**~** Nigaahon Ka Sharmaana **~**

by _Vicky_ on May 14, 2010, 02:32:23 PM
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Dilbar Se Milne Gaya Ek Dil, Jab Tarasta Hai Use Mohabbat karne Ko, Baahon me Bharne Ko, Aur Har Hadd ko Paar Karne ko.. Par Kuch Seemaayen Use Aisa karne se Rok Leti hain.. Use Tadpa Kar Pyaasa Chod Deti Hain.. Uske baad Us Pyaase Dil par Kya Guzarti hai..  Basss usi Ek lamhe ka Zikra Yahan Kar raha hooon.. Ummeed Karta hoon Meri Yeh Koshish aapko Pasand aayegi..!!!  Usual Smile



Gazal Teri Aankhon Par, Likh To Di Thi Maine,
Nigaahon Ka Tabhi Tera, Sharmaana Ho Gaya...

Main Baitha Raha Liye Tera Hath Hathon Me,
Aur Tabhi Tera Seene Se Lipat Jaana Ho Gaya....

Chahat Thi Us Lamha Tujhe Apna Banaane Ki,
Us Par Tera Khafa Hoke Palat Jaana Ho Gaya.....

Main Tarasta Raha Teri Rooh Tak Me Utane Ko,
Aur Tera Phir Se Na Milne Ka Bahaana Ho Gaya.....

Mujhe Zaroorat Thi Teri, Tujhe Di Thi Qasam,
Tabhi Labon Pe Se Tera Lab Hataana Ho Gaya......

Aaj Pyasa Jo Lauta Hoon, Teri Baahon Se Dilbar,
Lagta Hai Jaise Mile Tujhse Ek Zamaana Ho Gaya....

Gazal Teri Aankhon Par, Likh To Di Thi Maine,
Nigaahon Ka Tabhi Tera, Sharmaana Ho Gaya...!!!!!





**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #1 on: May 14, 2010, 02:39:07 PM »
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mind blowing....
fantastic....

subhan allah.....

masha allah...

aur jitni tareefe hai sari kar di...

jab ye ghazal padh raha tha kasam se Mann ji...rongte khade ho gaye mere....

kya jabarjast likha hai aapne....bahut khoob.... waah..!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: May 14, 2010, 02:48:34 PM »
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bahut din baad aapne apna likha kuch post kiya hai. hum to jaane kab se raah tak rahe the ki aap bhi kuch post karein. aapke puraane nazm padhke itna achcha laga tha ki ek intzaar sa hone lag gaya aapke naye nazm ka. par hamare YO join karne ke baad aapko naraazgi ho gayi aur apne apna likha post karna hi chhod diya. pehli baar aapka post kiya hua naya nazm padh raha hoon. sach intzaar ka fal itna meetha hota hai ye kavita padh ke pata chala....!!! Usual Smile

bahut hi khoobsurti se aapne us milan ko apne apne shabdon se sajaya hai. us milan ki khobsurti aur usse alag hone ki bechaini. sach bahut khoob likha hai aapne. chhoo gayi aapki ye kavita hamare dil ko. bahut khoob mann ji bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 14, 2010, 02:53:29 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah!!!!!!!Kya Kehne Mannji..

Bahut bahut Aur Bahut Khoob!!!! Shararto se bhari yeh ghazal bahut hi khoobsurat Hai,Iss Ghazal Ko padhte waqt Vaakai Mehmoos kiya jaa sakta hai..

Lajawaab Mannji, Vaakai  Khumar-e-ishq Ke badsaah Hai Aap!!!!

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«Reply #4 on: May 14, 2010, 03:59:22 PM »
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O my My.. Kya baat hai Mann ji.. Tussi tho aate hi chaa gaye.. kya baat hai..

MasaAllah Kya khoob likha hai.. sab pehle hi itni tareef kar chuke hai ki meri tareef kam na pad jaaye..

Waise main bhi tareef kar hi deti hun.. Mann ji Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Khoob likha hai.. aapki iss peshkash mea pyaar khoob chalak raha hai aur usmea chupe eshsaas bhi.. Bahoot Khoob!

Yuhin likhte rahiyega !
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«Reply #5 on: May 14, 2010, 08:27:42 PM »
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Wah wah Mann ji,very romantic,heart touching and mindblowing creation,bahut bahut khoob.great work,aise hi likhte rahena.keep up the good work. Both Thumbs Up Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 15, 2010, 01:30:04 AM »
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    Waah Waah bahut kamaal ka likha hai Mann ji.  Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: May 15, 2010, 04:12:16 AM »
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Vicky bhaa'ii:

namaste!

kaise haiN huZoor! ummid kartaa huuN Khairiyat se hoNge!

iShq ki gehrA'ii ko samjhnaa aur usey apnii koShiSh meiN utaarnaa aap ba-Khoobee jaante hai.n! baRii KhuShii hotee hay jab aise umdaah ehsaasoN ko paRhtaa huuN tou.. koShiSh bahot hi Khoob lagiiN aik Premi ke jaZbaat dil Chhu gayeN..!

