Naino ko paani mile~

by AbhiTamrakar on January 19, 2011, 10:53:29 AM
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«Reply #15 on: January 20, 2011, 07:50:25 AM »
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Wah wah kya baat hai ABHI.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
abhi tak kalpana k ghode he dauda rahe ho..... DOH DOH DOH
koi real KALPANA dhund lo naa..... Winking Winking Winking

Khushi kay aansoo bahaana chahte ho
Tum Aas kee pyaas bujhana chahte ho

Mere bin kya haal ho gaya hai tera
Jaise sab kuchh lutt gaya hai tera

Naa raat ko neend aati hai tujhko
Naa din mai chain aata hai tujhko

O-mere Romio naa ho tu itnaa udaas
Aa rahi hai teri Juliet tere paass


hahahaha..

aise ayegi juliot ..rehhen do mat aaoo..

yunhi sath raho koyaliya~
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«Reply #16 on: January 20, 2011, 07:51:54 AM »
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aye hoye kya baat hai Abhi ji.
kaash mai ek ladki hota aur aap ye mere liye likhte--mujhe patane ke liye Usual Smile
mai 10 baar patpata jaata.
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naino ko paani mile
    kash aisa hota ke ab--
mere aansuon ko bhi kuch pani mile
""
thanx
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hahaha fir to achha hua aap ladki nahi hain...

mai bach gaya apse..

shukriya pasand karne ka ..

yunhi sath rahiye`
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«Reply #17 on: January 20, 2011, 07:53:00 AM »
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ooo abhi ji...waise bi aap gussa hi ho mujhse.....ab aur gussa kya hota hai ji....
raho aap bhi gussa ab main bhi aur zyada gussaaaaaaa hunnnnnn......
kattiiiii......
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«Reply #18 on: January 20, 2011, 07:55:41 AM »
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wah Abhi ji bahut khubsurat likha aapne.
kam lafzon me pura haal e dil kamaal hai.
bas ye hunar to aapme hi hai ji.
aapko bahut saari duayen
aapki ichha poori ho:)
sukriya
Kuch gyan e gur likhne ka nhi diya aapne hume.
hum naaraz hain sad5
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«Reply #19 on: January 20, 2011, 08:05:06 AM »
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Beautiful poetry!!!! Bahut bahut Khoob!!!

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat ehsaas Abhiji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


shukriya khwasih bhaii...par ye kya ye ji fir kahan se gaya mer nam ke sath..~lkoi galti ho gayi kya~
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«Reply #20 on: January 21, 2011, 09:07:17 AM »
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Very Nice Poetry ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ...  Clapping Smiley

Good Expression ... !

aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !
BAHUT KHOOB,DEEP FEELINGS EMBEDED.
 aBHI JI
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


naresh ji , suresh ji aap dono ka bahu bahut dhanyawad aapne pasand kiya or saraha..

yunhi sath nibhate rahiye~
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«Reply #21 on: January 21, 2011, 10:23:01 AM »
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wah Abhi ji bahut khubsurat likha aapne.
kam lafzon me pura haal e dil kamaal hai.
bas ye hunar to aapme hi hai ji.
aapko bahut saari duayen
aapki ichha poori ho:)
sukriya
Kuch gyan e gur likhne ka nhi diya aapne hume.
hum naaraz hain sad5

duaon ke liye apka shukraguzar hun kb ji..

yunhi sath rahiye..

or jahn tak kuchh sikhane ki bat hai..

jo ho sakega or mere hisab se sahi hoga karuga aap likhte rahiye..

khush rahiye~
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«Reply #22 on: January 21, 2011, 05:29:48 PM »
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Kya Baat Hai Abhi Ji Bahut Hi Khubsurat Aapne Apne HiJajbaat Likhe Hai Padhkar Bahut Accha Laga U Hi Likhte Rahiye Aur Khush Rahiye

Rishi
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«Reply #23 on: January 25, 2011, 11:54:31 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai Abhi ji,yun hi likhte rahen,daad kubool karen

khush rahen,muskurate rahen
Kya Baat Hai Abhi Ji Bahut Hi Khubsurat Aapne Apne HiJajbaat Likhe Hai Padhkar Bahut Accha Laga U Hi Likhte Rahiye Aur Khush Rahiye

Rishi

shukriya ahaksh or rishi ji..

apne padha waqt diya or pasand kiya tahe dil s apka shukriya ..

yunhi sath rahiye~
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