"panaho.n mai apni"

by aaina on June 23, 2009, 10:48:48 AM
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panaho.n mai apni hai tukho chupana
tujhay apne dil ki hai raani banana

baharo.n ke mousam nhi cahiyen ab
tu gul banke dil mai mere muskurana

jo saansain tumhari theen ab hain humari
ye raaz dheere se hai tum ko batana

Main tum bina adhura ek khwaab hoon
Tujhe apni palkon pe hai mujhko sajana

Tu apni nigaho.n mai mujhko basa lai
Kisi aur baam par nhi hai utarna
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«Reply #1 on: June 23, 2009, 11:03:51 AM »
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very nice.
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«Reply #2 on: June 23, 2009, 11:05:50 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohut khoob likha hai aapne Aslam ji..G88 lines...
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«Reply #3 on: June 23, 2009, 11:13:53 AM »
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VERY GOOD AAINA G. hello2
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«Reply #4 on: June 23, 2009, 01:27:09 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on June 23, 2009, 11:05:50 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohut khoob likha hai aapne Aslam ji..G88 lines...

thnxxxxx honeyrose ji
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«Reply #5 on: June 23, 2009, 01:32:02 PM »
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Quote from: M YASIR A on June 23, 2009, 11:13:53 AM
VERY GOOD AAINA G. hello2

thnxxxx os much yasir sahab
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«Reply #6 on: June 23, 2009, 06:53:36 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on June 23, 2009, 10:48:48 AM
panaho.n mai apni hai tukho chupana
tujhay apne dil ki hai raani banana

baharo.n ke mousam nhi cahiyen ab
tu gul banke dil mai mere muskurana

jo saansain tumhari theen ab hain humari
ye raaz dheere se hai tum ko batana

Main tum bina adhura ek khwaab hoon
Tujhe apni palkon pe hai mujhko sajana

Tu apni nigaho.n mai mujhko basa lai
Kisi aur baam par nhi hai utarna


Beautiful.....bohiot hi khoobsurat ghazal pesh ki hai aapne Aslam Ji..Very sweet !
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«Reply #7 on: June 23, 2009, 07:18:26 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on June 23, 2009, 10:48:48 AM
panaho.n mai apni hai tukho chupana
tujhay apne dil ki hai raani banana

baharo.n ke mousam nhi cahiyen ab
tu gul banke dil mai mere muskurana


Bohot khoob!! achha kalaam hai or ye do shear to bohot hi umda hai aslam ji...
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«Reply #8 on: June 23, 2009, 10:08:49 PM »
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Wah wah Aslam ji,beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: June 23, 2009, 10:11:53 PM »
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Lajawaab peshkash... Applause
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aaina
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«Reply #10 on: June 25, 2009, 08:50:14 PM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on June 23, 2009, 07:18:26 PM
Bohot khoob!! achha kalaam hai or ye do shear to bohot hi umda hai aslam ji...

bhut shukriya sayyid randeri sahab is hosla afzaai ke liyn
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«Reply #11 on: June 25, 2009, 08:50:45 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on June 23, 2009, 10:08:49 PM
Wah wah Aslam ji,beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thnxxxx madhu
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«Reply #12 on: June 25, 2009, 08:51:33 PM »
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Quote from: superspawn10 on June 23, 2009, 10:11:53 PM
Lajawaab peshkash... Applause

bhut bhut shukriya superspawn
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«Reply #13 on: June 25, 2009, 08:52:30 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 23, 2009, 06:53:36 PM
Beautiful.....bohiot hi khoobsurat ghazal pesh ki hai aapne Aslam Ji..Very sweet !

thnxxxxx so much talat
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