**Najane woh ladki kaun hai**

by dead heart on June 26, 2009, 09:48:56 PM
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«Reply #15 on: June 28, 2009, 04:59:53 PM »
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A small addition to the poem...

Najane woh ladki kaun hai,
Jo chupke se meri tanhai ko todjaati hai,
Saath guzare hue palon se apni zindagi sajati hai,
Jo mere samandar jaise askhon ko nadi main tabdil karjati hai,
Najane woh ladki kaun hai...

Najane woh ladki kaun hai,
Jo mere dushmano ko rulati hai,
Mujhe dard dene walon ko bahaut tadpati hai,
Har baar meri rooh par ek jadoo sa karjati hai,
Najane woh ladki kaun hai...

~Rahim~
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«Reply #16 on: June 29, 2009, 11:47:36 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Rahim ..... Applause Applause Applause Badi pyarai hai ye ladki, jo bhi hai wo !
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«Reply #17 on: June 29, 2009, 12:00:47 PM »
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Shukriya Talat di!!Haan hai toh sahi lekin bas najane woh ladki kaun hai...
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«Reply #18 on: June 29, 2009, 12:03:20 PM »
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Hum dua karenge jaldi hi aapke khwaabon main haqiqat ka rang utar aaye.
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«Reply #19 on: June 29, 2009, 12:11:53 PM »
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Ameen...
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«Reply #20 on: June 29, 2009, 02:15:31 PM »
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A small addition to the poem...

Najane woh ladki kaun hai,
Jo chupke se meri tanhai ko todjaati hai,
Saath guzare hue palon se apni zindagi sajati hai,
Jo mere samandar jaise askhon ko nadi main tabdil karjati hai,
Najane woh ladki kaun hai...

Najane woh ladki kaun hai,
Jo mere dushmano ko rulati hai,
Mujhe dard dene walon ko bahaut tadpati hai,
Har baar meri rooh par ek jadoo sa karjati hai,
Najane woh ladki kaun hai...

~Rahim~

Yaar Rahim Bhai.. Waqai yaar Pata lagaao Ki Aakhir Yeh Pyaari si ladki Hai Kaun.. Hahahaha Winking

Bahut Hi Pyaari lines likhi hai Bhai.. Bahut hi Pyaari soch ke sath Dil ko chhoo jane wale alfaaz bikhere hain aapna yahan.. Bahut Khooooooob ek baar phir.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #21 on: June 29, 2009, 03:14:14 PM »
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A small addition to the poem...

Najane woh ladki kaun hai,
Jo chupke se meri tanhai ko todjaati hai,
Saath guzare hue palon se apni zindagi sajati hai,
Jo mere samandar jaise askhon ko nadi main tabdil karjati hai,
Najane woh ladki kaun hai...

Najane woh ladki kaun hai,
Jo mere dushmano ko rulati hai,
Mujhe dard dene walon ko bahaut tadpati hai,
Har baar meri rooh par ek jadoo sa karjati hai,
Najane woh ladki kaun hai...

~Rahim~
Beautiful addition .. Jaise char chand lag gaye hai. bahoot Khoob !
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dead heart
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«Reply #22 on: June 30, 2009, 07:38:57 AM »
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Shukriya Vikas bhaijan aur Divya di...Main koshish karunga ke iss ladki ko dhund bhi loon aur aur iss poem ko continue bhi karun...
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«Reply #23 on: July 02, 2009, 08:59:03 PM »
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Are waah..Rahim dost.. Clapping Smiley
Kya lines likhi hain aapne...
Mazaa aagaya...
Keep up the gud work.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #24 on: July 03, 2009, 05:49:37 PM »
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Shukriya Ahamad dost...
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dead heart
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«Reply #25 on: July 03, 2009, 09:00:37 PM »
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Shukriya Kaash bhaijan
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #26 on: December 18, 2009, 08:18:19 PM »
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A small addition to the poem...

Najane woh ladki kaun hai,
Jo chupke se meri tanhai ko todjaati hai,
Saath guzare hue palon se apni zindagi sajati hai,
Jo mere samandar jaise askhon ko nadi main tabdil karjati hai,
Najane woh ladki kaun hai...

Najane woh ladki kaun hai,
Jo mere dushmano ko rulati hai,
Mujhe dard dene walon ko bahaut tadpati hai,
Har baar meri rooh par ek jadoo sa karjati hai,
Najane woh ladki kaun hai...

~Rahim~
Good addition Rahim Bhai
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«Reply #27 on: December 19, 2009, 05:33:31 PM »
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Shukriya Rajesh jee
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