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«Reply #15 on: June 18, 2006, 05:38:06 AM » |
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thanx aryaan ji................
chehre se yu pallu ko hataya na kijiye
ki chand ko din mai dekhne ki aadat nahi hai
jab dekhta hu gaur se hasee. chehre ko tere
puchta hu khuda se kahi aaj kayamat to nahi hai
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«Reply #16 on: June 18, 2006, 06:19:15 AM » |
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chehre se hati chilman toh kayamat hogi
jab milangi nazare.n to seene mein halchal hogi
tham -tham ke chalangi saanse teri meri .
aaj apne milan ki woh suhani ghari hogi
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #17 on: June 18, 2006, 06:27:28 AM » |
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woh dekhte hai chilman se to lagta hai kuch aise
badal ki aaut se chand jhakta ho jaise
unke husn-e-rang ki tapish uthi hai yu
lehro ka karwan sahil pe theharta ho jaise
unki ek nazar hi dil mai yu utar gayi hai
sadiyo se yu hi mujhko woh dekhta ho jaise.
...............@fahi@...............
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ranjana
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«Reply #18 on: June 18, 2006, 06:40:46 AM » |
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superbbbbbbbbb.......bahut sundar.....  ek shaks ka sapna raha meri aanhko mein ek khawab sa koi dil mein palata raha aaj jab se unse mulaqat ho gayi yun hi achanak toh mere tasvur mein unka akas dhalne laga karte rehe woh na jaane baate kya kya mera dil unki bahoo.n mein samaane ko karta raha |
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«Reply #19 on: June 18, 2006, 06:54:19 AM » |
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khubsurati se dhala hai aapne lafzo ko ,very nice...............
mere baaton main hardam kho si jati hai woh kyun
meri har aah per gumsum ho jati hai woh kyun
gar pyar hai use bhi mujhse phir ye fasle kaise
mujhse milte hi sharmake chali jati hai woh kyun.
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«Reply #20 on: June 18, 2006, 07:06:14 AM » |
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gud one........
mohabbat mein nigaahe sab bolti hain
mere dil ke raaz tujh per yeh kholti hain
ek haya si chhaa jaati hai mere rukhsaaro.n per sanam
jab teri nigaahe tere dil ki jubaan bolti hain
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«Reply #21 on: June 18, 2006, 03:52:52 PM » |
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nice.............
teri nigaho ki shararat ko samjha hai maine
ki lafzo ko aankhon se bayan hum bhi karte hai
teri har khusi aur gum se vasta hai mera sanjna
ki tumhari hi saanso se hum bhi jiya karte hai.
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«Reply #22 on: June 18, 2006, 05:01:21 PM » |
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teri saanso mein Sanjana ki rawani rahe
tere lafazo mein uski kahaani rahe
rehe woh saath tere har dam aise
jaise ki geeto mein dhun suhahni rahe
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«Reply #23 on: June 19, 2006, 05:44:57 AM » |
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ameen!
sukriya............
teri khusiyo ka salamat rahe karvan,gum ko tere mile na manzil
har pal khus rahe tu aey zindagi ,ho tujhe tamannay-e-jaha hasil
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«Reply #24 on: June 19, 2006, 06:42:57 AM » |
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teri ki hue duao.n ke sile ab hamko milne lage hain
bezaar ,beqarar rehte they pehle ab hans ke har gum ko sehne lage hain
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«Reply #25 on: June 19, 2006, 03:41:06 PM » |
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meri duao ka kuch hua yu asar hai
mehakti hai uski shab,khilti sehar hai
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«Reply #26 on: June 19, 2006, 04:26:01 PM » |
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Gud job Ranju and Fahi
Chand ka noor parde me chupaya nahi jaa sakta......
JO basa ho Dil me hoor use Nazron ke saamne laya nahi jaa sakta.....
Na jaane kis Kashmakash me khuda ne banayi yeh Mahobbat.....
Jo kehta hai yeh Dil-e-Nadaan use bhi toh Nakaara nahi jaa sakta......
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«Reply #27 on: June 19, 2006, 04:39:21 PM » |
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gud both of u................
likhta hai mera dil jaane kya kya
jab ek chahera meri aankho mein aa jaata hai
dil rehata bas uske pass hi ,aur baate uski doharta hai
lab mere rehte hain khamosh,per dil na jaane kya kya keh jaata hai!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #28 on: June 19, 2006, 04:47:44 PM » |
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Wah Ranju...Chehre ki baat aa gayi
Husn hai Parde me na jaane woh Chehra kiska hai.....
Liya jo Naam tune abhi Dil hee Dil me....Us par Sehra kiska hai.....
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«Reply #29 on: June 19, 2006, 04:50:50 PM » |
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nice gaurav bhai.............
duao ne bhi unse hai ye fariyaad ki
utarne do dua ko,apne chand se chere per
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