Palken Teri Rahon May...

by Iqtedar on May 28, 2013, 02:30:25 PM
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Palken Teri Rahon May Bichane Laga Hoon Main
Aankhon May Tera Aks Sajane Laga Hoon Main

Is Zindagi Ko Ji Nahin Paonga Tere Bin
Ae Jaan Tujhko Saans Banane Laga Hoon Main

Leta Hoon Tera Naam To Chalta Hai Dil Mera
Dhadkan Bhi Ab Tujhi Ko Banane Laga Hoon Main

Ab Tujhse Hi Hai Shaam, Subha, Raat, Dopaher
Yaadon Se Teri Din Ye Bitane Laga Hoon Main

Written by Syed Iqtedar Hussain.
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«Reply #1 on: May 28, 2013, 02:40:35 PM »
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Nice One icon_flower
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«Reply #2 on: May 28, 2013, 03:48:34 PM »
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Iqtedaar Sahaab Aadaab...!


Bahut khoob janab badi achchi kalaam kahi hai.. behad khoobsurat aur pyaare ahsaas O khayaal rahe.. Usual Smile


Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye...... Aate rahiye....
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: May 28, 2013, 03:52:16 PM »
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ahchi kosish hai saaheb, yuNhi likhte rahiye...!!
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«Reply #4 on: May 28, 2013, 05:26:16 PM »
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Shukriya - bas meri koshish hoti hai ke kuch likhon so likh leta hoon - waese aap logon ke aagey 'Main To Kuch Bhi Nahi' - bas aap logon ka saath hota hai so bada acha lagta hai...
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«Reply #5 on: May 28, 2013, 05:27:14 PM »
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nice lines koshiish aise hi karte raha kijiye likhte raha kijiye
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«Reply #6 on: May 28, 2013, 05:58:11 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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bohat khoob,..........bohat c daad,......
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«Reply #8 on: May 28, 2013, 06:47:58 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: May 28, 2013, 07:22:31 PM »
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achcha likhe ho... likhte rahiye... dheron daad...
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Beautiful
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Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #12 on: May 28, 2013, 08:33:47 PM »
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Aap sabko dheron salaam - thanks for appreciation - koshish karonga ke kucn na kuch likhta rahon.... thanks again to all - iqtedar.
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