parde main chaand..........

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«Reply #45 on: June 21, 2006, 12:18:10 PM »
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nice 1.........
     
   aa jata hai noor uske chehre se meri dar pe
   raat hoti hai madhosh ,uske aane ki khabar se
   mere sanam ko chand samajhna na aey zamane
      ki dekhte hai chand ko sab raaton mai apne ghar se

.............@fahi@..............
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sukriya tabassum ji .........vety nice indeed..........

 humne lakh chipana chaha per chipaya na ja saka
 julpho se dil ko sambhala per bachaya na ja saka
 unke chand se chere ko dekhe bina aata nahi hai chain
 unse door to humne jana chaha per jaya na saka.

..................@fahi@...................


thanks fahee
chaand pe badal hote hi hain thoda intezar karo
barish ka ye mausam bhi hai itna to bas dhyan karo
chaand tumhara gar hai tumhara phir bechaini kiske liye
vo bhi door hai vo rota hai uska bhi to dhyan karo
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #46 on: June 21, 2006, 12:23:07 PM »
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very gud ranjana ji.............

uski kashish ne mujhe raat bhar sone na diya sanson ki tez rafataar ko mand hone na diya
dil to keh raha tha uski bahon mai kho jau aaj
per aankhon ko uske husn ne band hone na diya

..................@fahi@.....................
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«Reply #47 on: June 21, 2006, 12:32:23 PM »
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chamakate chand ke saath woh mujhe yaad aaye
hamko unke saath apne beetaye  pyaar ke pal yaad aye
har phool khil ke kehta  raha ki sambhal jaao  ki woh aaye
jab shokh si nazaro se aapne dekha hamko jee bhar ke
hamko mohabbat mein tumse kiye gaye sare vaade yaad aaye
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«Reply #48 on: June 21, 2006, 12:37:56 PM »
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yu laga jaise ki badlo ne hai chand ko dhak liya
     jab usne chipaya khudko haya ke parde mai.

...................@fahi@...................
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«Reply #49 on: June 21, 2006, 01:27:40 PM »
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nice 1.........
     
   aa jata hai noor uske chere se meri dar pe
   raat hoti hai madhosh ,uske aane ki khabar se
   mere sanam ko chand samajhna na aey zamane
      ki dekhte hai chand ko sab raaton mai apne ghar se

.............@fahi@..............
Quote from: "tabassum shakeel"
Quote from: "purani_jeans_aur_guitar"
sukriya tabassum ji .........vety nice indeed..........

 humne lakh chipana chaha per chipaya na ja saka
 julpho se dil ko sambhala per bachaya na ja saka
 unke chand se chere ko dekhe bina aata nahi hai chain
 unse door to humne jana chaha per jaya na saka.

..................@fahi@...................


thanks fahee
chaand pe badal hote hi hain thoda intezar karo
barish ka ye mausam bhi hai itna to bas dhyan karo
chaand tumhara gar hai tumhara phir bechaini kiske liye
vo bhi door hai vo rota hai uska bhi to dhyan karo


bahut khoob fahee

arz kiya hai
                              mera mehboob to ik badal hai
                              chhaya hai yun mere vajood pe vo
                              lekin vo kyun thahar nahi jaata
                              har ghadi kyun vo mere sath nahi
                              uski awargi ka shikwa hai
                              par vahi cheez dil ko bhai thi
                              mast badal sa uska ud jana
                              pal me phir aake mujh pe chha jaana
                              aur ik intezar de jaana
                              ban chuka hai vo zindagi meri
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«Reply #50 on: June 21, 2006, 01:38:13 PM »
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very nice tabassum ji ............sadgi mai jo baat hai .kahi aur nahi

   mere mehboob ne mujhko keh diya badal
    ab usko baahon mai chipakar rakh lunga
   zamane ko na karne dunga mai uska deedar pal bhar bhi
   use is tarah sine se laga kar rakh lunga.
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«Reply #51 on: June 21, 2006, 02:08:05 PM »
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thanx fahi aur bahut khoob likha hai aapne bhi

main jo aankhon me teri khwab hun bankar rahti
                              aaj tu jaan le maine bhi tujhe chaha hai
                              meri aakhon ki kisi kajal ki zarurat kab hai
                              ye teri yaad se sharma ke jo jhuk jaati hain
                              mere haathon me jaane kyun na rachati hai hina
                              ke tere haathon ki garmi se ye hain surkh bahut
                              maine aanchal bhi to chere pe bar bar dala
                              par tujhe dekh ke ud jata hai baadal ki tarah
                              mere hamdam ye bata konsa singar karun
                              mujhko milne ki hai jaldi kya intezaar karun
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«Reply #52 on: June 22, 2006, 02:21:41 AM »
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nice both of u...........

