Paakeezgi

by @kaash on May 16, 2009, 09:06:01 AM
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aaghaaz-e-safar kahan! kahan khumaari ka kuch anjaam hota hai
musalsal chalti hai ye zehen-o-dil shayri ko barkaraar rakhta hai


aarzoo parastish ki nahi hoti chahaton se khud-b-khud ubharti hai
kalam ka kaghaz se mohabbat ka yun hi besabab parwaan rahta hai


armaan khwaabon ke haqiqat ke har pal me dikhte se hain
machalti shaamon ka dhadakte subahon se dua salaam hota hai


shayar insaa hai par Khuda ke apne paas tabhi pahunchta hai
jab aakhon ki paakeezgi se chamakta uska kalaam hota hai



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«Reply #1 on: May 16, 2009, 09:28:47 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot hi Khoob...aur khaas taur se ye sher:

shayar insaa hai par Khuda ke apne paas tabhi pahunchta hai
jab aakhon ki paakeezgi se chamakta uska kalaam hota hai


Very nice creation !
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«Reply #2 on: May 16, 2009, 09:36:06 AM »
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very very nice kaash ji and celmira ji.
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«Reply #3 on: May 16, 2009, 05:38:33 PM »
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aaghaaz-e-safar kahan! kahan khumaari ka kuch anjaam hota hai
musalsal chalti hai ye zehen-o-dil shayri ko barkaraar rakhta hai


aarzoo parastish ki nahi hoti chahaton se khud-b-khud ubharti hai
kalam ka kaghaz se mohabbat ka yun hi besabab parwaan rahta hai


armaan khwaabon ke haqiqat ke har pal me dikhte se hain
machalti shaamon ka dhadakte subahon se dua salaam hota hai


shayar insaa hai par Khuda ke apne paas tabhi pahunchta hai
jab aakhon ki paakeezgi se chamakta uska kalaam hota hai


Wah @kaash ji...Wonderful .. Bahut accha likha hai aapne  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: May 16, 2009, 05:47:09 PM »
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Wow Kaash Bhai.. Bahut Hi Khubsoorat Peshkash hai.. Khaas kar Lafzon Ko Behad Khubsoorati si Piroya hai aapne.. Applause Applause

Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooooooooooooooooooooob.. Applause


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«Reply #5 on: May 16, 2009, 06:12:50 PM »
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lovely description of heart feelings @kaash
acha ye @ kyu lagae or muje words kuch samja nahi jesa pakezgi parwan meaning pls
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«Reply #6 on: May 16, 2009, 06:15:53 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Kaashji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: May 16, 2009, 06:36:27 PM »
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bahut khoob kaash ji....bahut khoob...
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«Reply #8 on: May 16, 2009, 10:06:49 PM »
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Akaash, bahtreen kalambandi ki hai, ishq ka ek aur hi pehlu dkha diya...
akhri do sitron ka khulasa de saken to mehrbani hogi...
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«Reply #9 on: May 17, 2009, 07:35:08 AM »
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Really very lovely words..

bahut hi masoomiyat se piroya hia aapne har lafz ko aur ek khoobsurat nagme ki mala ban gayi..

Keep writing ... Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: May 18, 2009, 04:20:42 AM »
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai Kaash ji ... bahoot khoob!!!
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«Reply #11 on: May 26, 2009, 02:30:34 AM »
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Bahut pasand aayee Kaash Ji
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