Nazrana Meri Chahat ka

by deepika_divya on April 23, 2007, 05:31:04 AM
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«Reply #30 on: June 29, 2009, 02:20:54 PM »
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Yea sachi Tareef hai Vicky .. yea tho aap khud bhi jante hai.. ki aap kamal ka likhte hai.. Usual Smile

Waise dekh lijiye.. Fir se Aaapne Itna kaaml ka likha hai.. Ki lafz nahi bache tareef karne k liye..

waise ITS my Favourite poetry written by my self

Shukriya Sophi Ji.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Waqai Yeh Poem Bahut Khoob Likhi Hai aapne...Usual Smile Par ab aage kya Kuch Nahi Likhogi.. ? tongue3 tongue3


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #31 on: June 30, 2009, 03:52:41 AM »
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Bahut acha likha hai, great work....

Wo samne aye to Nazron ko Jhukaa loon ga
Dekhoon ga nahi phir bhi Tasweer bana loon ga

Aana ho to aa jao Ruswayee nahi hogi
Dekhega nahi koi Palkon mai chupa loon ga

Jo Hum per guzarni hai ek bar guzar jaye
Her Gham ki tarha Tujh ko Seene se laga loon ga

Weeran agar Dil ho Aankhon mai Andhera ho
Yaadon ke Diye apni Palkon mai saja loon ga

Manzoor agar hogi Ruswayi Teri Mujh ko
Mai beth ke Sahil se Toofaan utha loon ga

Naraz agar wo hain Mere Nasheman se
Mai apne Nasheman ke Tinkon ko hata loon ga

Kyun Mujh se Khafa ho ker wo Door gaye
Baanhon mai wo aa jayaen mai un ko Mana loon ga

bahut khoob matla pais kiya hai aapne tabrez,aapka ishq fariyaad nhi hai,junnun hai,keep it up
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saaz_haldwanvi
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«Reply #32 on: June 30, 2009, 03:55:21 AM »
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bahut badiya sophi ji
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #33 on: July 09, 2009, 05:29:08 AM »
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Gham ne hasne na diya ghum ne rune na diya,
Kisi uljan ne koi faisla hone na diya,
Runa chaha jab bhi sitaro ne tasli dedi,
Sona chaha to teri yaad ne sone na diya
Nazar jub tum se milti hai main khud ko bhool jata hoon,
Bas ek dharkan dharakti hai, main khud ko bhool jata hon,
Tumhain milne se pehle main bohut sajta sanwarta hon,
Magar jub tum sanwarti ho main khud ko bhool jata hon,
Main aksar kitabon pe tera hi naam likhta hon,
Magar kuch tum jo likhti ho main khud ko bhool jata hon,
Main aksar yehi kehta hon, main tum say pyar karta hon,
Magar jub tum yeh kehti ho main duniya bhool jata hon..



Waah Tabrez ji.. bahoot bahoot khoob Likhte hai.. bahoot bahoot khoob!
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Pooja
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«Reply #34 on: July 09, 2009, 05:33:58 AM »
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Wah Tabrez ji.. bahoot khoob!!
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #35 on: July 09, 2009, 05:49:28 AM »
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Shukriya Sophi Ji.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Waqai Yeh Poem Bahut Khoob Likhi Hai aapne...Usual Smile Par ab aage kya Kuch Nahi Likhogi.. ? tongue3 tongue3


**~** Mann **~**

thank you so so much Vikas
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #36 on: July 09, 2009, 05:49:54 AM »
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bahut badiya sophi ji

Thank You saaz ji
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Pooja
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«Reply #37 on: July 09, 2009, 06:00:35 AM »
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thanks Gaurav..

nazara meri chaht ka
betak rahe dar dar lekar hum sanam

Ak baar mud kar tho dekh
kitni gumsum hun tere bina sanam

janti hun tum bhi mujhe chahte ho
tho kyun itne dur sanam.

tum hi bato nazarana meri chaht ka
kis tarah pesh kare hum sanam

Nice lines Sophi
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«Reply #38 on: July 09, 2009, 06:01:32 AM »
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Wah Wah Divya ji.. bahut khoooooob.. Lagta hai Pyaar ko Bakhoobi Jaanti hain aap...!! Usual Smile Usual Smile


Ek Nazar Dekh kar Usko, Kuch Bahak se Gaye Hum,
Shaayad Isi ko Duniya Wale Mohabbat Kahate Hain....

Phir Socha yeh Khel Ek Baar, Hum bhi Khel kar Dekhen,
Khel-Khel me Us Dilbar ke Hi, Ho ke Raha Gaye Hum......!!!!!!!!!!



Shayad isi ko Mohabbat Kahate hain...!!!?.. Kyun Divya ji.. ?

well said Mann ji!! good work



Sophi and Mann ji app dono ne is thread khoob sajaya hai apni kavitao se.... Good work Both!!
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #39 on: July 09, 2009, 06:10:28 AM »
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Thank you so so much Pooja di.. thank you! Usual Smile
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #40 on: July 09, 2009, 07:54:53 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja Ji.. Usual Smile Usual Smile


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #41 on: July 09, 2009, 08:27:06 AM »
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Nazrana meri chaht ka hum,
      Yun kuch Pesh karenge.
Nazro mein basa tumko,
     Hum Dil Ki baat karenge.

Behkati sanso ko hum,
     Bar lenge apne Aagosh mein.
Aur Jazbaaton mein beh ,
     Tumhare Naseman ko chaht ka Tohfa denge.

Meetash apni Mohabbat ka,
     Hum tere Labo ko Denge.
Na koi bandish, Na Duriyon  ko Bulawa,
     Hum tho sirf ak dujhe se mohabbat karenge.

~Divya~

nice nazm sophi ji
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #42 on: July 09, 2009, 08:52:03 AM »
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nice nazm sophi ji

Thank you so much Aslam ji
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«Reply #43 on: July 09, 2009, 09:11:29 AM »
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Sophi ji ,Mann ji very beautiful creation,excellent. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #44 on: July 09, 2009, 09:14:09 AM »
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Sophi ji ,Mann ji very beautiful creation,excellent. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Thank you Madhu ji Usual Smile
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