aapki ees koShiSh ko paRh ke saahir ludhianvi saaHeb kaa ek Sher yaad aa gayaa jo yahaaN arz kar rahaa huuN

tumhaare aane talak ham ko hoSh rahataa hai
phir uske baad hameN kuChh Khabar nahii.N hotii

aik laMbe arse baad aapko paRhaa.. tou huZoor liKhate raheN kalam se doori nah baRhaayeN.. !

dil se DheroN saari daad aur duaaeN

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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«Reply #8 on: May 15, 2010, 06:25:40 AM »
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mind blowing....
fantastic....

subhan allah.....

masha allah...

aur jitni tareefe hai sari kar di...

jab ye ghazal padh raha tha kasam se Mann ji...rongte khade ho gaye mere....

kya jabarjast likha hai aapne....bahut khoob.... waah..!!!!


Touhid Bhai Main Tahe Dil Se Shukra Guzaar Hoon Aapki Is Taareef Ka.. Khushnaseebi hai meri Ki Aapne Mere In Ehasaason Ko Saraaha..!! notworthy notworthy notworthy




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«Reply #9 on: May 15, 2010, 10:21:36 AM »
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Wow.... Wot a Creation bhai..... wonderful.... Usual Smile :D

kabhi dekha hai kahin ke, Kisi Gazal pe koi phir se koi Gazal Likhe,
Hayaa se Palken kya Jhuki humaari aapka Kalam Uthaana Gazab ho gaya,
Likhi hai Gazal hum hi par unhone jo Hume aaj bhi Gazal kehete hain,
Aur hum par Likhi is Gazal ko, Unka humko hi Sunaana Gazab ho gaya.....!!!


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«Reply #10 on: May 15, 2010, 12:18:53 PM »
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awesome creation..... Clapping Smiley  Applause   Applause   Applause   Applause
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«Reply #11 on: May 15, 2010, 01:33:10 PM »
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bahut din baad aapne apna likha kuch post kiya hai. hum to jaane kab se raah tak rahe the ki aap bhi kuch post karein. aapke puraane nazm padhke itna achcha laga tha ki ek intzaar sa hone lag gaya aapke naye nazm ka. par hamare YO join karne ke baad aapko naraazgi ho gayi aur apne apna likha post karna hi chhod diya. pehli baar aapka post kiya hua naya nazm padh raha hoon. sach intzaar ka fal itna meetha hota hai ye kavita padh ke pata chala....!!! Usual Smile

bahut hi khoobsurti se aapne us milan ko apne apne shabdon se sajaya hai. us milan ki khobsurti aur usse alag hone ki bechaini. sach bahut khoob likha hai aapne. chhoo gayi aapki ye kavita hamare dil ko. bahut khoob mann ji bahut khoob...!!!


Kapil Bhai Kaise Shukriya Ata Karun aapka.. Itni Taareef Likh Di aapne Ki Jiske Main Qaabil Hi Nahi.. Aapki Is Taareef Ko Padh kar Aisa lag raha hai Jaise Shayad Yakinan Kuch Accha hi likha hoga Maine..!!  notworthy notworthy

Waqt Ki Kami Ki Vajah se Qalam Thodi Maayoos hai Mere Dost.. Koshish Karunga ki Ab Mehfil me Bana Rahun.. Aapne Meri Is Rachna Ko Dil Se Mehsoos Kiya uske Liye aapka Ek Baar phir se Tahe Dil se Shukriya..!!!  Usual Smile Usual Smile



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«Reply #12 on: May 15, 2010, 01:46:58 PM »
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I have no words...Hmm kaise tariff karoun apki Vikas bhaijan..bahaut sunder likha hai..woh dard mehsoos hota hai mujhe apki kalam se...Kisi ki kami khalne ka ehsaas bahaut hai mujhe isiliye ankhein bharr ayi yeh nazm parr ke...

"Aj pyaasa jo lauta hoon, teri baahon se dilbaar,
Lagta hai tujse mile hue zamana hogaya.."

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«Reply #13 on: May 15, 2010, 01:50:19 PM »
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U r welcome Mann ji.... sach me aapne bahut bahut achcha likha hai...!!!

Kapil Bhai Kaise Shukriya Ata Karun aapka.. Itni Taareef Likh Di aapne Ki Jiske Main Qaabil Hi Nahi.. Aapki Is Taareef Ko Padh kar Aisa lag raha hai Jaise Shayad Yakinan Kuch Accha hi likha hoga Maine..!!  notworthy notworthy

Waqt Ki Kami Ki Vajah se Qalam Thodi Maayoos hai Mere Dost.. Koshish Karunga ki Ab Mehfil me Bana Rahun.. Aapne Meri Is Rachna Ko Dil Se Mehsoos Kiya uske Liye aapka Ek Baar phir se Tahe Dil se Shukriya..!!!  Usual Smile Usual Smile



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«Reply #14 on: May 15, 2010, 03:42:43 PM »
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dil ke jazbao'n ko lafzao'n ki siyaahi se...
bikher di tu ne khushboo chaar soo bazm main..

naayaab paishkash hai ...
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