Nazm Pila dun...:) Watch,listen and read:)

by sunil gahlot on December 29, 2013, 04:48:12 PM
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 866 times)
sunil gahlot
Guest
Reply with quote

Nazm padhni ho to aise padho...jaise sharabi sharab pee raha ho..!
Nazm padhni ho to aise padho...jaise sharabi sharab pee raha ho..Thode Thode shabdo ke paig banao....!
Thode shabdo ke paig banao..Usme apne paraye lamho ki barf mila lo...!
Zara si samajh ka soda dalo..aur sari kadwahat ko dheere dheere piyo...!!
Kuch lamho inke suroor me raho...!
Aur jab lage ...inki khumari ko jeet liya...!!
to apne dil ke saki se kaho....
saki ek paig aur bana do.....
Nazm padhni ho to aise padho..jaise sharabhi sharab pee raha ho...!!!

<a href="http://www.youtube.com/v/vjHgGaNQJcA&rel=1" target="_blank">http://www.youtube.com/v/vjHgGaNQJcA&rel=1</a>
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
°Nazm° Sab hi kahte The Husn-o-Shabaab Ki Nazm by vipul kumar in Ghazals
PILA DE LAA KE JAHAR ...........MKV by mkv in Shayri-E-Dard
la pila de sakiya by sky star in English
Aa Pila Du... ...Saavan. by Saavan in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
Barf Poem with Video (listen and read) by sunil gahlot in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
sksaini4
Ustaad ae Shayari
*****

Rau: 853
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
112 days, 8 hours and 51 minutes.
Posts: 36414
Member Since: Apr 2011


View Profile
«Reply #1 on: December 29, 2013, 04:49:30 PM »
Reply with quote
waah
Logged
sunil gahlot
Guest
«Reply #2 on: December 29, 2013, 04:52:10 PM »
Reply with quote
Thanks Saini Sahab..Usual Smile
Logged
dksaxenabsnl
YOS Friend of the Month
Yoindian Shayar
*

Rau: 109
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
20 days, 20 hours and 34 minutes.

खुश रहो खुश रहने दो l

Posts: 4127
Member Since: Feb 2013


View Profile
«Reply #3 on: December 29, 2013, 11:30:40 PM »
Reply with quote
Achchha Concept Hai. Pasand Aaya.
Logged
RAJAN KONDAL
Guest
«Reply #4 on: December 30, 2013, 12:59:13 AM »
Reply with quote
wha wha
Logged
sunil gahlot
Guest
«Reply #5 on: December 30, 2013, 11:46:11 AM »
Reply with quote
Thanks DKSaxena.Usual Smile
Logged
jyuthika
Guest
«Reply #6 on: December 30, 2013, 07:27:15 PM »
Reply with quote
very nice writing
Logged
jyuthika
Guest
«Reply #7 on: December 30, 2013, 07:29:08 PM »
Reply with quote
very nice concept
Logged
sunil gahlot
Guest
«Reply #8 on: December 30, 2013, 10:47:33 PM »
Reply with quote
Thanks Rajan..Usual Smile
Logged
sunil gahlot
Guest
«Reply #9 on: December 30, 2013, 10:48:24 PM »
Reply with quote
Thanks Jyuthika..Usual Smile
Logged
prashad
Guest
«Reply #10 on: January 01, 2014, 05:11:36 PM »
Reply with quote
bahut khoob
Logged
sunil gahlot
Guest
«Reply #11 on: January 02, 2014, 12:07:58 AM »
Reply with quote
Thanks Prasad...Usual Smile
Logged
suman59
Guest
«Reply #12 on: January 03, 2014, 04:24:26 AM »
Reply with quote
good lines
Logged
sunil gahlot
Guest
«Reply #13 on: January 03, 2014, 12:45:04 PM »
Reply with quote
Thanks Suman ji..Usual Smile
Logged
sunil gahlot
Guest
«Reply #14 on: January 07, 2014, 12:26:46 AM »
Reply with quote
Thanks all...guys can you please you please suggest me how can i make my poetry more reachable to listeners....please suggest some more forums or some other website as well...
Logged
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 09, 2024, 02:19:14 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]

[November 08, 2024, 09:59:08 AM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]

[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:55:06 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 06:58:58 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.102 seconds with 26 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8505 Real Poets and poetry admirer