~~"NEEND LUTT GAYI HAI"~~

by k.shael on March 25, 2009, 10:07:12 AM
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Jiss din se mukhatib hue hai uski aankhon se,
Khuda kasam hamari raatoon ki neend lutt gayi hai,

Aks usi ka aata hai nazar aaine me bhi iss kadar,
Ki apni surat dekhe hue ek umar beet gayi hai,

Paimane ko pakad to leta ho shonk se mehfil me,
Par peene ki wo behisaab pehle wali aadat na rahi hai,

Uske chehre ko dekhkar u lagta hai maano aankhein
Noor-e-falak se ro-b-ro hui hai…

Ek chah thi ki paa le uski mohabbat ko aur iss chah
me hasti apni khaak-e-zameen hui hai,

Har panne pe likh di hai taarief-e-yaar par aab bhi
Lagta hai jaise koi kami reh gayi hai,

Dil ki har baat lafzo ne bata di badi shiddat se kalam ko
Par aabhi bhi jo hai baaki wo ruswayi-e-yaar ki ghadi hai.

Shally.
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«Reply #1 on: March 25, 2009, 10:13:14 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah,. Kya KHoob Likha Hai Shally Behna,.

Bohat Achche, Bohat Romantic Ehsaas Hai,.

Yunhi LIkhte Rahiye,.

May Allah Bles You,.
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«Reply #2 on: March 25, 2009, 10:16:31 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on March 25, 2009, 10:07:12 AM
Jiss din se mukhatib hue hai uski aankhon se,
Khuda kasam hamari raatoon ki neend lutt gayi hai,

Aks usi ka aata hai nazar aaine me bhi iss kadar,
Ki apni surat dekhe hue ek umar beet gayi hai,

Paimane ko pakad to leta ho shonk se mehfil me,
Par peene ki wo behisaab pehle wali aadat na rahi hai,

Uske chehre ko dekhkar u lagta hai maano aankhein
Noor-e-falak se ro-b-ro hui hai…

Ek chah thi ki paa le uski mohabbat ko aur iss chah
me hasti apni khaak-e-zameen hui hai,

Har panne pe likh di hai taarief-e-yaar par aab bhi
Lagta hai jaise koi kami reh gayi hai,

Dil ki har baat lafzo ne bata di badi shiddat se kalam ko
Par aabhi bhi jo hai baaki wo ruswayi-e-yaar ki ghadi hai.

Shally.


bhut achy shally ji.................
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«Reply #3 on: March 25, 2009, 12:45:10 PM »
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bahot bahot bahot khoob shally sis! kya romantic tareeke se paesh kiya aapne! specially ye lines:
Quote from: k.shael on March 25, 2009, 10:07:12 AM
Jiss din se mukhatib hue hai uski aankhon se,
Khuda kasam hamari raatoon ki neend lutt gayi hai,

Aks usi ka aata hai nazar aaine me bhi iss kadar,
Ki apni surat dekhe hue ek umar beet gayi hai,

Paimane ko pakad to leta ho shonk se mehfil me,
Par peene ki wo behisaab pehle wali aadat na rahi hai,

Uske chehre ko dekhkar u lagta hai maano aankhein
Noor-e-falak se ro-b-ro hui hai…


too good hai yaar!
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«Reply #4 on: March 25, 2009, 01:19:21 PM »
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Bahut khoob Shally.... bahut accha laga padkar .. keep up  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #5 on: March 26, 2009, 08:51:28 AM »
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Yeh hui na baat, Maza aa gaya yaar, This is one of your best and without any Flaw.

Perfect Kalaam dad kabool ho, isme zaroor kuch likhuga.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: March 26, 2009, 09:55:18 AM »
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bahut hi umda kalam hai shally dear
har lafz mein kuch khaas ehsaas hai
too good ...  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: March 26, 2009, 10:20:39 AM »
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wah wah bahut khoob SHALLY, bahut khoob

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«Reply #8 on: March 30, 2009, 12:03:38 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on March 25, 2009, 10:13:14 AM
Waah Waah Waah,. Kya KHoob Likha Hai Shally Behna,.

Bohat Achche, Bohat Romantic Ehsaas Hai,.

Yunhi LIkhte Rahiye,.

May Allah Bles You,.

Shukriya Azeem Brother,

Shally.
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«Reply #9 on: March 30, 2009, 12:04:20 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on March 25, 2009, 10:16:31 AM
bhut achy shally ji.................

Shukriya Aaina Ji,

Shally.
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«Reply #10 on: March 30, 2009, 12:05:22 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on March 25, 2009, 01:19:21 PM
Bahut khoob Shally.... bahut accha laga padkar .. keep up  Thumbs UP

Shukriya Roza didi,

Shally.
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«Reply #11 on: March 30, 2009, 12:06:23 PM »
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Quote from: anjaan dharkan on March 25, 2009, 12:45:10 PM
bahot bahot bahot khoob shally sis! kya romantic tareeke se paesh kiya aapne! specially ye lines:
too good hai yaar!

Shukriya Sidra Dear,
thanx a lotttt for visting my thread,

Shally.
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«Reply #12 on: March 30, 2009, 12:07:27 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on March 26, 2009, 07:39:43 AM
Bohat Khoob Shael Ji...Keep It Up..

Jiske Intazar Mein Har Ghadi Kat Ti Hai
Uski Mehfile To Ab Kahin Aur Hi Sajti Hai

Mere Tadapne Par Use Yun Lutf Aata Hai Ki
Ab Meri Khushi Pe Use Khushi Nahi Hoti Hai




Shukriya Shihab Ji,

Aur bahut khoob likha aapne agar kuch bana to zaroor
reply karoongi,

Shally.
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«Reply #13 on: March 30, 2009, 12:09:04 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on March 26, 2009, 08:51:28 AM
Yeh hui na baat, Maza aa gaya yaar, This is one of your best and without any Flaw.

Perfect Kalaam dad kabool ho, isme zaroor kuch likhuga.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Shukriya Sajid Ji,

Aapke comments padke to bilkul bahut khushi hui,
aapne itna pasand kiya hamare kalam ko bahut badi baat hai

Shally.
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«Reply #14 on: March 30, 2009, 12:11:04 PM »
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Quote from: diya786 on March 26, 2009, 09:55:18 AM
bahut hi umda kalam hai shally dear
har lafz mein kuch khaas ehsaas hai
too good ...  Applause Applause Applause


Shukriya Diya Dear,

Tumne iss kalam ki feelings ko samjha thanx a lot

Shally.
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