ØØØ ek lakeer tere naam ki.... ØØØ

by mili_genie on January 19, 2006, 08:39:20 PM
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«Reply #15 on: January 21, 2006, 08:49:13 AM »
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singiwing ho reli boering..
mooo kholingi
shayri boling....:lol:


just kiddding..... thanx rajbir & nidhiji.... ha abhi mujhe concentrat kerna honga....
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«Reply #16 on: January 21, 2006, 08:59:17 AM »
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Aree yeh Dharmendra bhaji ki tarah sholay film jaisi acting kyun (remember commiting suicide suicide wala scene...) :D

Milind kal tumhara competition hai aur tum "mujhe concentrate karna hoga"..."mujhe concentrate karna hoga" bole ja rahe ho

kya yeh us song ka mukhda hai jo tum kal gaane wale ho... :D

Just kidding. All the best my friend

Rajbir
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«Reply #17 on: January 21, 2006, 10:50:46 AM »
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thanx a lot rajbir ji.....

one poem i got in a mail which i m posted here.....

 I saw a rainbow, but its colors did not glow
I felt a summer breeze, but it was bitter cold

I heard a bird sing, but its song was full of pain
I tasted your lips, but my kiss was all in vain

I heard a child's laughter, and I felt so very old
I cried a lonely tear from deep within my soul

I saw a falling star, but its wishes were all gone
I felt your touch, but it felt so withdrawn

I smelled a rose, but its fragrance was bittersweet
I felt the sun, but the sunshine had no heat

I looked at the stars, but I did not see the sky
I saw a clown, but instead he made me cry

I saw the sun rise, but, yet, there was no dawn
I heard a song, but the music and lyrics were gone

I saw the sun set, but I did not see the day
I held you so close to me, but you pushed me away

I said a prayer, but it was never heard
I said, "I love you," ...but it was only words
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«Reply #18 on: January 21, 2006, 05:11:43 PM »
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Wow,kya baat hai,last two lines r really gr8.
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«Reply #19 on: January 21, 2006, 05:18:34 PM »
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Gaalo pe aasuo ki lakir ban gayi..
kabhi soocha nehi tha aaisi takdir ban gayi..

hamne to firayi ret pe yu hi ungliya,
gour se dekha to aapki tasvir ban gayi ..
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«Reply #20 on: January 23, 2006, 05:28:36 PM »
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JAB DIL NE KUCH KEHNA CHAHA SHABD NA MILE

JAB ZUBAN NE KUCH KEHNA CHAHA DASTAAN NA MILI

AISA NAHI KI ISS JAHAAN ME HUME MOHABAT NAHI MILTI

BAS JAHA HUM  CHAHTE HAI WAHA NAHI MILTI....
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«Reply #21 on: January 23, 2006, 05:43:39 PM »
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Quote from: "mili_genie"
kuch udaas kuch khamosh
kuch bebas see lakeerien mere haath ki
dhoondti rehti/(rehta) hoon aksar
in lakeeron mien
ek lakeer tere naam ki
kuch maloom bhi hey
kuch dil bhi janta hey
ke in lakeeron mien koi lakeer nahi he tere naam ki
phir bhi naa jane kion
dhondta rehta hoon
aksar ek lakeer tere naam ki
ek lakeer tere naam ki....


for special someone....... where r you???... i m waiting for you??
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«Reply #22 on: January 23, 2006, 07:41:59 PM »
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Puzzled !
tanha ji no comments...tongue3
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tanhachand
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«Reply #23 on: January 24, 2006, 04:44:35 PM »
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correction ki thi kutch aapke poem main................check karo .........kya correction ki hoon ........................
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«Reply #24 on: January 24, 2006, 05:10:54 PM »
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hmmm i knew... what's the correction u have done ...  :oops: chor pakda gaya... sorry....  Puzzled !
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«Reply #25 on: January 24, 2006, 06:00:57 PM »
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arre nahi baba .................its ok .............mujhe toh hasi aa rahi thi .................tum bhi haso ................................


bye tc


waise kiska intezar hai aapko .........abhi tak wo aai nahi ................??/////
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«Reply #26 on: January 24, 2006, 11:18:45 PM »
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haath mein uske naam ki lakeer banayi
banakar usse mein samayi
samakar usse apni zindagi banayi
apni zindagi banakar usse apna banaya
apna banakar usse ne phir kardia paraya!!!
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«Reply #27 on: January 25, 2006, 02:30:37 AM »
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ek baar fir hum
khade hain unhi raahon main.....

jahan sochte the hum
pyaa vyaar hoti bakwaas jindagi main.........

abb fir hasii aati hai humko
ki kyoun likh jaate ye sab aisi shayri kitaabono main..............

aksar sochte hain hum
kyoun ho mohabbat unse jo hai hin nahi muqaddar main................

jise paana chaahe hum
wo hin chood jaaye kyoun akela aise raahon main.........

jise apna bana na paaye hum
kiyoun dhoondhe usse apne kismat ke  lakiroono main..........

ye sach hai jaante hain hum
pyar wo nasaha hai jo nahi kisi sharaabon main..............

aaj yahi kehna chaahte hain hum
na jaana unn galiyouno main _jaha  har rishta _ho bhram sa dikhne main.................


ek koshish...........kutch shabd .........ek khyaal or kutch nahi .......................
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«Reply #28 on: January 25, 2006, 09:39:54 PM »
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unse milna chahte hain phir se
yaadoin mein uske khoye rehna chahte hain phir se
usse dil mein basana hai phir se
usse mohabbat karni hai phir se
aur usne dil torna hai phir se!!!
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