~~"NEEND LUTT GAYI HAI"~~

by k.shael on March 25, 2009, 10:07:12 AM
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«Reply #15 on: March 30, 2009, 12:12:46 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on March 26, 2009, 10:20:39 AM
wah wah bahut khoob SHALLY, bahut khoob

jasbir singh

Shukriya Jas Ji,

Ki aapne saraha iss naacheez ko,

Shally.
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«Reply #16 on: March 30, 2009, 10:11:29 PM »
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Good work all
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«Reply #17 on: March 31, 2009, 05:15:44 AM »
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Bohat khoob shally sis nice creation dear.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #18 on: March 31, 2009, 06:00:06 AM »
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Wah wah Very NICe Shally! Beautiful written
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«Reply #19 on: March 31, 2009, 08:17:31 AM »
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Very nice shally... simple the best Thumbs UP
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«Reply #20 on: March 31, 2009, 08:19:22 AM »
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Acha sath diya shihab ji!!
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«Reply #21 on: April 05, 2009, 07:06:46 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on March 25, 2009, 10:07:12 AM
Jiss din se mukhatib hue hai uski aankhon se,
Khuda kasam hamari raatoon ki neend lutt gayi hai,

Aks usi ka aata hai nazar aaine me bhi iss kadar,
Ki apni surat dekhe hue ek umar beet gayi hai,

Paimane ko pakad to leta ho shonk se mehfil me,
Par peene ki wo behisaab pehle wali aadat na rahi hai,

Uske chehre ko dekhkar u lagta hai maano aankhein
Noor-e-falak se ro-b-ro hui hai…

Ek chah thi ki paa le uski mohabbat ko aur iss chah
me hasti apni khaak-e-zameen hui hai,

Har panne pe likh di hai taarief-e-yaar par aab bhi
Lagta hai jaise koi kami reh gayi hai,

Dil ki har baat lafzo ne bata di badi shiddat se kalam ko
Par aabhi bhi jo hai baaki wo ruswayi-e-yaar ki ghadi hai.

Shally.


Shally aajkal Tum Udru Ki Pehchaan bann rahi Ho..

Waqaee badhiya Tarteeb se Lafzo ko Tarasha Hai..
Bahot hi khoob Hai Nazm ye
waah.   
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«Reply #22 on: April 06, 2009, 06:25:59 AM »
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gud wrk shally ........bahut khoobsoorti se bayaan kiya gaya hai zazbaaton ko

mohabbat EK lafz hai ya kaiyenaat hai
hum waaqif hai isse aur iske raazdaar bhi
yeh khel hai sheeshon ka ya maut hai
hum bewafa bhi hai aur wafadaar bhi
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«Reply #23 on: April 09, 2009, 08:49:06 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on March 25, 2009, 10:07:12 AM
Jiss din se mukhatib hue hai uski aankhon se,
Khuda kasam hamari raatoon ki neend lutt gayi hai,

Aks usi ka aata hai nazar aaine me bhi iss kadar,
Ki apni surat dekhe hue ek umar beet gayi hai,

Paimane ko pakad to leta ho shonk se mehfil me,
Par peene ki wo behisaab pehle wali aadat na rahi hai,

Uske chehre ko dekhkar u lagta hai maano aankhein
Noor-e-falak se ro-b-ro hui hai…

Ek chah thi ki paa le uski mohabbat ko aur iss chah
me hasti apni khaak-e-zameen hui hai,

Har panne pe likh di hai taarief-e-yaar par aab bhi
Lagta hai jaise koi kami reh gayi hai,

Dil ki har baat lafzo ne bata di badi shiddat se kalam ko
Par aabhi bhi jo hai baaki wo ruswayi-e-yaar ki ghadi hai.

Shally.


SHALLY.. Bahut Bahut Pyaare alfaaz Likhe Hain aapne.. Aashiqi Me Doobe ek Dil ke Ehasaason Ko Bahut Khubsoorat se Pesh kiya Hai aapne.. !! Yunhi Likhte Rahiye..!! Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #24 on: May 15, 2009, 07:55:05 AM »
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Shukriya Dear Friends,Apna keemti waqt dene ke liye..

Shally.
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