NASEEB

by kamal aggarwal on February 11, 2011, 06:59:55 AM
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Ek toofan-sa dil me uth.ta hai
ek aag jigar me hoti hai
tanhania hi achi lagti hai
jab kisi se mohbt hoti hai

aa jaye raas jise ye jindgi
mohbt use haasil hoti hai
gar na ho wafai naseeb me
us badnaseeb par "MAUT" bhi roti hai.
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«Reply #1 on: February 11, 2011, 07:06:22 AM »
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veri nice lines kamal ji bohut khoob

wafaa ki talaash mein na jaane kitne fanaa ho  gaye
ishq ki panaah mein rehne wale kitne bepaanah ho gaye
maut bhi nahi aati jab dil [par chot lagti
zindagi bhi pal pal tab maut jaisi hi lagti hai
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«Reply #2 on: February 11, 2011, 07:18:26 AM »
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such kehten hain aap saahil ji   

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«Reply #3 on: February 11, 2011, 07:18:58 AM »
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wah kya baat h..
kuch achhi line mili aaj padhne ko
thanx
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«Reply #4 on: February 11, 2011, 07:36:13 AM »
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thx dear
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«Reply #5 on: February 11, 2011, 02:01:38 PM »
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thanku nirala ji
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«Reply #6 on: February 12, 2011, 12:51:53 AM »
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Quote from: kamal aggarwal on February 11, 2011, 06:59:55 AM
Ek toofan-sa dil me uth.ta hai
ek aag jigar me hoti hai
tanhania hi achi lagti hai
jab kisi se mohbt hoti hai

aa jaye raas jise ye jindgi
mohbt use haasil hoti hai
gar na ho wafai naseeb me
us badnaseeb par "MAUT" bhi roti hai.

Good One ... Kamal Ji !
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«Reply #7 on: February 12, 2011, 09:34:34 AM »
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thanku anshumali ji
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«Reply #8 on: February 13, 2011, 05:36:49 PM »
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Nice One Kamal JI
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«Reply #9 on: February 14, 2011, 04:28:01 PM »
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thanks rishi ji
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