11:19:25 AM » |
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AbhiTamrakar
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«Reply #6 on: January 19, 2011, 11:31:44 AM » |
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wowww.bro
maja aa gaya yaar..........2nd para to gajab ka he ........best of best bro........baht hi sweet poetry........
kash koi hamari aawaj ka bhi is kadar diwana hota........hay re kismat....
yunhi sath raho bhai~ |
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«Reply #7 on: January 19, 2011, 11:45:55 AM » |
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jo humse gussa hote hain ..baat tak nahin karte..dekh kar andekha karte hain...post pe formality bhi nahinkarte...hum bhi unko ye sab karne ko bhttttttttttttttt saare thnku dena chahte hain....
aapke thnku sab aapko mubarak ab ye sara ehsaan ka bojh aap hi coolie banke uthao....
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«Reply #9 on: January 19, 2011, 12:21:49 PM » |
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aye hoye kya baat hai Abhi ji. kaash mai ek ladki hota aur aap ye mere liye likhte--mujhe patane ke liye  mai 10 baar patpata jaata. "" naino ko paani mile kash aisa hota ke ab-- mere aansuon ko bhi kuch pani mile "" thanx " |
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«Reply #11 on: January 19, 2011, 02:41:46 PM » |
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Very Nice Poetry ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ...  Good Expression ... ! aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... ! duaaon ke saath ... ! |
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AbhiTamrakar
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«Reply #13 on: January 20, 2011, 07:46:22 AM » |
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Wah Kya Baat Hai Bahut Khub bhi Bro...
Khsuh Rahiye...
~Shihab~
shukriya shihab bhaii.. yunhi sath nibhate rahiye~ |
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AbhiTamrakar
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«Reply #14 on: January 20, 2011, 07:48:02 AM » |
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jo humse gussa hote hain ..baat tak nahin karte..dekh kar andekha karte hain...post pe formality bhi nahinkarte...hum bhi unko ye sab karne ko bhttttttttttttttt saare thnku dena chahte hain....
aapke thnku sab aapko mubarak ab ye sara ehsaan ka bojh aap hi coolie banke uthao....
ohhoo jao anuji me apse isi bat ke liye gussa tha ab or jyada gussaa hunn....khoob sara gussa ~ |
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