tujhe  mein khoye -khoye rehna accha lagta hai
chupke chupke tujhse pyaar karna accha lagta hai
jab kahi aata hai naam tumhara,sunana usko aacha lagta hai
jab kehte ho ki hai tumhe bhi hai  mujhse pyaar toh accha lagata hai
chand ki baate mujhse karna aur fir us per likhna accha lagta hai
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«Reply #53 on: June 22, 2006, 06:00:20 AM »
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bahut khoob ranju
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #54 on: June 22, 2006, 06:23:01 AM »
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very nice tabassum ji.............

   nikal rahe hai aaj dil ke armaan tere chehra dekhne ke baad
  chand bhi hai badal mai jaa chipa tere chehra dekhne ke baad

  ud rahi hai khusboo fizao mai behkar pyar ki
 kudrat bhi maan rahi hai  ahsaan tera chehra dekhne ke baad

  tere chand se chehre per likhna sadgi se maine chaha
 per lafzo bhi karne lage hai bagawat tera chehra dekhne ke baad.

.................@fahi@..........................
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«Reply #55 on: June 22, 2006, 06:37:25 AM »
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thanx fahi aur bahut achcha likhte  hain aap  zara jawab likhna mushkil  rahta hai ji koshish karti hun phir se

ek nazar vo teri dil me teer si jaaker chubhti hai
bin singaar main saj jaati hun aankh gulabi rahti hai

sari khushboo tujh se hai aur sari rangat teri hai
chaand bhi tu baadal bhi tu hai teri nazar bas meri hai
tum likho na ham par kuchh bhi aankhon me hi rahne do
sab na padhen hamko aur tumko itni chaah bas meri hai
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«Reply #56 on: June 22, 2006, 07:06:21 AM »
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bahut hi sunder reply hai ...........aaur aap kehte hai aapko likhna nahi aata.

   YE ruki si sansein.......
        tarsi nigahein........
        tadapta dil...........
        meethi yadein.........
 
      sab tere wajood mai gum ho chuki hai
       sab teri dhadkan mai kahi kho chuki hai

    MERA raato ko jagna.......
             chand ko dekhna......
             sitaare ginkar.........
             tanha tadapna........
 
        tere husn ki justzoo se hai
        tujhe paane ki aarzoo se hai

 AKSAR TERI khuli julphein.......
                    jhuki aankhein.......
                    tapte honth..........
                    shokh aadaye.........

     mujhe mohabbat ke nashe mai choor karti hai
     tere  husn-e-izhaar ko majboor karti hai
                 
...............@fahi@..................
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«Reply #57 on: June 22, 2006, 07:08:13 AM »
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bahut khub ........tabassum and fahi .........bahut sunder ..... Usual Smile
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«Reply #58 on: June 22, 2006, 07:15:41 AM »
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thanx ranju
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«Reply #59 on: June 22, 2006, 07:24:43 AM »
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thanx  fahi aur bahut khoob aapne likha hai but  u r being more difficult to answer ........let me try...

meri aankhen jhuki si hain  ki inme tum jo rahte ho
ye jane kya hai jo tum na kah  kar bhi kahte ho
inhe aankhon me rakhlun to ye aankhen jhuk si jaati hain
ye dil me rakh chuki hun dil pareshan hai usi din se
tumhi kahdo tumhari chahten kya chahtin mujhse
likho  na ye sabhi ab tum ki dil ki dil me tum rakhlo
ki phir na ham se tum kahna ki aankhen kyun jhuki si hain
tumhari chahten inme kahin koi dekh lega to...........
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