patta patta naram

by @kaash on March 07, 2009, 11:41:10 AM
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lahja hai aisa jaise mahka chaman
baaten hain aisi! vafaon ka karam

justaju vo kaisi jise chahna pade
aarzoo ka din hi shaam ka vaham

raah-e-ulfat par ibadat ke phool
nazuk hain vo,patta patta naram


khumaari ki beqaraari yehi chahti hai
lazzat me har khyaal,na rakhna bharam


-KAASH-
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«Reply #1 on: March 07, 2009, 01:23:29 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause

Bohot Khoob Kaash Ji
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«Reply #2 on: March 07, 2009, 01:24:54 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on March 07, 2009, 11:41:10 AM


lahja hai aisa jaise mahka chaman
baaten hain aisi! vafaon ka karam

justaju vo kaisi jise chahna pade
aarzoo ka din hi shaam ka vaham

raah-e-ulfat par ibadat ke phool
nazuk hain vo,patta patta naram


khumaari ki beqaraari yehi chahti hai
lazzat me har khyaal,na rakhna bharam


-KAASH-


bhut khoob kaash ji...........jawab nhi khaas tour pe ghazal ka teesra shair bhut khoob kaha hai...........very nice
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«Reply #3 on: March 07, 2009, 01:39:39 PM »
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Very nice creation Kaash ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 07, 2009, 07:22:11 PM »
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wah sir bahot khoob
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«Reply #5 on: March 07, 2009, 10:10:07 PM »
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Bahut Khooh Kaash Ji
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«Reply #6 on: April 25, 2009, 06:27:31 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on March 07, 2009, 11:41:10 AM


lahja hai aisa jaise mahka chaman
baaten hain aisi! vafaon ka karam

justaju vo kaisi jise chahna pade
aarzoo ka din hi shaam ka vaham

raah-e-ulfat par ibadat ke phool
nazuk hain vo,patta patta naram


khumaari ki beqaraari yehi chahti hai
lazzat me har khyaal,na rakhna bharam


-KAASH-


Kaash Ji.. Bahut hi Pyaare Ehasaas Likhe Hain.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #7 on: October 08, 2009, 11:24:46 AM »
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Wah bahut bahut khoob Kaash ji very beautiful and mindblowing creation.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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