~~:Pachhta Rahi hoon:~~!!

by chitra on March 18, 2006, 02:00:05 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 18, 2006, 04:32:55 PM »
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OK Shayar ji.....

apke liye muskuraana kya khul ke hans lete hai :lol:  :lol:
aap ke saath khushiyo ke chand pal jee lete hai.. :lol:  :lol:

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«Reply #16 on: March 18, 2006, 04:37:38 PM »
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:D  :D ..good to see such wonderful jugalbandhi's going on in shayari..Please keep it on friends....Hum chale apne manzil k talash mein..
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chitra
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«Reply #17 on: March 18, 2006, 04:43:48 PM »
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O' janaab rukiye aap kuchh bhule ja rahe hai
manzil to yahaa hai aap galat raste jaa rahe hai
yakeen kijiye hum sach kah rahe hai
warna dekh lijiye apki manzil ke kareeb hi rah rahe hai....
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Meena is back
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«Reply #18 on: March 18, 2006, 05:14:06 PM »
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wah wah bohot ache chitra ji...apki poem to bohot achi hai!!
baki sab dosto ne bhi bohot acha likha!!


ayenge woh zaroor, milega tume pyar bhi,
mohabbat me milti hai tapad aur thoda sa karar bhi,
jo teri kismat me hoga woh tujhe milega zaroor,
kuch rakh Khuda pe barosa kuch kar intezaar bhi!!

 :D
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«Reply #19 on: March 18, 2006, 06:52:26 PM »
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Tujhse wafa ki yu sajaa pa rahi hoon
wajood se khud ke door ja rahi hoon

Tham gya hai safar meri zindgee ka
kaunsa ye rasta hai  main kanha ja rahi hoon

Pal jo tere saath gujare kanhi chhutt gye
ab kin yaado mein dil ko uljhaye ja rahi hoon

Hoga to wo bhi baichen meri tarha
kaise hai ye khyaal ke main khoye ja rahi hoon

kasm dee hai tune Na bahaaoo ashk
kyon tod ke ise ashko ko chhalkaye ja rahi hoon

kho gayee manzile nishaan bhi nahi un raho ka
bojhil saanso se kyun naam tera liye jaa rahi hoo

Tadpaati hai tanhaai mujhe jalaati hai jee ko
kya raaz hai tanhaa mafilo ko sajaaye ja rahi hoon

Nahi jaan payega "SUJEET"  tu dard mera
kya karu ..tere naam har sher kiye ja rahi hoon

Le liya aaj naam tera bhari mahfil mein
Rusawaa kar mohbbat ko JAAN bahoot pachhta rahi hoon

Aa jaaoo na .....!!!


Chitra

Bahut he khoobsurat ! And i mean it

Nikki, Meena aur Gaurav

Aap sab ne bhi bahut achcha likha aur chitra ka khoob saath diya !

Gesu meri tarah sirf wah wah kar ke chali gayi :D

Rajbir
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BeNam
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«Reply #20 on: March 18, 2006, 10:31:40 PM »
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Wow Bravo, just too much, kya dard hai Chitra, Hai sseriously your heart bleeds, and the pain is sensed in your shayari!

Kisika dard suna, hum apana gum bhul gaye,
Hai ishq main ghayal bahot benam, Akele tum nahi,
Ahen suni, sathi gumon ke aur bhi mil gaye!

--BENAM---
Dard se rishta ai ishq tera, kuchh aisa hai gahera,
Tere bidayi ke baad, sath nibhane yahi toh hai thahera!
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«Reply #21 on: March 19, 2006, 12:20:19 AM »
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milegi tumhe wo, jisse tumne chaha
ayegi wo zaroor, jisse umaar bhar tumne chaha
woh tumse itni chahat tu zaroor karegi
ke tumen bi na ki hogi itni chahat
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«Reply #22 on: March 19, 2006, 03:32:15 AM »
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Bahut khoob BeNam bhai and Anjani...............

Aye Husn na pachta Tu bas Mahobbat kaiye jaaa.......
Jo milta hai silaa is Dunia se tu bas liye jaaa.....
Yeh mahobbat ki raah itni asaan na ho hogi.....
Bhale hee apni Khushian Dard ke badle diye jaaa.....
Apna har Zakhm aansuon se siye jaaa.......
Bas tu Pyar kar aur Pyar kiye jaaa............!!!!!!!!!!!
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chitra
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«Reply #23 on: March 19, 2006, 05:01:13 AM »
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Rajbir ji......meena ji.......shayar dildaar ji......anjani ji.....BAdnaam shayar ji.....!!!!!!!!!!!!

 Usual Smile  Usual Smile  Usual Smile

Apka saath Pakar to gum pichhe rah gya
Is doobti kasti ko naya kinara mil gya.!!
 :D  :D  :D

Thanks to all FRIENDS....!!
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«Reply #24 on: March 19, 2006, 05:14:48 AM »
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Badnaam_shayar ji......!

Apna liya har gum mohbbat mein jo usne diya
zahar jo judai ke mila  use sukun se piya
jante hai aasan nahi mohbbat ki raah
Tabhi to pyar ka har baar pyar se intzaar kiya
 
Ye isqh hai ajeeb cheez zazbaato ka ye haal kar
diya
aaj Apko kamaal SHAYAR aur BADNAAM mujhe kar diye
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«Reply #25 on: March 19, 2006, 05:31:58 AM »
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bahoot khoob chitra!!!! good job Meena, Anjani, BeNam and Badnaam Shayar ji!!!

jo intzaar de, wo payaar nahi
jo ashaq de, wo lata kabhi bahaar nahi
mana mushkil hai, zazbaato ko rokna
na kar jhoothi umind, na apni zind nu rol na!!!


sahi kaha tha veer ji.... yah hindi mai punjabi shuru ho gai  sad5
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chitra
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«Reply #26 on: March 19, 2006, 05:52:22 AM »
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Oye...........Punjabi kudiye..!! :wink:

Gal teri mere dil nu bahoot bhayi hai....!
bhasa di koi gal nahi tune mujhme lassi di jaan kar di...!! :D  :D
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«Reply #27 on: March 19, 2006, 05:52:46 AM »
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Badnaam_shayar ji......!

Apna liya har gum mohbbat mein jo usne diya
zahar jo judai ke mila  use sukun se piya
jante hai aasan nahi mohbbat ki raah
Tabhi to pyar ka har baar pyar se intzaar kiya
 
Ye isqh hai ajeeb cheez zazbaato ka ye haal kar
diya
aaj Apko kamaal SHAYAR aur BADNAAM mujhe kar diye


Badnaam Shakhsiyat ho par Mahobbat ko na hone dena.......
Jo bhi mile Mahobbat ki Raah pe use kabhi apne juda na hone dena.....!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #28 on: March 19, 2006, 05:59:59 AM »
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thanks Chitra, maine to ajj Gujrati mai bhi likh dala... ab Allah MAlik hai Yoindia ka Usual Smile
Jalad hi Bengali bhi sikhane wali hu... hun Rub meri khair kare tongue3

Good Reply BS ji!!!
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chitra
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«Reply #29 on: March 19, 2006, 06:14:31 AM »
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Badnaam shayar ji...!

Badnaam na ho mohbbat apni
Ke khamoshi ko jahan mien utar lete hai

mila ke palko ko ashko ko chhipa lwete hai
par kya kare
ye YOINDIA humse raaz_e_mohbbat likhwa dete hai
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