Naya lag raha yeh jahan....

by punam on October 06, 2007, 08:28:20 AM
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Ek subha jab uthi nind se
naya naya laga yeh jahan
Na badla tha kuch sab tha kal jaisa
sochti rahi kyun badla hua nazar aa raha yeh jahan

soch me pad gayi...
yeh dil pe aaj pada kounsa saya
rangeen lag raha yeh jahan...
tabhi ek chehra aagaya saamne
kaha jaanu tumhi toh ho mera jahan

pyar hi pyar tha uss nazaron me
pata hi na chala main kho gayi kahan..
soch me pad gayi kahin yeh khwaab toh nahi
tabhi woh dheere se bola....
pakdo mera haath chalo saath bhoolake sara jahan...
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«Reply #1 on: October 06, 2007, 08:36:30 AM »
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Oye hoye :wink:

Punam

Wah ! wah ! Bahut khumar mein likha hai ji :D
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«Reply #2 on: October 06, 2007, 09:57:36 AM »
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Hoye..oye... tanku tanku...
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«Reply #3 on: October 06, 2007, 12:46:19 PM »
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Ek subha jab uthi nind se
naya naya laga yeh jahan
Na badla tha kuch sab tha kal jaisa
sochti rahi kyun badla hua nazar aa raha yeh jahan

soch me pad gayi...
yeh dil pe aaj pada kounsa saya
rangeen lag raha yeh jahan...
tabhi ek chehra aagaya saamne
kaha jaanu tumhi toh ho mera jahan

pyar hi pyar tha uss nazaron me
pata hi na chala main kho gayi kahan..
soch me pad gayi kahin yeh khwaab toh nahi
tabhi woh dheere se bola....
pakdo mera haath chalo saath bhoolake sara jahan...


Bahut khoob Punam... wah kya likha hai tumne.
Bahut accha laga padkar. Last para very good.  :D
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«Reply #4 on: October 06, 2007, 04:56:34 PM »
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Aaye-Hayeeeeeeee....!! PUNNU Kamaal Kar Diya Tune To.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Kya baat hai bhai Kya Baat hai..!! Behad Khubsoorat aur Mohabbat Bhare Ehasaas Likhe hain punam..!! Usual Smile Usual Smile

Padh kar Maza aa gaya.. Great Work.. =D> =D> =D> =D>

Vicky
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«Reply #5 on: October 06, 2007, 05:08:33 PM »
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A Hit One....Keep Writing like it..!!!
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«Reply #6 on: October 07, 2007, 11:55:15 AM »
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Roja di thanx ...aap ko acha laga dekh mujhe bhi acha laga....

Oye ..Hoye vicky ji baat kya ho sakti hai... aap ka pasand aa gaya dekh jee khooooosh hogaya....

Gourav ji..thanx ...aap 3no ke shayari ke aage main kya cheese hoon....
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«Reply #7 on: October 11, 2007, 10:25:22 AM »
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Bohot achcha likha hai Punam Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: October 26, 2007, 01:34:34 PM »
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bahut khoob...punnu ji....
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«Reply #9 on: October 26, 2007, 03:34:33 PM »
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nice one punam....
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«Reply #10 on: October 26, 2007, 06:09:41 PM »
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GOOD ONE PUNAM....
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«Reply #11 on: October 27, 2007, 03:39:56 PM »
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Talat di..Raman..Shona..khwaish...thanx..chalo aap sab ko acha laga..
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«Reply #12 on: October 30, 2007, 07:31:55 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooooooob PUNAM... Usual Smile Usual Smile


Marta Hoon Teri Adaaon Par, Zinda Na Samajhna,
Dharkan Rukti Hai Kyunki Sirf, Teri Ek Muskaan Par....

Apni Adaaon ke Jalwe, Bikherti Raha Karo E-Dilbar,
Kyunki Hazaaron Zindgi Jee Leta Hoon Har Baar Mar Kar..!!! Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: October 31, 2007, 03:42:14 AM »
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Gud one.....Punam.. & vicky,...
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«Reply #14 on: October 31, 2007, 03:59:29 AM »
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Ek subha jab uthi nind se
naya naya laga yeh jahan
Na badla tha kuch sab tha kal jaisa
sochti rahi kyun badla hua nazar aa raha yeh jahan

soch me pad gayi...
yeh dil pe aaj pada kounsa saya
rangeen lag raha yeh jahan...
tabhi ek chehra aagaya saamne
kaha jaanu tumhi toh ho mera jahan


pyar hi pyar tha uss nazaron me
pata hi na chala main kho gayi kahan..
soch me pad gayi kahin yeh khwaab toh nahi
tabhi woh dheere se bola....
pakdo mera haath chalo saath bhoolake sara jahan...


good morning poonam ji,

subah subah yoo sab badla badla laga
aalame-tanhayee kuch apnaa sa laga
n samaj sake karismaye-kudrat ko ham
jab se wo chera khawab me mer aane laga...

netra..
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