Nazki

by sjid hadayat on November 12, 2008, 10:50:27 PM

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sjid hadayat

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Nazki uss ki biyan kaisay keron dost
Wo pa-yon phool pay rakhay tu zkham sa aay


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Pooja

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Re: Nazki

«Reply #1 on: November 12, 2008, 10:58:22 PM »

wah nice lines Sajid H ji

pankhuri si wo komal, pal mai murjha jaaye
el pal ki muskaan se, baharo se khil jaaye


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sjid hadayat

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Re: Nazki

«Reply #2 on: November 12, 2008, 11:10:11 PM »

shukria


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Sonia01

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Re: Nazki

«Reply #3 on: November 13, 2008, 02:32:37 AM »

wow very small but lovely...
nice lines sajid ji and pooja didi


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Nazki

«Reply #4 on: November 13, 2008, 08:47:22 AM »

Nice lines Sjid Ji


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Talat

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Re: Nazki

«Reply #5 on: November 13, 2008, 12:08:13 PM »

Bohot Khoob Sajid Hadayat Ji and Pooja


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sjid hadayat

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Re: Nazki

«Reply #6 on: November 13, 2008, 03:50:11 PM »

thank u sonia, Rajesh and celmira ji.... aap sun ke nazer meray du sher

Koi tu ho ju jawab mien bu aik mukamal jawab likhay
Koi nia na sawal likhay, Koi nia na Azaab likhay

Kia ajab ho dosto her aankh sacha khab diekay
Phir kisi kay m alal pay, koi nai na kitab likhay

Saj


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sjid hadayat

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Re: Nazki

«Reply #7 on: November 13, 2008, 03:55:57 PM »

KOI TU HO JO JAWAB MIEN BUS AIK MUKAMAL JAWAB LIKHAY
KOI NIA NA SAWAL LIKHAY, K OI NIA NA JAWAB LIKHAY

KIA AJAB HO DOSTO HER AANKH SACHA KHAB DEIKHAY
PHIR KISI KAY MALAL PAY, KOI NAI NA KITAB LIKHAY

SAJ (Sajid Hadayat)


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abdbundeli

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Re: Nazki

«Reply #8 on: November 14, 2008, 04:00:44 PM »

Quote from: sjid hadayat on November 12, 2008, 10:50:27 PM

Nazki uss ki biyan kaisay keron dost
Wo pa-yon phool pay rakhay tu zkham sa aay

Urdu ko Roman mein khaasee jaldbazee mein 'enter' kiyaa gayaa hai! Shaayad, usey kuchh aisaa 'enter' honaa chaahiye thaa!!
"Naaz ka us ke bayan kaisey karoon mein, ae dost,
Wo pa'yon phool pai rakkhay yo zakhm-sa aaye!"
Maashooq/Maashooqah ki 'us' naazuk 'shai' pai qurbaan jaaney ko jee chaahtaa hai! Waah kyaa hi khoob kahaa hai sjid hadayat ji aapney!!
- abd bundeli


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sjid hadayat

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Re: Nazki

«Reply #9 on: November 14, 2008, 05:39:21 PM »

Naazki uss ki mien bian keisay keron dost
Wo pa-yon phool pay rahhay tu zakham sa aaye

Thanks u abdbundeli ji.... per aap nay wo galti ki ju mujh say na hoi k aap nay "Naaz ka" likha hay meray sher mien asal lafz Naazki hay. aur "Mien" waqai mien mujh say miss ho gia tha... Uru say roman mien yahi problemaati hay...

thanks for thinking on my poetry.
Urs.
Saj


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abdbundeli

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Re: Nazki

«Reply #10 on: November 15, 2008, 03:30:23 AM »

Quote from: sjid hadayat on November 14, 2008, 05:39:21 PM

I'm sorry, but the word 'Naazki' had never appeared before my eyes. Is it a Urdu word or it belongs to some local language?
- abd bundeli


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sjid hadayat

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Re: Nazki

«Reply #11 on: November 15, 2008, 07:32:36 PM »

Dear abdbundeli " Nazki" urdu ka word hay my dear....

Saj


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abdbundeli

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Re: Nazki

«Reply #12 on: November 16, 2008, 02:38:40 AM »

sjid hadayat ji!
Thanks for the information!
- abd bundeli


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sjid hadayat

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Re: Nazki

«Reply #13 on: November 16, 2008, 09:06:34 AM »

you r welcome bandeli ji.... Nazki pay "Galab" ka aik baray shayer hay... erz kia hay...

Nazki uss k lub ki kia kehiay
pankhri ik golab ki see hay

Saj


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abdbundeli

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Re: Nazki

«Reply #14 on: November 16, 2008, 01:37:21 PM »

Quote from: sjid hadayat on November 16, 2008, 09:06:34 AM

you r welcome bandeli ji.... Nazki pay "Galab" ka aik baray shayer hay... erz kia hay...
Nazki uss k lub ki kia kehiay
pankhri ik golab ki see hay

Thanks again! Gaalib kaa sundar 'sher' share karwaayaa! Ab yaad aayaa, 'naazki' shaayad Faarsi sey aayaa hai!!
- abd bundeli

Saj