>>>>Nigahon Ko Jhuka De <<<<

by waheed_rose2004 on January 23, 2006, 09:19:52 AM
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Rajbir
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«Reply #15 on: January 24, 2006, 05:38:49 PM »
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Sonu and Jeet...

Very nicely written !

Keep it up

Rajbir
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anjani_si
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«Reply #16 on: January 24, 2006, 11:26:32 PM »
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sonu nd burnin really nice!!!
naseeb ka kia hai
haar waqt rang badalti hai
kabhi ussa tu kabhi isse mohabbat hoti hai
aur pana koi bi nahi naseeb hota hai!!!
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Sonu
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«Reply #17 on: January 25, 2006, 03:20:33 AM »
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shukriyaa jeet ji... apka jevab bhi lajwab huta hia...

Tamannaa thi jeene ki, koi chiraag na milaa
Tamannaa thi jeene ki, koi chiraag na milaa
Roshni chaahi thi
Magar andheraa milgayaa



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kya baat hai Sonu  !!!


Yeh Raat Itani Tanaha Kyo Hoti Hai,
 Kismat Se Apni Sabko Shikayat Kyo Hoti Hai,
Ye Kismat Bhi Ajeeb Khel Khelti Hai,
 Jise Hum Pa Nahi Sakate Usise Mohabat Kyo Hoti Hai
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Sonu
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«Reply #18 on: January 25, 2006, 03:21:22 AM »
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Thanks Rajbir...


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Sonu and Jeet...

Very nicely written !

Keep it up

Rajbir
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Sonu
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«Reply #19 on: January 25, 2006, 03:24:32 AM »
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thanks anjani ji... nice

yea naseebo ka nahi takdeero ka khail huta hai
es jamaney mey her kesi ko ishq ka rog huta hai
na ker gila to waqt sey
yeah mohabatt ka dastoor huta hai

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sonu nd burnin really nice!!!
naseeb ka kia hai
haar waqt rang badalti hai
kabhi ussa tu kabhi isse mohabbat hoti hai
aur pana koi bi nahi naseeb hota hai!!!
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #20 on: January 25, 2006, 09:15:27 AM »
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kya baat hai,, yahan toh sab ne is thread ko apne rang mein rang diya,, bhut achhe!!!

Nigahon  mein teri tasveer hai,
jubaa par tera naam hai,

kya kare sanam
hum to teri chahat mein badnaam hain..
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #21 on: January 25, 2006, 07:35:35 PM »
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Dil to unka bhi seene mein machlta hoga,
husn bhi sau-sau rang badalta hoga,
uthti hogi jab nigahein unki,
KUDHA bhi gir -gir kar sambhalta hoga. . . . . .
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Sonu
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«Reply #22 on: January 26, 2006, 04:52:56 AM »
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jeet ji.. wonderful her var di thra...

jeet ji anajni ney ek adhura shair likhya sey jera poora kerkey tan dasoo... veykheiya tan sahi key tusi keeda likhdey hoo
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #23 on: January 26, 2006, 06:38:36 AM »
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jeet ji.. wonderful her var di thra...

jeet ji anajni ney ek adhura shair likhya sey jera poora kerkey tan dasoo... veykheiya tan sahi key tusi keeda likhdey hoo


mainu tan is topic vich koi anjani ji da adhura shair nai mileya

shayad tusi ULJAN topic wale shair di gal karde ho,,par oh shair tan jo main likheya usdi extension hai???
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Sonu
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«Reply #24 on: January 27, 2006, 04:06:45 AM »
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Jeet sorry mey bhul gayee si Uljhan vech he hai tey mey ehtey likta sorry... ahow oh he jeyedi  tuhadi hi sahiri da extension... ohvi likhna cahudi si tey oh keyhdi sey key meynu agey word nahi mil rahey ney jey asi tey tusi ohda shair pura kerdeya tan mey tuhanu keya si key hoon tusi keeda uhno likhugey....

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jeet ji.. wonderful her var di thra...

jeet ji anajni ney ek adhura shair likhya sey jera poora kerkey tan dasoo... veykheiya tan sahi key tusi keeda likhdey hoo


mainu tan is topic vich koi anjani ji da adhura shair nai mileya

shayad tusi ULJAN topic wale shair di gal karde ho,,par oh shair tan jo main likheya usdi extension hai???
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #25 on: January 27, 2006, 04:55:40 PM »
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ULJHAN topic ka ruk ab toh kissi aur direction ki taraf ho gaya hai,,watch that topic,,sabhi ne bhut hi achha contribute kiya hai
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #26 on: January 27, 2006, 04:58:08 PM »
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Yun to yaade purani nahi hoti,
har kisi ko pana sab ki kismat nahi hoti,
hum dil rakh aaye aapke dar par,
ye jaante hue bhi k aapki nazarein zamin pe nahi hoti.
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Sonu
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«Reply #27 on: January 28, 2006, 03:32:21 AM »
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jeet mey huney vikheya hai sarey na bahut he vadiya likhiya hai legda hai hoon uljhan punjabi suljha deyngey  :lol:  :lol:  jey kujh na karey sakey tey agey kesi or noo laadeyngeyngey  :lol:  :lol:  per uno ruken nahi deyngey...

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ULJHAN topic ka ruk ab toh kissi aur direction ki taraf ho gaya hai,,watch that topic,,sabhi ne bhut hi achha contribute kiya hai
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Sonu
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«Reply #28 on: January 28, 2006, 03:35:38 AM »
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Jeet bahoot khoob..

Yaddon key lamho mey phir dard ko kureyda hai,
Meyri en ahkhoon ney apney asoonow ko deykha hia.
Tumahrey khayalo sey ab sukoon kha milta hai,
Her vo lemha ab jindgi mey dakhel deyta hia.

Mulakatoon key vo din or vo chandni ratey, Bhigey baden phuharo ey or rimjhim bersatey.
Pyar ka her vo menjar dil ko edpa deyta hia, Tumhara dur chaley jana dil mey neshar sa chubhu deya hia. Yadoon key lamho ney phir dard ko kureyda hai.


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Yun to yaade purani nahi hoti,
har kisi ko pana sab ki kismat nahi hoti,
hum dil rakh aaye aapke dar par,
ye jaante hue bhi k aapki nazarein zamin pe nahi hoti.
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #29 on: January 28, 2006, 05:51:36 AM »
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very nice BD and Sonu.......oh..kudiye bahut khoob.......

Zara Nazre Jhuka k toh dekh,
Tere liye ab bhi jindaa hoon mein,
Pyar karta hoon tujhse heee,
mein koi Suraj nahi jo dhal jaye,
Raat k aaate hee.......

Zara Nazre Jhuka k toh dekh,
Khaak Zameen ki ban kar reh gaya mein,
Tere pyar k nashe mein..sab lutaa k pee gaya mein,
Tujhe paane ki Chahat mein sab dushmano ko bhi gale lagata gaya mein..
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