nakab

by kam15 on October 19, 2010, 01:31:03 AM
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vo jo mandir me bhagwan bane bedhe hai,
khushinyo ka mere
 saman dabaye bethe hai ,
tarasha hai jinhe, in hatho se,
 seene me tufan dabaye bedhe hai,
pinghla de jo is pathar ko ,
vo
ansuon ka sailab ,dabaye bethe hai,

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«Reply #1 on: October 19, 2010, 03:34:40 AM »
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i just little edited and properly posted ur poem Kam 15 ji...hope u wont mind...

bht hi pyari post hai ji bas isly kuch sahis e kar diya post....
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vo jo mandir me bhagwan bane baithe hai,
khushinyo ka mere saman dabaye baithe hai ,

tarasha hai jinhe,maine apne in hatho se,
seene me wo apne tufaan dabaaye baithe hai,

pighla de jo is pathar ki murat ko bhi,
yo ansuon ka sailab ,dabaye bethe hai,
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«Reply #2 on: October 19, 2010, 06:05:50 AM »
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baqhut badhiya likha he aapne ...kam jiii..behetareen labz ka sath hai har pankti me....~

isike sath anu ji aapne bhi achha ediot5 kiya hai~
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«Reply #3 on: October 26, 2010, 01:32:29 AM »
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thanks a lot for adding so nicely and encouraging me kasak ji .hop so always.
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«Reply #4 on: October 26, 2010, 01:41:00 AM »
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feel good. thanks for that.
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