Naveed e Sahar:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

mazHur

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Naveed e Sahar

can you guess the missing word??
Tip: the word starts with letter 'S'.

Ghazal

meri tareek ratoan mein bhar day .... Huh?

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her taraf noor hee noor kar day ...........

rah takte huay teri guzri umar
apne aanay kee ab tu khabar day.....

mein bura hee sahi tera aashiq tu hoon
gul nahi mangta sung e mar day ........

rooth kar yoon na ja mujh se jaan e wafa
koi ilzaam toe mujh pe dhar day ,,,,,,

teri aankhoan se chalke mae e angbeen
tishna lab hoon bus ik jaam bhar de.........

Ik nazar tu mere dil pe daale agar
mehr o mah se bhi tabinda kar de ............

shab gazeeda ko de de naveed e sahar
kehkashan mere dil me tu bhar de ..........


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Ritesh Modi

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Re: Naveed e Sahar

«Reply #1 on: December 13, 2012, 01:33:34 PM »

Saaqi


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Re: Naveed e Sahar

«Reply #2 on: December 13, 2012, 01:43:52 PM »

waah waah


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mkv

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Re: Naveed e Sahar

«Reply #3 on: December 13, 2012, 01:53:35 PM »

Wah wah wah Mazhur jee
bahr me likhi umda kalaam...
bahut bahut mubaarakbaad.
Applause

Guess karne ka kaam mushkil hai. kar bhi liya to sahi ghalat ka faisla kaise hoga. vaise aapna accha kiya..jagah khaali chorkar..'s' ki bandish bhi theek nahee. flexibility dena chaahiye."a-z"..just kidding


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aqsh

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Re: Naveed e Sahar

«Reply #4 on: December 13, 2012, 01:58:30 PM »

waaaaaaah kya baat hai


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Iftakhar Ahmad

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Re: Naveed e Sahar

«Reply #5 on: December 13, 2012, 02:13:40 PM »

Achhi ghazal hai Mazhur saheb, aur khaali jagah meiN Saaqi ya sanam ho sakta hai, per saaqi zyaada suitable hai.


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suman59

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Re: Naveed e Sahar

«Reply #6 on: December 13, 2012, 02:37:07 PM »


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riyaz106

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Re: Naveed e Sahar

«Reply #7 on: December 13, 2012, 04:07:03 PM »

Wah Mazhur ji bahot umdah ghazal kahi hai. Behr ke mutabiq missing word `sanam' ho sakta hai. Exact to aap hi janen.


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Re: Naveed e Sahar

«Reply #8 on: December 13, 2012, 07:49:32 PM »

Quote from: mazHur on December 13, 2012, 01:12:28 PM

Naveed e Sahar

can you guess the missing word??
Tip: the word starts with letter 'S'.

Ghazal

meri tareek ratoan mein bhar day .... Huh?

.. .
her taraf noor hee noor kar day ........... Applause

mere paas kuch chiraag kuch candle hain address do bhej deti hoon Usual Smile

rah takte huay teri guzri umar
apne aanay kee ab tu khabar day..... Applause

mera schedule bahut tight hai ji.secretary se pooch kar bataa ti hoon Usual Smile

mein bura hee sahi tera aashiq tu hoon
gul nahi mangta sung e mar day ........ Applause

acha zara apni buri adaton ka list to do phir faisla karoon gi Usual Smile

rooth kar yoon na ja mujh se jaan e wafa
koi ilzaam toe mujh pe dhar day ,,,,,, Applause

tum diwaane ho Usual Smile

teri aankhoan se chalke mae e angbeen
tishna lab hoon bus ik jaam bhar de......... Applause

paani peeo, coke peeo. sharaab buri cheez hai lever pe effect karta hai icon_flower

Ik nazar tu mere dil pe daale agar Applause

mehr o mah se bhi tabinda kar de ............

mujhe aaina tak dekhne ki fursat nahin aaj kal Usual Smile

shab gazeeda ko de de naveed e sahar
kehkashan mere dil me tu bhar de .......... Clapping Smiley

mujhe itni invitation hai ki usi se fursat nahin milti Usual Smile


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mazHur

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Re: Naveed e Sahar

«Reply #9 on: December 13, 2012, 08:05:25 PM »

Thank you, dear friends, for liking the poem.
Let me give you another tip: the missing word is found in the poem itself! I hope you can find it now!


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Re: Naveed e Sahar

«Reply #10 on: December 14, 2012, 12:51:42 AM »

very nice


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