Naino ko paani mile~

by AbhiTamrakar on January 19, 2011, 10:53:29 AM

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AbhiTamrakar

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«Reply #15 on: January 20, 2011, 07:50:25 AM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on January 19, 2011, 12:16:52 PM

Wah wah kya baat hai ABHI.... Applause

abhi tak kalpana k ghode he dauda rahe ho..... DOH

koi real KALPANA dhund lo naa..... Winking

Khushi kay aansoo bahaana chahte ho
Tum Aas kee pyaas bujhana chahte ho

Mere bin kya haal ho gaya hai tera
Jaise sab kuchh lutt gaya hai tera

Naa raat ko neend aati hai tujhko
Naa din mai chain aata hai tujhko

O-mere Romio naa ho tu itnaa udaas
Aa rahi hai teri Juliet tere paass

hahahaha..

aise ayegi juliot ..rehhen do mat aaoo..

yunhi sath raho koyaliya~


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: Naino ko paani mile~

«Reply #16 on: January 20, 2011, 07:51:54 AM »

Quote from: nirala on January 19, 2011, 12:21:49 PM

aye hoye kya baat hai Abhi ji.
kaash mai ek ladki hota aur aap ye mere liye likhte--mujhe patane ke liye Usual Smile

mai 10 baar patpata jaata.
""
naino ko paani mile
kash aisa hota ke ab--
mere aansuon ko bhi kuch pani mile
""
thanx
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hahaha fir to achha hua aap ladki nahi hain...

mai bach gaya apse..

shukriya pasand karne ka ..

yunhi sath rahiye`


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Re: Naino ko paani mile~

«Reply #17 on: January 20, 2011, 07:53:00 AM »

ooo abhi ji...waise bi aap gussa hi ho mujhse.....ab aur gussa kya hota hai ji....
raho aap bhi gussa ab main bhi aur zyada gussaaaaaaa hunnnnnn......
kattiiiii......


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Re: Naino ko paani mile~

«Reply #18 on: January 20, 2011, 07:55:41 AM »

wah Abhi ji bahut khubsurat likha aapne.
kam lafzon me pura haal e dil kamaal hai.
bas ye hunar to aapme hi hai ji.
aapko bahut saari duayen
aapki ichha poori ho:)
sukriya
Kuch gyan e gur likhne ka nhi diya aapne hume.
hum naaraz hain sad5


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Re: Naino ko paani mile~

«Reply #19 on: January 20, 2011, 08:05:06 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on January 19, 2011, 12:30:32 PM

Beautiful poetry!!!! Bahut bahut Khoob!!!

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat ehsaas Abhiji..

shukriya khwasih bhaii...par ye kya ye ji fir kahan se gaya mer nam ke sath..~lkoi galti ho gayi kya~


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Re: Naino ko paani mile~

«Reply #20 on: January 21, 2011, 09:07:17 AM »

Quote from: Anshumali on January 19, 2011, 02:41:46 PM

Very Nice Poetry ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... Clapping Smiley

Good Expression ... !

aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !

Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on January 19, 2011, 02:46:04 PM

BAHUT KHOOB,DEEP FEELINGS EMBEDED.
aBHI JI

naresh ji , suresh ji aap dono ka bahu bahut dhanyawad aapne pasand kiya or saraha..

yunhi sath nibhate rahiye~


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Re: Naino ko paani mile~

«Reply #21 on: January 21, 2011, 10:23:01 AM »

Quote from: killbill on January 20, 2011, 07:55:41 AM

duaon ke liye apka shukraguzar hun kb ji..

yunhi sath rahiye..

or jahn tak kuchh sikhane ki bat hai..

jo ho sakega or mere hisab se sahi hoga karuga aap likhte rahiye..

khush rahiye~


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Re: Naino ko paani mile~

«Reply #22 on: January 21, 2011, 05:29:48 PM »

Kya Baat Hai Abhi Ji Bahut Hi Khubsurat Aapne Apne HiJajbaat Likhe Hai Padhkar Bahut Accha Laga U Hi Likhte Rahiye Aur Khush Rahiye

Rishi


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Re: Naino ko paani mile~

«Reply #23 on: January 25, 2011, 11:54:31 AM »

Quote from: @kaash on January 21, 2011, 09:34:49 AM

bahut khoob likha hai Abhi ji,yun hi likhte rahen,daad kubool karen

khush rahen,muskurate rahen

Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on January 21, 2011, 05:29:48 PM

Kya Baat Hai Abhi Ji Bahut Hi Khubsurat Aapne Apne HiJajbaat Likhe Hai Padhkar Bahut Accha Laga U Hi Likhte Rahiye Aur Khush Rahiye

Rishi

shukriya ahaksh or rishi ji..

apne padha waqt diya or pasand kiya tahe dil s apka shukriya ..

yunhi sath rahiye~


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