~~~~~NAYA KHUMAAR HAI~~~~~

by vitasta on September 29, 2006, 10:27:50 PM
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yeh zindagi mein kaisi bahaar hai
chahat ka chaya jaise ik naya khumaar hai
yeh kaun aaya mujhse milne?Huh?
jiske baare mein likhne ko yeh kalam bekaraar hai.....

usne udaya hai hosh mera
hai!!.... kya kahun ab to bura haal hai
woh paas rahe to theek hun main
nahi to samne udasi ka ek janjaal hai
kya jane use khabar hai bhi ya nahi
ab mil jaye woh to zindagi kamal hai..........!!!!!!

hi every1...am here after a long loooooong time..plz review and tell me wht u think...n btw....did any1 miss me?Huh?
 :D   :wink:
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«Reply #1 on: September 30, 2006, 12:45:53 AM »
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kya baat hai vistasta ji!! :D:D:D:D:D
nice yaar :D:D:D
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«Reply #2 on: September 30, 2006, 02:17:53 PM »
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yeh zindagi mein kaisi bahaar hai
chahat ka chaya jaise ik naya khumaar hai
yeh kaun aaya mujhse milne?Huh?
jiske baare mein likhne ko yeh kalam bekaraar hai.....

usne udaya hai hosh mera
hai!!.... kya kahun ab to bura haal hai
woh paas rahe to theek hun main
nahi to samne udasi ka ek janjaal hai
kya jane use khabar hai bhi ya nahi
ab mil jaye woh to zindagi kamal hai..........!!!!!!

hi every1...am here after a long loooooong time..plz review and tell me wht you think...n btw....did any1 miss me?Huh?
 :D   :wink:


vitasta ji bahut khoob ek ek lavz khoobsuratt.. kisi ke pyar ka saaya......
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«Reply #3 on: September 30, 2006, 02:20:00 PM »
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Kaisa yeh naya khumar chhaya hai mujhper,
Saanson se teri mehkoon mein dilbar,
Har pal bekarari aur tadap ka saaya hai mujhper,
Tumhare pehloo mein aane se hi zara dhadkata hai yeh dil dilbar...........

gesu's koshish!!!!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: October 02, 2006, 09:05:44 PM »
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thanks a lot anjani and gesu!!!

lovely job gesu!!

saaya chu jaye tera bas aur kya chahiye
dil mein tu sama jaye bas aur kya chahiye
tu hi to hai mere jeene ka maksad
tu mil jaye to aur kya chahiye......
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«Reply #5 on: October 02, 2006, 09:09:41 PM »
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thanks a lot anjani and gesu!!!

lovely job gesu!!

saaya chu jaye tera bas aur kya chahiye
dil mein tu sama jaye bas aur kya chahiye
tu hi to hai mere jeene ka maksad
tu mil jaye to aur kya chahiye......


rooh teri mujhe mein baas jaaye aur kya chahiye
naam tera likh lein apne haath pe aur kya chahiye
isse zindagi ke safar ka humsafar hai tu
mil jaaye tera saath,,,tu humhe aur kya chahiye :D:D:D

vistasa too good!!! :D:D:D
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«Reply #6 on: October 02, 2006, 11:27:05 PM »
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good job Vitasta, Gesu and Anjani....
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«Reply #7 on: October 03, 2006, 03:35:05 AM »
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Vitasta ji.. bahut khoob  

gessu ji nice one...

shyetan bachi keya bat hia... bahut acha likha hia
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«Reply #8 on: October 03, 2006, 03:37:38 AM »
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agar har chehre mein uska  chehra nazar aata hai
agar har baato par uska naam leyte hain
agar ise pyar kehte hain toh haan
meine bhi kisise pyar kiya tah...
 
agar kisike inthzaar karne mein samaye nahin deykte
agar uskeu aane par dil jhoom uttha hain
agar ise pyar kehte hain toh haan
meine bhi kisise pyar kiya tah..
 
agar kisike dhoor jane ke baadh unki yaad satati hain
agar sab ke saat rehte huye bhi akele mehsoos kartein hain
agar ise pyar kehte hain toh haan
meine bhi kisise pyar kiya tah..
 
khud mein khud baatein karna
har pyarisi gaane par sirf hum donoka nazar aana
agar ise pyar kehte hain toh haan
meine bhi kisise pyar kiya tah...
 
agar uski dil mein pyar ki koyi jaga nahin
phir bhi uski pyar ki intzaar karna
agar ise pyar kehte hain to haan
meine bhi kisise pyar kiya tah.......
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«Reply #9 on: October 03, 2006, 10:39:22 AM »
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shukriya aur bahut khoob likha sabne... sonu ji nice avtaar.......
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«Reply #10 on: October 03, 2006, 06:01:16 PM »
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Gesu ji bahut bahut shulriyaa

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shukriya aur bahut khoob likha sabne... sonu ji nice avtaar.......
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«Reply #11 on: October 03, 2006, 09:42:44 PM »
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thnks anjani...the extension was really good!!!
thnks pooja.....
thnks sonu and u did a really gr8 job!!!
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«Reply #12 on: October 07, 2006, 07:13:30 AM »
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Vitasta ji bahut bahut shukriya... app bhi acha likhtey hai yeohi likhtey rahow...

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thnks anjani...the extension was really good!!!
thnks pooja.....
thnks sonu and you did a really gr8 job!!!
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«Reply #13 on: October 08, 2006, 11:14:59 PM »
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thnks sonu
abhi abhi chaya hai khumaar
aankhon mein hai uska intezaar
jaanti hun wo chahta hai kisi ko
jaane kyun karta nahi wo
apne pyaar ka zara bhi izhaar...
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«Reply #14 on: October 09, 2006, 04:00:42 AM »
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Vitasta Your most welcome.... her bar ki trha bahut acha likha hai... yeo hi likhtey rahu wonderful...

Tujhay kya sunaon mein dil-ruba
Tere samney mera haal hai
Teri ek nigaah ki baat hai
Meri zindagi ka sawaal hai

Tery husn per hai meri nazar
Mujhay subho-shaam ki kya khabar
Meri shaam hai teri justuju
Meri subah tera khayal hai

Mery dil jigar main sama bhi ja
Rahe kyun nazar ka bhi faasla
Ke tery bagair to jan-e-janna
Mujhay zindagi bhi muhaal hai

Meri her khushi tere dam se hai
Meri zindagi tere gam se hai
Tere dard se rahe be-khabar
Mere dil ki kab ye majaal hai


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thnks sonu
abhi abhi chaya hai khumaar
aankhon mein hai uska intezaar
jaanti hun wo chahta hai kisi ko
jaane kyun karta nahi wo
apne pyaar ka zara bhi izhaar...
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