Pawan Kar Rahi Athhkheliyein.....Koyal

by KOYAL46 on December 21, 2010, 10:00:11 AM
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Lo pawan bhee kar rahi athhkheliyein
Khilee-khilee aaj meri mann kaliyein

Neeli-peeli rang-rangilee
Kuchh madmaati,kuchh sharmaati
Komal sunder sukhad rasilee
Teetlee si wo cham-chamkilee

Mann bagiya kee hai wo laadaliyein
Khilee-khilee aaj meri mann kaliyein

Aavo aavo mat sharmaavo
Mann apne ko n bharmaavo
Mast-mast aaj tum muskavo
Yovan ki ab chhata dekhavo

Ban kar roop-rang kee Dulhanniya
Khilee-khilee aaj meri mann kaliyein
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«Reply #1 on: December 21, 2010, 11:28:15 AM »
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wow koyal....
very nice lines.....
kya baat hai aaj badi khush lag rahi ho...
accha laga tumhe is tarah dekh ke...
bhagwan kare tum isi tarah hasti muskarati raho..
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«Reply #2 on: December 21, 2010, 12:05:39 PM »
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aye haye---
kheele kheele mann kaliyan
umangon tarangon ki banaye ladiyan
rangbirangi phoolon ki
samet lo saari pankhudiyan...
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bahut hi pyara sa masti se bharpoor kavita..Koyal ji.
superb --maza aa gaya ji.
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«Reply #3 on: December 21, 2010, 12:23:45 PM »
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Lo pawan bhee kar rahi athhkheliyein
Khilee-khilee aaj meri mann kaliyein

Neeli-peeli rang-rangilee
Kuchh madmaati,kuchh sharmaati
Komal sunder sukhad rasilee
Teetlee si wo cham-chamkilee

Mann bagiya kee hai wo laadaliyein
Khilee-khilee aaj meri mann kaliyein

Aavo aavo mat sharmaavo
Mann apne ko n bharmaavo
Mast-mast aaj tum muskavo
Yovan ki ab chhata dekhavo

Ban kar roop-rang kee Dulhanniya
Khilee-khilee aaj meri mann kaliyein

kya baat he ......mast mast cute cute wali poetry he ye to........

too good and too sweet........bht aacha likha he koyal ji apne    .........
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«Reply #4 on: December 21, 2010, 04:33:00 PM »
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Nice poem sweetu but it cud b better...
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«Reply #5 on: December 21, 2010, 04:47:47 PM »
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haan Geet-di mein bhi yahi feel kar rahi thee par post karne ki jaldi mai jayada mehnat nahi ki.....

Nice poem sweetu but it cud b better...
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«Reply #6 on: December 21, 2010, 05:02:55 PM »
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haan Geet-di mein bhi yahi feel kar rahi thee par post karne ki jaldi mai jayada mehnat nahi ki.....


No prob next time dhayn rakhna jaldi baazi mein kavita ka asli matlab aksar miss ho jata hai..likhna padhna samjhna then post karna..take care...
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«Reply #7 on: December 22, 2010, 09:48:19 AM »
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Lo pawan bhee kar rahi athhkheliyein
Khilee-khilee aaj meri mann kaliyein

Neeli-peeli rang-rangilee
Kuchh madmaati,kuchh sharmaati
Komal sunder sukhad rasilee
Teetlee si wo cham-chamkilee

Mann bagiya kee hai wo laadaliyein
Khilee-khilee aaj meri mann kaliyein

Aavo aavo mat sharmaavo
Mann apne ko n bharmaavo
Mast-mast aaj tum muskavo
Yovan ki ab chhata dekhavo

Ban kar roop-rang kee Dulhanniya
Khilee-khilee aaj meri mann kaliyein

Bahut Khoob Koyal Ji
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«Reply #8 on: December 22, 2010, 10:00:52 AM »
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hmm koyaliya mast likhela he...

ek bat kahu isme maturity ki kami hai kahin kahin...

could have been better...

aisa mujhe lag raha he...

kuchh galat ho to maaf karna...

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«Reply #9 on: December 22, 2010, 12:42:23 PM »
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aARE TUM BATAAOGE NAHI TOU MEIN KAISE THEEK KARUNGI....
Bataao kahan par aur kyu tumko aysa laga....I want to understand...jaldi bataao

hmm koyaliya mast likhela he...

ek bat kahu isme maturity ki kami hai kahin kahin...

could have been better...

aisa mujhe lag raha he...

kuchh galat ho to maaf karna...


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«Reply #10 on: December 22, 2010, 01:50:05 PM »
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chalo chalo Abhi ji na sahi to ham batate hain kahan kami hai isme--agar aapki izazat ho to..
""kuch to gyan hamara bhi kisi ke kaam aye
            to kya hua jo hum musafire kabra aur aap yoindian shayar kahlaye
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izazat bas itna dijiye ke
      iss pyari si rachna ko tod marod kar kuch khatarnaak banaye
""
hahaha
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«Reply #11 on: December 22, 2010, 01:59:42 PM »
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NAA JI NAA NAHI DETE HUM KISI KO BEEGAADNE KI IZAAJAT....
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«Reply #12 on: December 22, 2010, 02:15:35 PM »
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hamare kabiliyat se kyun darte ho
       ya kahen apni par akadte ho !!
jao ji jao na kahenge ab kuch bhi
       aap to gumaan me rahte ho !!
kaise pata ji aapko zara sa ilm karaiye hume
       bigaad hi denge aapki pyari si rachna ko hum..ye kaise jaante ho!!""
thanx Koyal sahiba
khus rahiye
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«Reply #13 on: December 22, 2010, 02:21:57 PM »
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Aap he ne tou kaha...humne ba-akshar maan liya...
Atishyokti mai keh rahe ho kaise jaan lete hum...

Chalo aaj dekh lete hai ilm aapka bhi hum
Naa gumaan hai naa akad hai bas saadgi hai

Akad tou pehchaan murdo ki hoti hai
Hum tou ek chul-buli si jaan hain...
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«Reply #14 on: December 22, 2010, 02:37:47 PM »
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ahahaha
maza aa gaya
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bas ab aap bhi ranj na khaiye
        hamare mazak ko dil pr na lijiye
humare badbolepan ko chama kijiye
        aur aise shabd nhi hamare pass jo
aapki kavita ko bigaad sake.
thanx
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