Neelu--Love profound as Blue ocean....Sps

by Sps on September 06, 2012, 01:45:47 PM
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Blue is the color of  world's Best Lover...Lord Krishna....so everyone feels blue at  some part of their life...Blue Love..Here's how I depicted love as Blue (serene, devoted and profound)

नीलू

नील नयन
मैं नील मगन
नीला मन और नीला तन
नील नदी की मस्त लहर
नीली रात का पहला पहर
नीला चाँद , नीला सूरज
नीला हो गया चन्दन
नीली धरती , नीला अम्बर
नीली गई हवा छूकर
नीले पंछी , नीले मधुकर
नीलेश ही मेरे ईश्वर
नीलगिरी सा पावन
नीलांचल सा फैला सावन
नीली सांसें , नीला जीवन
नीले कृष्ण ही मनभावन
       बस नीली मृत्यु ही मैं पीलूँ
       मुझमे और  कोई रंग नहीं
             मैं  'नीलू'
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«Reply #1 on: September 06, 2012, 03:28:54 PM »
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Bahut sundar describe kiya hai..
informatory too.
aise aise khayaal..koi soch bhi na sake..
dil se daad dete hai aapko.
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«Reply #2 on: September 06, 2012, 03:37:34 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #3 on: September 06, 2012, 07:24:14 PM »
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Bahut sundar describe kiya hai..
informatory too.
aise aise khayaal..koi soch bhi na sake..
dil se daad dete hai aapko.


thank u very very much mkv ji
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«Reply #4 on: September 06, 2012, 07:24:45 PM »
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very nice

Thank u Suman ji for praising it
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«Reply #5 on: September 07, 2012, 12:35:12 AM »
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bahut khoob, dhero dad sps ji
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«Reply #6 on: September 07, 2012, 02:29:24 AM »
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bahut achhi kavita. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: September 07, 2012, 03:51:52 AM »
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waah waah waah
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«Reply #8 on: September 07, 2012, 03:55:13 AM »
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Very Nice.
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«Reply #9 on: September 09, 2012, 08:02:42 PM »
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bahut khoob, dhero dad sps ji

Thank u nand ji
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«Reply #10 on: September 09, 2012, 08:03:33 PM »
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bahut achhi kavita. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

thank u Ripan Dev ji
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«Reply #11 on: September 09, 2012, 08:03:59 PM »
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waah waah waah

Thanks a lot Sir
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«Reply #12 on: September 09, 2012, 08:04:34 PM »
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Very Nice.

Thanks a lot Sanjeev ji
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